I'm in the Prince of Tennis, and I Have a Tennis Minigame

Here's a suggestion: on one hand, you emphasize that the protagonist is a complete tennis novice and inexperienced, but on the other hand, you say he wins the match through skill. Don't you think this description is disjointed and strange? Why not change it to the protagonist winning the match through kendo skills?

Since you've already reached the maximum level in kendo, why are you playing tennis? This is practically a bizarre novel.

The opening was so stupid! Hyotei has reformed, and many first-year students have risen to the top. Why is writing about second and third-year students so stupid? Never played tennis before, and your stats are only 10 points or so? Your serve is supposed to shock the whole stadium? Have you been writing too much fantasy? The way you're showing off is so stupid.

It feels like there's too much emphasis on showing off and too little attention to tennis itself.

The first few chapters were so ridiculous. The protagonist has a cheat code, but he hasn't even taken off yet, and he's already fighting with other people? It's like the protagonist has a way to get rich but doesn't have any money yet, and he goes to a high-end restaurant and orders a bottle of 1982 Lafite? What a disgusting and cliché plot.

The beginning is a bit harsh. His physical abilities are average, but he trains regularly. Why is he supposed to last longer than others? As someone who just transmigrated, he's immediately involved in competitions, then physical training, and yet he's supposed to be better than everyone else? He's written like a robot. Also, from competitions, training, even meals, he's constantly being fawned over.

To be honest, the author's writing is getting increasingly outrageous, with power levels exaggerated to the extreme. Middle school students are practically all professional-level, you know? Look at the later chapters where they say 12-year-old Echizen is already professional-level. What? Why not just make them all top ten in the world?

1. The characters' dialogue is too predictable; the protagonist always leads the conversation, resulting in typical two-dimensional character speech patterns. The author's weakness lies in writing dialogue, yet the entire story is filled with it, making it feel awkward. 2. There are too many exaggerated expressions on the characters' faces.

I don't want to cripple Ryoga, just give him some psychological trauma. This kind of person exists solely to ruin tennis; the key issue is that he doesn't even seem to have any concept of controlling his abilities, misusing them.

The first three chapters are a standard brainless opening, precisely targeting the reader!