Shrouding the Heavens: The Tianxuan Saint Child, Beginning at Mount Tai

The character design is problematic. The ancestor who could traverse the starry sky was an outer disciple who only learned the Daoist arts of the Sea of ​​Wheels. Tsk tsk.

The idea is good, but try to revise it less now. During the cultivation, there was such a huge anomaly, yet the villain trio still dared to attack, and then didn't even react. You're capable of writing that! 😥

Author, don't listen to him, just write normally. According to him, all the opportunities in the original work are already written out who gets them, so you shouldn't touch any of them, just transmigrate and watch helplessly. And don't even try to steal the protagonist's opportunities. If I transmigrated, I'd steal everyone else's opportunities too, not just the protagonist's. Being so modest about giving up opportunities shows your lack of ambition. 😅

To write about astronomy now, the operation must be unconventional. That wasn't flashy enough! In short, it can be summed up in four words: extremely contradictory!! It's not worth mentioning that Ye Hei didn't invest in the cultivation techniques earlier on Earth, even though he clearly had them. Let's not even talk about stealing Bodhi seeds on Mars.

The old madman from Tianxuan Holy Land stormed the Path to Immortality and even obtained the Six Paths Reincarnation Fist. The ruthless man and the Great Accomplished Holy Body didn't even glance at them.

Seeing that they had picked up the Bodhi seed, I lost interest in continuing. This Bodhi seed is problematic; it was left by Amitabha Buddha to the Holy Body lineage. Anyone who has read the original work or a lot of fan fiction knows this.

Your opening was poorly executed. While Liu Yunzhi and his two accomplices deserved to die, they were ultimately just ordinary mortals. If you were unhappy, you could have easily killed them off by accident. Doing it yourself, and doing it so covertly, just makes the protagonist seem petty and weak.

Arriving in Beidou, they still don't go to the Holy City, Tianxuan Stone Archway, or cling to powerful figures for protection instead of venturing into forbidden zones and acting arrogantly.

The first dozen or so chapters are entirely based on the original plot, it's incredibly padded.

It's not as good as AI. Sorry, I couldn't even finish the first three chapters.