The Mysterious Mirror: From the Start, I Have a Little Green Bottle

You are a bit unfaithful. Your incarnation wants to rebel against your main body.

Personally, I wrote this fanfic because I really like Xuanjian's novels. Before, all the novels I read were pirated, so this book is the only one I have fully ordered. This is also my first time writing an online article, and I may not be very good at it. I will adopt your suggestions and make corrections. In addition, I have to prepare for exams at work, so I don't have enough energy. I will try my best to ensure that it is not too late and not too late.

You can even see a ray of truth, and Xuanzhu will bow when he sees it.

Bring Xuanjian's prison to mortals, and let them experience the atmosphere of Xuanjian's prison. You brought this mortal little black guy to the big prison, and you did it the other way around.

It's a bit of a running story. The best way to write it is to explain the background and motivation in the story and actions. Anyway, I'm writing a fan, so I'll copy it🐔How do you write it?

Why should we change the fate of the Li family🤔

The protagonist currently has four incarnations plus his main body, totaling one character that could be developed, but the author has wasted most of the ink writing about the original plot (the protagonist and his four incarnations have very little connection to the Li family in the original work, yet the Li family is written about chapter by chapter). The author should honestly ask himself, how much of the 50 chapters actually consist of the original plot (content that has no connection to the protagonist and his incarnations)? After reading 50 chapters, I might not even remember the names of the protagonist and his four incarnations, let alone what kind of cultivation path they practice, what kind of energy they subscribe to, or what kind of techniques they use. You're writing fan fiction, not plagiarizing the original work, so stop now. Focus more on your protagonist. (I'm not even asking you to focus on the actual protagonist, you can focus on their avatar too.)

The dialogue between the characters is too naive

Several book friends mentioned the problem of the clone's too strong autonomy, and I have revised the original article.

Wow, your Xuanjian is interfering with Naruto's skills, that's really impressive! 🙂