Cultivation: This Dao Ancestor Is Far Too Cautious

Goudao's text is better if it has more words. You only have 4,000 words a day, so there is no need to give so many scenes to the supporting characters.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel it's okay, but now the fantasy scenes of cultivating immortals are getting bigger and bigger, and many things need to be described. Taking the Qi Lian family as an example, they have a sphere of influence of about a hundred miles, the Foundation-building family has a sphere of influence of a thousand miles, the Jindan influence has a radius of thousands of miles, the Nascent Soul Sect has a hundred thousand miles, and so on. It is not that easy to write a good story now, and innovation is needed

4 Monthly passes, keep up the good work!

No, why not promote your finished book?

In fact, the writing is really okay. The author is too impatient. Only when you have patience can you do well in anything. Isn't it true that Chixin Xuntian was very desperate at the beginning? What does this mean to you? You are already a v5 author. You can't hold on even if you have a little trouble.

It's too little. It's not enough to watch.

There's a story, it's well written, the protagonist has a brain

I haven't seen it yet, is it entering the palace?

Everyone's preferences are different, so I'll tell you how I read Gou Daowen's selected books 1. First, check whether there is anyone selling dog meat over sheep's heads and labeling Gou Daowen as Gou Daowen. In the end, in order to advance the main line, I started various adventures at a low level. This is a huge poison. 2. Look at the chapter table of contents. It's smelly, long and stuck in the realm. No, I read novels for fun, not to see you being stuck in the realm and abusing the protagonist. I haven't built a foundation before it is put on the shelf. Xiaodu, if you find that there are 3 million words and there is no Nascent Soul, just give it a cross 3. Is there a heroine? If there is no heroine, I won't read it Currently, only the book Everlasting is a perfect match, but it's a pity that the author is lazy Dog, he keeps his word. He used to be ranked 5th in Xianxia, but he didn't update it well. Now he updates a few times a month and has so many monthly tickets for him. Author, you think what I said makes sense and you can adopt it. If you don't think it works, it doesn't matter. After all, you are the one who wrote the book. Finally, let's talk about this book. At present, the protagonist's realm is a bit slow. , But it is indeed rather sloppy, with a bit of that flavor, and the female characters also have it. It depends on the subsequent treatment (poor emotional drama is also a huge poison, you can write less, but you can't do without the heroine), the writing style is also sophisticated, to put it harshly, at least v5 author, you will not be any worse if you copy according to the everlasting framework

(Let's polish it and rewrite it again)