I'm in the Prince of Tennis, and I Have a Tennis Minigame

I would like to make a suggestion. On the one hand, you emphasize that the protagonist is still a bad tennis player, and on the other hand, you say that he wins the game with his skills. Don't you think this description is very fragmented and weird? Why not change to the protagonist and win the game with his kendo skills?

Now that you have reached the full level of kendo, what kind of tennis do you play? It's just a weird novel

Isn't it too stupid to write the beginning? The Ice Emperor has reformed, and there are many high-ranking first-year students. It's so stupid to write a second- and third-year student? I've never played tennis before, so the three-dimensional image is like ten o'clock. Your serve shocked the whole audience? You write a lot of fantasy, right? It's so stupid to pretend to be awesome.

It feels like there is too much focus on pretense and neglect of tennis itself.

The first few chapters are too confusing. The protagonist has a cheat, but he hasn't even taken off yet, so he's competing with others? It's like the protagonist has a way to get rich but doesn't have any money yet. How about going to a high-end restaurant and ordering a bottle of Lafite 1982? What a disgusting vulgar routine.

There are some places that are quite toxic at the beginning, and your physical fitness is average, but with daily training, why can you last longer than others? As a person who has just traveled through time, he plays games as soon as he travels through time. After playing, he does physical training. He is even better than others and writes like a robot. Also, there are always people looking up to me from playing games, training, and eating.

To be honest, what the author writes is getting more and more outrageous, and the combat power is exaggerated to the extreme. The average junior high school student is a professional level. Take a look at the professional level written by Echizen at the age of 12. Why, just go to the top ten in the world. There is nothing wrong with at least a professional level to challenge Ishikawa, but everyone who fights Ishikawa It becomes a professional level in one go. You can read the content yourself. If you don't believe me, you will know after reading it. The combat power completely collapses in the later stage. Junior high school students are at a professional level per capita. High school students can't beat anyone except Oni, Byodoin and Ishikawa. They are at a professional level per capita. What other countries are playing?

1. The character dialogue is too easy to guess, and the opponent's words will always be taken away by the protagonist, a typical paper man speaking. The author is weak in writing dialogues. Instead, the whole article is filled with dialogues, which just feels awkward. 2. There are too many characters with too many expressions, and sometimes the writing is very exaggerated. And everyone is training. The world does not revolve around the protagonist. It is impossible for the protagonist to attract everyone's attention no matter what he does. 3. So what if there is a strong newcomer? He was too shocked and it seemed that the strength of the "Ice Emperor" staff was actually low. But it appears again and again that "Hyokuei" is the Kyoto champion. It's so contradictory. Generally speaking, the author's skill design and novel development are quite good, but his hard power is insufficient, his writing skills are not enough, and he still doesn't know how to use strengths and avoid weaknesses.

I don't want to abolish Long Ya, but give him some psychological shadow. This kind of person exists to destroy the sport of tennis. The key is that he himself has no idea of ​​​​controlling his ability, and he can use his ability indiscriminately.

The first three chapters are a standard brain-dead opening, accurately screening readers!