My Immortal Cultivation Simulator

Personally, I think it's okay. I watched it for several hours and couldn't stop. Although it has flaws, it's much better than most of the ones on the list It's good-looking because it's high-energy almost the whole time. The plot is all about the protagonist. The rhythm is very dense. The main plot is not distorted at all. The protagonist is almost always improving his strength, and the supporting characters don't have any over-the-top scenes. , There are also many foreshadowings, and it is not a simple matryoshka simulation The flaw is that I personally feel that the content is a bit hollow. After reading each chapter, the impression left is one result after another, and the process is relatively small. The protagonist also lacks the fear, confusion, irritability, pain and other emotions in the real process, and also lacks the choices under these emotions. After reading too much, readers may become tired and bored. In a real and detailed environment and emotions, the choices made by the protagonist highlight the protagonist's ability, wisdom, and charm, making them even more valuable. Readers are also more immersed in the story, their emotional experiences are more volatile and rich, and they feel more like they live and die together with the protagonist. The pace is very fast. I feel that the human world is not enough and I need to write about the fairy world. If you want to write and have the ability, you can let your family cultivate immortality, or write about human race hegemony or something, but it must be used to support the protagonist's upgrade Generally speaking, this book is better than most of the books on the list. Many of them can't be read. This one can't be stopped for several hours, and the comment section is also very interesting. Book friends have been slapped in the face many times, and there are many jokes.

Do you want to be so tauren? The head of the Jiang family who was a dog licker went out to guard the mines and died in battle, then took the bodies of others and returned to the Jiang family. I saw the woman I had been licking for so many years, finally sleeping with the protagonist and standing guard at the door every day. Playing in such a perverted way? No, just go to sleep. Why do you have to write someone else's ex-husband to guard the door and listen to you two having an affair every day? In the end, the head of the Jiang family was killed to avoid future troubles. 🐮Ah

The upper limit of the author determines the upper limit of the protagonist in the book. An author with an IQ of 200 describing a protagonist with an IQ of 150 will make the protagonist behave very well. An author with an IQ of 80 describing a protagonist with an IQ of 250 will make the protagonist behave like Down syndrome.

The biggest weakness of the simulation of cultivating immortals is that it comes with precognitive deductions at the beginning. All crises, conspiracies, plots, and desperate situations can be accurately predicted by simulating them in advance, and the disaster can be directly eliminated at the source. The protagonist lays down the whole process. There are no accidents, no sudden dangers, no life and death struggles, no unexpected traps, and no irreversible dilemmas. The plot originally relied on crises and conflicts, desperate situations, and life and death tribulations to push forward. The simulator directly smoothed out all the twists and turns, making the journey smooth and smooth, with no pressure or ups and downs. The story instantly became dull and boring.

I can only say that the protagonist is too useless. During the fifth simulation, the protagonist practiced for six to seven hundred years before successfully cultivating the second-level secret method. Then when he went back to the sixth simulation, there were still people in the third-level trial space. The requirement was that he should not be older than 150 years old, and the time he had practiced the secret method could not be more than 100 years. You can imagine how useless the protagonist is 🙂

The author has no attitude towards writing at all. He relies purely on AI to mass-generate content to cut costs, cheat subscriptions, and cheat readers. He doesn't care about the quality of the plot, the reader's experience, or logical loopholes. He only cares about getting enough words to update every day to mix traffic. There is no trace of writing, thought, or sincerity in the entire work. It is a typical piece of mechanically stitched garbage. The more you read, the more perfunctory and hollow it becomes. There is no reading experience in the whole process, and it is a pure waste of time.

Isn't this really a lack of combat effectiveness? , I just read a 100-sheet book to practice the fourth level of Qi.

Overall this book is fine. What I wrote before is very awesome. There's nothing wrong with the plot direction, but it will definitely fall apart if it's written as a whole. The most important problem is upgrading too quickly. The author writes that the protagonist is a loser at the beginning. It must be for this reason that he is afraid of leveling up too quickly and then crashing. Because the point of inheriting cultivation is so awesome. This is equivalent to your unlimited lifespan, and then you can speed up time. Although it looks very cool, it is suitable for this fast-paced era. But the ending will definitely fall apart. It's almost like another book. That could have been reincarnated into one's own descendants. I have a suggestion. Like any treasures, there are also various experiences in cultivating immortals that can be retained. But the speed of realm improvement is going to slow down. It can be written like this. For example, the protagonist is now building a foundation. If the protagonist breaks through the golden elixir in the simulation. Can inherit 1/10 of the cultivation level of a higher realm. Or the ratio could be lower. In this case, the protagonist will upgrade very quickly. Direct inheritance would be too risky. Just like what I am writing now, the author simply does not dare to write more. You can only rely on water to maintain your reps. This balance is difficult to strike. Moreover, another function of the golden finger can also be developed later. It is recommended that another function of the golden finger be developed after the golden elixir, so that it can be reincarnated into other worlds or sci-fi mechas. You can write about this kind of thing as if it were a new world. Write more about other worlds. It is completely possible to be reincarnated into the world in other novels, movies and TV shows. In fact, there are many ideas. If you don't want your combat power to collapse later, you can open a world like Infinite Flow. I have an idea, you travel to a world similar to modern China. In the simulation, you create spiritual energy and then spread the immortality cultivation techniques. Revered as the greatest scientist in the world. Anyway, whatever makes you feel good.

The early stage is really good to watch, the rhythm is tight and refreshing, and the plot is intensive. After the pill formation is completed, the flood begins. In order to reduce the level of the Nascent Soul stage, the whole article is explaining how difficult the Nascent Soul stage is and why it is so rare. It is not as good as a dog in the middle Nascent Soul stage in Zhongzhou. When the Nascent Soul is completed, a legendary monk must be forced to come out. Then the latest talent of the best swordsmanship in the human world turns the previous ones into rubbish. All the forcibly subdivided settings are fed to dogs. The words of the fierce water in the front are not even as good as toilet paper.

The later stages of Nascent Soul are divided into ordinary great monks, top great monks, and legendary great monks Question 1: I wrote it over and over again, and just wrote it, and I wrote several chapters without writing out what determines the level of combat power. After writing so many words, I can only know that there is such a division of combat power? Can't you explain a sentence? Question 2: Continue to subdivide the Nascent Soul stage! The early, middle and late stages are originally divided into realms. Counting the small realms of the big realm of Nascent Soul, now that you have the talent of "better than yourself", tell me, the early, middle and late stages are the big realms? Will each major realm continue to be subdivided? So with this talent, we can only go from the so-called "peak" of the middle stage of Yuanying to the "first entry" of the late stage of Yuanying? Do you write about the process of cultivation as a state? According to your logic, the realm can be subdivided infinitely, which is meaningless Question 3: Inconsistency. I just wrote that ordinary top legends are divided by combat power, but later, when I get "half a son of oneself", it changes to realm division instantly? If you want to add a few more divisions of combat power, you can write it from the side. Use the existing settings in the book. For example, those who master one magical power are the weakest single-law monks, those who master three magical powers are the three-law monks, and those who master five magical powers are the five-law monks. Not only Yuanying can use this standard, but also the gods can be extended. The more vague you write, the less likely you will be able to see the difference in division later. In the end, you will be promoted to the God of Transformation in a confused manner, and you will only find that everyone is the same, and then continue to divide the combat power of the God of Transformation. This is fundamentally wrong. So are the three levels of ordinary top legends divided by combat power or realm? How are they divided? Why are they so divided? What use does this division have for future realms? Or is it the same as breaking through and becoming a god? I've written several chapters and still can't understand? Please revise it quickly, these chapters are very problematic.