Two Worlds: Cultivating Immortality in a Low-Martial World

When can these editors be fired? Corpse meal

Chapters 1-3 establish the protagonist's background, then explain that he was thoroughly investigated? Even more absurdly, there isn't a single guard in the manor at the mid-to-late stage of the Ming Jin realm… and yet he hasn't been taken advantage of for so long 🤔, it's completely contradictory, constantly asking for thousands of taels of silver! Isn't this just nouveau riche behavior?

I feel it's better to start with low-level weapons and then upgrade to higher-level weapons later; otherwise, the effectiveness of low-level weapons diminishes considerably later on.

It's not bad, you can check it out. It's a bit of a plagiarism, with a "cultivating immortality in a chaotic world of demons and martial arts" vibe. I hope it's better than what the plagiarist wrote. The story gets worse after the Nascent Soul stage; there are too many small worlds and it's all about technological cultivation. It gets less and less interesting as it goes on.

The author should at least correct the typos after finishing the book; there are too many errors in Chapter 10.

I hate it when you guys write about two worlds, always trying to survive in each other's shadows. Can't you write something complementary? I absolutely hate the rule that you can't trade life levels.

It's so popular that newcomers are just following the trend.

Why does she just marry any monster she meets? The style of the story has suddenly changed.

The most disgusting thing about both worlds is that the "plagiarist" was the first to make me feel nauseous.

The supporting character possesses the will of a tyrant, his heart clouded by calamity, and corrupted by the will of heaven. The protagonist is reckless, lacks common sense, is passive in every situation, and is destined for great calamity.