Starting Again with The Great Dao Contends

Dao fanfics are the worst to write about. The combat power in the middle and late stages is too high, and the author of the original text has basically blocked the fanfics. What you think is rebirth, time travel, golden finger, system, portable grandpa, no one else knows about it. In fact, in the eyes of high-level people, it is like looking at the lines on the palm of your hand, which is clear at a glance.

In fact, the template of Dao Dao, which starts with the direct lineage of the Chen family, should be very exciting, with all the resources available. The protagonist has a big gold finger, but he is still being suppressed? I don't understand. . . Isn't Chen Taiping still alive? Why did he start to fall apart? The Chen family, which had a bunch of sons-in-law to support the situation, suddenly had a super-class family, and as a result, the support in the early stage was so strong. . . KouKouSouSou. It feels like there is more for the son-in-law than for the protagonist. So only villains from aristocratic family backgrounds can exert their power?

No wonder your previous books did not do well. Although you are better than many authors, your writing style is really poor. . . In addition to learning the gorgeous rhetoric of Dao Zhengfeng, his details are handled, his sentences are smooth, and his words are concise and concise. He has not learned anything about summarizing complex content in simple words. Moreover, the background of the novel is still fan fiction, so the setting and other things can be directly used. One thing to say, after reading so many novels, writing skills really depend on talent and accumulation.

It's a pity to write about fandom with your style of writing. You can borrow his settings to write fairy tales.

A batch of water. The first-grade golden elixir of Dharma and Qi Dao, and you can join the top ten disciples in more than 10 chapters. You have practiced the magical power used by your opponent, but you are still being suppressed and beaten. You laughed at Yipin Jindan.

The great thing about this book is that you can't see any problem even if you jump through more than a dozen pictures. You can still connect. Author, are you a fool? Your writing style is so familiar to me 🙂

Recently, I have been focusing on how much fighting experience the protagonist brings when he travels back to kill demons. As a result, in the first fight, the mysterious light is smashed into the opponent's face, and the second layer of mysterious light crushes the third layer of mysterious light. Is this the fighting experience that the protagonist brought back from tens of thousands of years ago? Boring and boring

It's full of water, and it's crazily filled with water in all kinds of inexplicable places. This is the author's old problem, and it happens in every book. If it weren't for this stinky problem, several of the author's books wouldn't be as successful as they are now. Why would he lose all his popularity with fans just for a few extra chapters?

An alchemy meeting, ten days, ten chapters have not been finished, and there is basically no plot, only a lot of description. Your words must serve the plot. To be honest, my patience is wearing thin.

This is so unbelievable. I only ordered a few hundred fan points, which are all about introducing things from the original work. I've read the fanfic, but I still don't know the setting of the original work? The writing is so poor and the updates are so slow. Your diagnosis is outrageous.