I Loaded the Martial Arts Limit Breaking Panel

First of all, the pace of this book is good, but there are some points that I don't agree with, about the use of weapons. The tone of this book is considered to be a world above Chinese martial arts. In the early stage, an enhanced version of Chinese martial arts was used to transition. However, the weapons of Chinese martial arts are an extension of the basic hands and feet. After the protagonist has practiced Xingyiquan, can't he just pick up the marksmanship? As a result, the author forced the protagonist to use gloves, and said that the protagonist did not like to use weapons.

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Come on, author, it's really beautiful.

It is visually estimated that the plot has advanced to 30-40%. The main plot, combat power setting, and protagonist's growth have not collapsed for the time being, supporting the rationality and avoiding the pitfalls of last year's similar work "Martial Saint" by Laotian. I hope the author can regularly post Lao Meng's skill list. It's too easy for those who follow the update to forget the previous article.

It has already been reviewed on QQ Reading, but the author is also here to copy it. Overall, the book is very good, and the specific depiction of martial arts is very detailed. However, there are some disadvantages that I personally think I would like to suggest to the author. I won't go into details about the slow pace that everyone has mentioned in the comment area. It is actually acceptable after reading it, but in fact, what makes me most uncomfortable is the slowness that appears from time to time in the text. Regarding the issue of intelligence, from the author's portrayal, you can feel that the protagonist does not just use muscles to do things, but has a brain and has such a high level of understanding. The article also mentioned that the protagonist wants to be cautious, but there is also a loss of intelligence. For example, in the final scene of revenge against Fang Jianxing, just because someone called him "Principal Yin", he threw out two of his trump cards, a full-strength blow from a powerful master, without confirmation. You didn't even see the enemy, right? What if it's not behind your back? Or what if they are not here to kill you? Doesn't this directly cause misunderstanding? It is also inconsistent with the protagonist's caution There are also chapters 814 and 816. It is understandable that the author wants to change the map, but in terms of plot processing, do not directly reduce the protagonist's intelligence. It has been described before: the difficulty of defeating, killing and controlling is different, and the difficulty of suppression is the highest. Facing the enemy Mo Jue, even in the process of breaking through, the protagonist can wave his hand to suppress him in the martial arts field, so can't he be killed directly? And the description of such hatred later is too inconsistent, a bit like it was done deliberately to let him escape, and the subsequent thoughts are unclear and red-eyed. The description of revenge is a bit too much. No one can find him when he becomes stronger in the future. Is it so difficult to hunt down a person in the universe after reaching a certain level of strength? I understand that the author wanted to find a relatively suitable reason for changing the map, but the plot here is really not suitable I really hope that this kind of trouble can be avoided in the future. In this case, this novel will be perfect. Come on, author!

You can make it a little harder by using plug-ins, but don't get stuck at 99%. Don't call me a bookworm anymore. Even newcomers don't like 99% of the time. The routine of breaking through on the spot is really too old.

The book is good, but it's still not exciting enough. The main character's skills are big on the surface but not so big in appearance. Those traits are not shown to bring anything awesome to the main character. The main reason is that the performance in actual combat is too weak. I feel that it is purely based on the proficiency of the skills 😥😥

The book is fine, the plot is not a big problem. Even the writing is too detailed! It took 270 chapters to reach the first big realm, and it was still at the beginning of the early stage. There are eight major breakthroughs that will appear later, and there are still some that have not appeared. Besides, it should be more difficult as you get to the later stage. Author, tell me how long it will take to write like this? Do you plan to write tens of millions of words?

This post is a complaint post, for those of you who feel something is not going well, want to criticize me, feel uncomfortable with something, want to make comments, feel like it can be written better, and want to teach me how to do things. I personally believe that if something is correct, I will change it, and if it is not, I will encourage it. Finally, thank you for watching.

To be honest, although the author's writing is good, there are problems with his writing. The protagonist is still far from being a martial artist, but he has been fighting against the top demonic forces. Although the protagonist keeps winning, there is basically no sense of satisfaction. Moreover, the author has always described it as if heavenly demons and demonic ways are too difficult to find. The protagonist's master couldn't discover the demon in Liu Ru for so long. The people at the police station have never been able to find any trace of the demon. They were all forcibly arranged to be beaten by the protagonist. Overall, I felt that the people in the police station were useless, and neither was the protagonist's master. The author overemphasizes the weirdness of demons and devils. Before the book even starts, he has been assigning top powers to the protagonist without giving the protagonist time to develop. . So everyone says that the author is suppressing the protagonist. Overall, it seems a bit enjoyable, and I have no desire to continue watching it. Too much emphasis on the devil and the devil. There is basically no description of the powerful performance of the human race. If I keep writing like this, it is certain that this book will not do well. I don't know if the author is aware of this problem, or if he is aware of it but doesn't want to spend energy to correct it, or he may even want to explain it in a few sentences and just forget about it. But I want to say that if the author writes the book with this attitude, then there is no need to complain about the poor performance of the book.

The writing is good, but the progress is too slow. I wrote too much in the novice period. Chapter 270 is the martial Taoist, and I have to break through 7 chapters before I can reach the Great Sage. In other words, I have to write 270 chapters of the cultivating novel to build the foundation... According to the current pace of online writing, this kind of writing is very easy to fail.

I feel that the progress of the protagonist is too slow... How can I achieve great success after mastering martial arts? After achieving great success, I still need to reach perfection and then break the limit...

The only poisonous point in the writing is apprenticeship, which is not to say that apprenticeship is not good, but getting out of the way of apprenticeship or writing martial arts routines should be a well-known poisonous point. The best way to deal with interpersonal relationships in cheating and apprenticeship is to not give too much plot in one go. Or the master is an opportunity for the protagonist to show off, so that the master is shocked but not too tough. Normally, it wouldn't be too sloppy because of some plots that prevent the protagonist from showing off.

I specially ordered a chapter to speak. Is this book enjoyable? This kind of theme is more to my taste, but the plug-in was only released after Chapter 14. The leveling is too powerful. How is the progress of the subsequent upgrading?

After seeing Chapter 254, to be honest, the ranking is too low. According to the monthly ticket ranking, it should be in the top dozens. The reason is probably that the beginning was too slow and it lost a large number of readers. In addition, the title of the book is not good. It is a pity. Many readers say that the pace of this book is slow. In fact, I don't understand it at all. I am a long-time reader and know that this type of book is the most likely to collapse, because as the characteristics of the protagonist are added, the protagonist's combat power will become more and more ridiculous. If we want to talk about a flaw, it is that the author is not good at writing about combat. This must be practiced, otherwise it will not become popular. The advantage is that the characters have distinct personalities and online IQ, which is very rare. Come on!

There were some flaws in the writing of Liu Ru. It would have been much better without the part where she was captured. Either she accepted a disciple in the beginning, or she just faded out of the plot without accepting him. It was obviously written that she had given up and was going home, and then she wrote that she was captured. This seemed too poisonous. It's not that Liu Ru was a bad person, but that the story of being captured was not good. It's not good to leave lightly, and there is a slight contrast. Ordinary people with some talents give up. Isn't it also good?

The writing is indeed good, but is the pace too slow? The limit of 1.96 Million words has just exceeded the third limit. The Big Boss boss Hao Demon God currently has a limit of 11. Does this have to be written in the Year of the Monkey and the Horse? I know that you, the author, may want to take your time, but the problem is that many people come in and run away when they see that you have almost two million words in the early and middle stages.

For example: There are endless evil ways! Various methods are used to confuse people. The government has no way to detect people who practice magic in advance! And the way the devil communicates is a bit awesome!

I just read less than 100 chapters, and I feel that the upgrade is too slow. The book says that technology is very advanced, but in the end, there are all kinds of weapons and nutritional solutions. Isn't there high-tech equipment that can increase the speed of martial arts training? This is the key, weapons and everything else are putting the cart before the horse. Martial arts training is so powerful, but if you don't use science and technology to analyze martial arts and the human body, and help everyone become like a dragon, and break their limits, you end up spending a lot of energy on making weapons, which you don't understand.

It was really baffling to write the chapter about Liu Ru, and I couldn't even find corrections.

After reading the introduction and title, I am full of expectations for the "features" and "one certificate lasts forever". But in Chapter 14, the first feature came out, so my patience ran out and I had no idea to continue reading. Deleted most of the first 14 chapters so that there might be more readers. (Just a suggestion)

The protagonist actually uses you when talking to close elders like uncles and aunts. This is somewhat unrealistic. Who uses your name when talking to close elders?

I feel like those women are inexplicable, I don't know why I wrote them

1. Does the protagonist appear to be a genius to the outside world? 2. Are there any brainless villains confronting the protagonist? 3. Does the protagonist always pretend to be a pig?

The writing style of this book is good, and the imagination is good. At least the food is good. However, the name probably dissuades most people. If you can read the beginning, many people should be able to fall in love with it.

A pretty good novel The world view is complete, the social order is abundant and stable, the plot is smooth, the characters are realistic, the plot is logical and natural, the turning point is a bit abrupt but not jerky, and the description of the fighting scenes is also very graphic. It is a highly recommended novel. The treatment of the protagonist is also quite good. Many elders care and take care of him, and the master is like a teacher and a father. The obsession at the beginning turns into love and care, and you can get a glimpse of the world. Only with this kind of atmosphere can the martial arts world be stable and positive, starting from a very rare and happy path of seeking Taoism. I really like such a positive portrayal of characters. The protagonist is not a dark villain, but rather positive. There is no such boring bitterness and deep hatred, nor the difficult drama of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, and there is no irritating world as the enemy, everyone is the enemy. The protagonist relies on his own plug-ins and accumulated experience. He is like a rolling stone on a high mountain, unstoppable, and climbs to the top step by step. The ice and snow melting while climbing, the flowers on the roadside are blooming, and the travelers around you are getting a lot of help. Looking back at them, you are amazed. Very solid!

I have been reading books for twenty years, and it is getting harder and harder to find good ones now. If the author recommends them to a few experts, they will definitely be popular. The quality of the books lies here.

It's very enjoyable to watch, and the more I watch it, the more enjoyable it becomes 😁, especially the fighting, the later the battle becomes more enjoyable to watch.

I have been chasing it for more than two weeks. Full subscription and monthly pass are given to you. You don't want a eunuch, write it well. This is the most realistic modern martial arts article I have ever read. He writes better than Gaowu in the world 👍👍, and there is a possibility of becoming a god in one book

The writing is too detailed. Every small improvement must be described in detail. It is obvious that it has been said long ago when a certain skill will be able to break through. As a result, every time the skill improves, it is described in detail and repeated over and over again. Or a certain event is mentioned very early and then kept mentioned. From the beginning, the event is mentioned and mentioned many times. The perception is very delayed, and it feels like it has been suppressing the combat power.