Shrouding the Heavens: The System Arrived Thirty Years Early

The first few chapters were written very deliberately. The protagonist said he wanted to keep a low profile, but he kept killing crocodiles on Mars. The protagonist killed the most, so it would be strange if he didn't take away the crocodiles. The protagonist's head felt sharp.

If the early stages of this book continue to be delayed, there will probably be no later stages.

I remembered that I stopped reading the last book after just a few pictures. It was because the protagonist, Cai Daogong, dared to run to the Taichu Ancient Mine alone. It was so brave, but it seemed that he was being chased in front of his home. It was more abstract.

The protagonist got off to a bad start and was cultivating immortality with a burden.

Is the heroine Lin Jia? It's not bad. If you can cultivate to the Great Sage Realm, your talent is considered to be top-notch.

Everything else is okay, except that the system has marked that the system believes that the protagonist's current age is fifty-four. The protagonist has always believed that the age limit in the system's achievements is based on his true age. What serious illness does the protagonist have?

The previous book was okay. I read more than ten chapters of this one. To be honest, it is far inferior to the previous one. Firstly, the system flow of issuing tasks can be a bit overwhelming. Secondly, it is difficult to tell the rewards. You say it rewards mental power or soul strength, but in the end, there is a reward for will.

Ask the author whether there is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. It can't really be a single female protagonist, Lin Jia. Then you might as well not write it if you write it.

If we don't modify the progress, everyone will run away.

I feel like the simulations are all dead ends. I've watched a lot of simulations and I can't finish any of them.