I’m a Cop, Why’d You Give Me an Esports System?

The plot is okay. The protagonist's plug-in is to detect nearby game players. If you defeat the opponent, you can obtain the opponent's game level in reality. Currently, he has obtained the aiming box in the CSGO game and the bronze-level driving skills in a racing game. And there are no restrictions on the way to defeat. You can rush up to kill someone directly, or you can compete in the toilet, which is very flexible. But I feel that this trick is still not cool enough. The protagonist has so many chapters, and because of his profession, he patrols the streets all day, and it takes so long to meet a few gamers. Is it possible that so few people in the United States like to play games?

I think the first sentence can be changed to: I have discovered three problems as soon as I got the system

If you kill Brother Gua alone, can you cheat?

If you just stay in Cologne and grind at the major, you can't take off directly.

Have you ever been a US police officer? I take some things for granted and write them randomly.

Overall, it's okay. The plot is quite interesting, but the character of the protagonist needs more work. I don't feel that this is a protagonist who has time-traveled into a ten-year-old white child and climbed up from the bottom of an orphanage. It's empty, lacks obsession, lacks social interaction, lacks hobbies, and reads a bit like an unworldly person. The domestic college student who committed the incident directly became a trainee police officer in Florida. The methods and ideas of the incident have not been integrated into the local ecology. It is an obvious domestic practice to buy a car or a gun if you have no money. Under normal circumstances, such necessities must be purchased with a loan even if you have less to eat. There is still a lot of room for improvement in details.

This is your official letter, isn't it? I won't read it

Indeed, this broken system has no purpose. Does it have storage space? Can the body be digitized and become immortal? Can I get money for solving the case? Invulnerable? Can you still be injured and recover automatically instantly? What if you get banged by someone else and die?

The writing is interesting and has the potential to become a hit.

Another one that was put off by the title of the book, the inside is much more interesting than the outside

The creativity is very good, the behavior is smooth, and the description of the local customs is very American. So far it's pretty good.

✒️Writing: It reads smoothly and is comfortable 🎬 Plot: Very good 🎭 Character design: quite interesting

Do you know how difficult it is to read hundreds of Caoyuan in Braille for 10 minutes?

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