The Shanwei Immortal Clan

I still prefer the stages of Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, and Spirit Transformation.

I've read chapter six, but I still don't know who the main character is. I feel like it's the third brother; if so, it's too intense, and it makes the story less interesting.

This feels like it was written by an elementary school student. The writing quality is terrible.

A towering building rises from the ground; how can one know the heavens until one's hair turns white? I wish the author great success with this book. Politely borrowing this space: Meeting is fate, sir/madam, would you like to take a look at my novel, *Nirvana Immortal Clan*, an ensemble piece with a grand backdrop.

Not bad, keep it up, I believe in you!