The Day My Childhood Sweetheart Disappeared

The characters in the previous book are quite distinct. Pdd is an idiot and a beautiful singer, an otome with low self-esteem is aloof and happy, a retarded young lady is purely in love with bulls, Hitomi Sakuramiya is a dark and voyeur from a wealthy family, and Ye Shiyu is a terrifying and possessive person. The characters of the little mute and Miko in this book are equally distinct, but Shuoliang destroyed this beauty. I don't know how Crab Sauce was set up in the first place, but to be honest, except for the diary, she has no characteristics of her own that readers can remember. The character is not established. Is it possible to use Ziwei as a selling point of the character? Moreover, heroes are used to save beauties a bit too much, which can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue.

After reading Chapter 2, it's a bit scary for me 😭. I just want to ask if the scary plot behind it is serious. I'm a bit scared.

Summary "The Day Ome Disappeared" skillfully combines the classic settings of Japanese suspense animation (such as "Summer Returns" and "When the Chilling Cicada Cries"), the harem structure of light novels (such as "Monogatari Series") and youthful emotional elements (such as "The Name of the Flower"). It also incorporates the personal creative style of the author Yiweixi, forming a unique narrative mode of "weird world + disappearance of Omei + harem Shura field".

Crab's writing style is really nothing to say 😍😍😍

I gave the monthly pass first. I hope it will look good this time.

The mysterious girl in the shrine has a high status in Snake Marsh Town.

What are you talking about? In short, multiply first.

In Japanese folklore works, people like to call disappearances the gods. The name of the novel, the day when Omei disappeared, could also be called The Day Omei Disappeared?

Crab Guards, assemble!

The mute orphan in the town is running around for his missing best friend Noriko Shimizu.

And why no one sees the character pictures I ran 5555

Qingmei, who traveled through time with Shen Du but disappeared mysteriously, is the girl Shen Du likes

The Princess Cut Wig Sister who claims to be a "supernatural detective" appears in Snakenuma Town Hospital.

The girl who returned to Snake Marsh Town from the city is rumored to be the daughter of an entrepreneur from Snake Marsh Town. Her true identity is unknown.

The mysterious girl hidden in Miko's body likes to eat fruit candies very much

Someone in the pineapple bun next door plagiarized the author's previous book

It is a very interesting novel. Although it is basically a horror and supernatural novel, the author cleverly combines horror with love. The smooth use of jokes is also eye-catching. It does not appear to be abrupt, but makes the book more enjoyable. After the horror, a paragraph of humor is like a dessert after a meal. But the most addictive thing is that on the basis of this kind of love, the horror atmosphere is not affected at all, and the various characters are also vividly written. It is really pleasant to get along with Lao Deng directly. Even later in the plot, I suddenly saw Lao Deng appear, which made me feel relaxed, like I found an oasis among several suns (heroines). From these words, it can be seen that I very much agree with the author's control of writing. If it remains online in the future, I think it will be no problem at all for the last Glory, with a guarantee of two stars.

I saw the latest chapter, no, why does Shuo Liang have to pretend to be Miaomiao? Is pure dazzling depressing? I could have said before that it was because I had to rely on my notebook to pretend to be looking for clues. Why did Yao Zi still put on this pretense when he lost his memory, and why did he still blush after pretending to interact with Yao Zi? The key point is that the little mute can't expose it yet, and he will probably collapse if he exposes his waist. This person just likes to cheat money and likes contemporary dining. I have sacrificed my life to protect you before entering the dungeon, so I will lie to you when I come out. This character makes me a little sick.

The pace is too fast, from the beginning of ecstasy, to the sanatorium, to the unknown ghost palace, there is no time to breathe. Compared with the Lady's Handbook, Fat Snake always handles things carefully before opening a new map and a new copy. The beginning of each new journey is relatively relaxed, and the pressure only comes in the middle and late stages. After the copy of the book Sanatorium, among the female protagonists, one has mild amnesia, one has a misunderstanding because she does not know the life and death of the male protagonist, one is leading the survivors outside, and one is tainted with unknown mysteries. It can be said that all of them have unique skills, only Shenzi is relatively normal. With so many hidden threads surrounding the female protagonist, it was already a mess, and the male protagonist was still haunted by strange things and couldn't speak. . . It would be better to say that under such circumstances, the author was able to write some sweetness in the chapters about the Shura field in the office, which was really awesome, but it was a bit depressing after all. Then after a few short and daily chapters, the protagonist directly opened a new large-scale dungeon with such a large mess of unreadable yarn balls, and along with a lot of new settings stuffed in by a few inexplicable passers-by, I thought. Vomiting blood, "How Weirdness is Born", "A Hot Legendary Guy Is Coming to Resurrection" and "The New Mystery of Red". These new settings gave me the feeling that the story would be unable to stop the car and race all the way to the end. I was very worried about whether I could still eat as much as I said in my acceptance speech. As for the real heroine Miaomiao, every time she encounters something related to her, the plot starts to accelerate. I know that as the main plot, Miaomiao is an unavoidable link, but can it be written more charmingly? The current image is like a female cyber ghost, and even the position is not clear. He's still a riddler, and it's better not to speak. Once he speaks, he digs holes and piles up settings. The goddess-like image only exists in the protagonist's memories. They say Shuoliang District, Shuoliang District is still selling badly, and Miaomiao had a happy family in her previous life. She is suspected of becoming a god in this life. There is no candy in the main plot. I don't know if she is a human or a ghost when I meet her. She is a disaster that will last forever. All the big pits the protagonist encounters seem to be related to her. My impression of her is basically zero. Such a cyber female ghost has to run through from the beginning to the end. She just wants to show her attitude. She doesn't say whether she is still waiting for the protagonist. As soon as there is some news about Miaomiao, the protagonist screams like a chicken. Then the plot accelerates, the wonderful daily chapters disappear, and there are a lot of settings. . The review may be a bit harsh, but there is no doubt that I like this book very much. . I also really hope that the author can write another work of the level of demi-girl. Next, I need to read the book for a few days, and then read it after about thirty chapters, otherwise I will easily forget the settings as I read it. I am afraid that the author will starve to death and give a little reward first. If he writes well later, he will be rewarded heavily.

I know it's a good book without reading it, so I'll take care of it first and then talk about it 🙂

I haven't read it yet. What do you think of this book's lightning protection awareness?

No, the author asked for leave but I didn't ask for leave. Why didn't I read the book when I asked for leave?

Miko is so cute

Is it possible that Sister Crab is a pure lover?

There are a bit too many colloquial expressions, which may be taken into account in shaping the character, but being too colloquial will also affect the reading experience, including swear words (your mother) and Internet slang (666, Thunder). It seems that no matter who you are, you can use some curse words or Internet slang anytime and anywhere, which can sometimes be very funny. The behavior of the characters in some places is also a bit frivolous. For example, the protagonist keeps calling Hase "Nobu" and treats Miko as a fool. Even after getting to know each other and even having a heart-to-heart relationship, there is no change. It is very similar to the stubbornness of a spirited young man - respecting you doesn't make me look cheap. My personal suggestion is to think carefully about the choice of words and sentences in this area, and to reduce colloquial expressions and a large number of Internet slang as much as possible. If these are designed by the author to reflect the character or set the tone of the work, then treat it as if I didn't say it.

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Now that we are killing the AI ​​at the starting point, the monthly ticket rankings for books that do not use AI can actually move up a bit, which is a good thing!

Haha, when I saw this book from the introduction, I thought it was "The Day Syphilis Disappeared" at first glance.

As the title states, I recently went into retreat to take postgraduate entrance exams. I turned off most of the message notifications on my phone, leaving only WeChat and Qidian. People who would send me messages on WeChat were all told not to disturb me. The only notifications that Qidian would make my phone vibrate were the update reminders for this book. Usually it is around 11pm, so I left it on if I wanted to. Sometimes I feel confused after studying all day. , Suddenly saw a starting point icon, which felt quite friendly, but I should have gone to bed at that time, and during the days of preparing for the exam, I did not have time to read a novel, which was too luxurious. Sometimes before going to bed, I thought about the title of the latest chapter, and began to guess what the book was about. I often fell asleep just thinking about it, which was a rare distraction. Although I have only read the first four chapters of this book, and the subject matter is different from Asian Girls and the Agreement, I intuitively believe in the author's strength, and I keep voting for monthly recommendations. Until this afternoon, about ten minutes ago, my phone on the table suddenly vibrated. I thought it was my friends or family asking me for something important. But when I saw it, it turned out that this book had been updated, which suddenly pulled me out of the intense preparation state. I thought to myself: This book is not updated until late at night. The word count has reached over a million words, and I feel excited to think that a wonderful story is beginning to take shape. Fortunately, I have almost forgotten the name of the protagonist of this book, so I endured it and did not choose to open it. What a great temptation. The reason for this irregular update seems to be that the author took a leave of absence? Is the latest chapter a supplement? I'm not sure, but most authors are like this. Maybe they're stuck, maybe they're out of ideas, maybe there's some trouble in life, or of course they're lazy. But what I want to say as a reader is that I hope 🦀 will be updated steadily and create a wonderful story. There will be many silently supportive readers like me waiting for you. (To show support, all current chapters have been ordered, automatic subscriptions have been opened, and monthly votes have been cast) I am a book lover. I like to read a story in one sitting, and I also like to read comments when I read it. I will click on any paragraph that I find interesting. It is really a great reading experience to see one interesting sentence after another left by my friends who are reading. Having said this, I also hope that friends who are following the reading will have fun and leave some witty words. I wish you all well.

After seeing Chapter 86, I can only say that the overall flow is smooth, but the handling of details is confusing. I won't go into details about the small emotional flaws. More specifically, the serious part is the abrupt appearance of the setting of killing weirdos. Okay, recall where is the cornerstone of our worldview in this book? The answer is the five rules provided in the game book. These five rules have shown a kind of transcendent objectivity in all previous plots. They are as firm as truth and form the cornerstone of the narrative. At this time our brain tells us that it is a reliable narrator. But now a piece of information that breaks its rules has caused limitations in the game book. It has changed from a reliable narrator to an unreliable narrator. This is normal. It is a common method to show the limitations of cognition to shape a new world view. But let's take a look at Maya who breaks this solid rule? In other words, does she have the ability to be "fast as truth"? Every good creator knows the truth "show rather than tell", but when this setting appeared, did Maya use her own abilities? No? It's as if an omniscient and omnipotent old man suddenly appeared and told you about this. Is this reliable? You could certainly say that Maya said she would kill the weirdo when she met the protagonist and call it foreshadowing. But ask yourself, is there really some inevitability or possibility that leads that conversation to the outcome that she can really kill Weird? If not, it can hardly be called foreshadowing. We have emphasized the importance of the rules of the game, which are the cornerstone of our understanding of the author's world. Now you've torn down the foundation, leaving an unstable hole without filling it with a new foundation. In order to make this ability to kill monsters available to the author at any time when needed, the author bluntly chose not to write it. Her narrative arrangement is certainly simpler, but the holes in the foundation remain. The reader loses the predictability of the world because the reader does not know what can kill the weird, but the original rule of weird immortality has become invalid. Did you find it? At this point the reader loses the ability to reason about the development of world events. We have just lost an old world, but are unable to recognize the new world. How the plot will develop in the future, and what expectations we should have, these readers have no way of coming up with the answer This is not only a failure in narrative, but also triggers unhappiness in human psychology. Because once human beings discover that their understanding of external things is wrong, they will become anxious and either ignore the facts or establish new methodologies. But now, because of the holes left by the author's intentional narrative backdoor, readers can't build a new worldview at all, and their anxiety will always exist. In the end, they ignore this hole. The flaws are not hidden, but they are a bit big for me