I Loaded the Martial Arts Limit-Breaking Panel

You can make it a little harder by using plug-ins, but don't get stuck at 99%. Don't call me a bookworm anymore. Even newcomers don't like 99% of the time. The routine of breaking through on the spot is really too old.

The book is good, but it's still not exciting enough. The main character's skills are big on the surface but not so big in appearance. Those traits are not shown to bring anything awesome to the main character. The main reason is that the performance in actual combat is too weak. I feel that it is purely based on the proficiency of the skills 😥😥

The book is fine, the plot is not a big problem. Even the writing is too detailed! It took 270 chapters to reach the first big realm, and it was still at the beginning of the early stage. There are eight major breakthroughs that will appear later, and there are still some that have not appeared. Besides, it should be more difficult as you get to the later stage. Author, tell me how long it will take to write like this? Do you plan to write tens of millions of words?

This post is a complaint post, for those of you who feel something is not going well, want to criticize me, feel uncomfortable with something, want to make comments, feel like it can be written better, and want to teach me how to do things. I personally believe that if something is correct, I will change it, and if it is not, I will encourage it. Finally, thank you for watching.

To be honest, although the author's writing is good, there are problems with his writing. The protagonist is still far from being a martial artist, but he has been fighting against the top demonic forces. Although the protagonist keeps winning, there is basically no sense of satisfaction. Moreover, the author has always described it as if heavenly demons and demonic ways are too difficult to find. The protagonist's master couldn't discover the demon in Liu Ru for so long. The people at the police station have never been able to find any trace of the demon. They were all forcibly arranged to be beaten by the protagonist. Overall, I felt that the people in the police station were useless, and neither was the protagonist's master. The author overemphasizes the weirdness of demons and devils. Before the book even starts, he has been assigning top powers to the protagonist without giving the protagonist time to develop. . So everyone says that the author is suppressing the protagonist. Overall, it seems a bit enjoyable, and I have no desire to continue watching it. Too much emphasis on the devil and the devil. There is basically no description of the powerful performance of the human race. If I keep writing like this, it is certain that this book will not do well. I don't know if the author is aware of this problem, or if he is aware of it but doesn't want to spend energy to correct it, or he may even want to explain it in a few sentences and just forget about it. But I want to say that if the author writes the book with this attitude, then there is no need to complain about the poor performance of the book.

The writing is good, but the progress is too slow. I wrote too much in the novice period. Chapter 270 is the martial Taoist, and I have to break through 7 chapters before I can reach the Great Sage. In other words, I have to write 270 chapters of the cultivating novel to build the foundation... According to the current pace of online writing, this kind of writing is very easy to fail.

First of all, the pace of this book is good, but there are some points that I don't agree with, about the use of weapons. The tone of this book is considered to be a world above Chinese martial arts. In the early stage, an enhanced version of Chinese martial arts was used to transition. However, the weapons of Chinese martial arts are an extension of the basic hands and feet. After the protagonist has practiced Xingyiquan, can't he just pick up the marksmanship? As a result, the author forced the protagonist to use gloves, and said that the protagonist did not like to use weapons.

I feel that the progress of the protagonist is too slow... How can I achieve great success after mastering martial arts? After achieving great success, I still need to reach perfection and then break the limit...

There were some flaws in the writing of Liu Ru. It would have been much better without the part where she was captured. Either she accepted a disciple in the beginning, or she just faded out of the plot without accepting him. It was obviously written that she had given up and was going home, and then she wrote that she was captured. This seemed too poisonous. It's not that Liu Ru was a bad person, but that the story of being captured was not good. It's not good to leave lightly, and there is a slight contrast. Ordinary people with some talents give up. Isn't it also good?

The only poisonous point in the writing is apprenticeship, which is not to say that apprenticeship is not good, but getting out of the way of apprenticeship or writing martial arts routines should be a well-known poisonous point. The best way to deal with interpersonal relationships in cheating and apprenticeship is to not give too much plot in one go. Or the master is an opportunity for the protagonist to show off, so that the master is shocked but not too tough. Normally, it wouldn't be too sloppy because of some plots that prevent the protagonist from showing off.