Cultivating Immortality in the Ink World

For example, the battle between Han Li and Senior Brother Lu, and the battle between humans and demons in the Fallen Demon Valley. The key is a combination of strength, speed, and defense in combat. However, you need magical artifacts and powerful divine sense. Of course, you must first control the Bixu, like the strategy of surrounding three and releasing one in the Thirty-Six Stratagems. It's about pure power control, or control of rhythm, etc.

I have a small question: why did Liu Ruhai ambush Huang Yaoshi? Wouldn't it have been better if his master had advanced to the Golden Core stage? Having a Golden Core master would have been even better for him; maybe he could even form his own Golden Core with his master's help. So why did he ambush his master? What was his motive? They had no grudge against each other!

I feel like I've been watching a documentary all along, not exciting enough. The writing is good, but I mentioned before that the fight scenes weren't intense enough. I wonder if this would work? Pick a fight scene from Gu Long or Jin Yong's works. They use "High Mountains and Flowing Water," and you could change it to "Sweeping Through a Thousand Armies."

The ending was rushed, but that's good, it saves me from having to wait for updates every day.

The resurrection of Uncle Mo and Aunt Li felt like a mistake; they were completely useless to the plot and were just two burdens. If they had died, their emotional entanglements with Lin Qiuyan, the heroine's love, and her master's hatred would have been somewhat interesting, but now it's all rather dull.

There's a lot of padding in this book. It might have been better if it had been published before *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*, but readers are mostly familiar with this formula now. For the author to continue padding and playing the victim card with this melodramatic, inspirational trope is seriously underestimating the intelligence of today's readers.

It's really good to read, it has a touch of mortal life. I've finished reading it all and am eagerly awaiting updates...

Just venting: From chapter 53 to chapter 67, the protagonist is nowhere to be seen for almost 15 chapters, all for the sake of setting up a setup. 15 Chapters of dedicated fighting. I'm speechless.

I couldn't bear to watch the martial arts contest for marriage part. It's not that writing romance is bad, but the protagonist being favored by various goddesses and experiencing constant jealousy made many of the conflicts feel forced. Three words that stuck with me were "You cheated."

Everyone, please help promote the author!