Junior Sister, I Really Need to Keep You in Check

The settings are very interesting, including (1) the golden finger binds the junior sister, and you need to help the junior sister meet the conditions before you can withdraw the rewards; (2) the cultivation rewards must be obtained by entering a different space and practicing on your own. But the writing style, plot and characters are all average, similar to ancient Internet articles. The description is relatively sketchy; the plot is just constant pretentiousness; the characters are very stereotyped. In addition, someone in the comment area also mentioned that after the protagonist reaches the reward, he is immediately transported to a different space to practice with complete memory. During this period, the outside world is suspended. After decades of practice, he can still have normal conversations, and after hundreds of years of practice, his personality remains unchanged. This is very unreasonable. Overall, it is recommended to only read it before it is put on the shelves.

At forty chapters, it is a very high-quality light novel, but judging from the current progress, the protagonist will go through a long period of vacuum or indefinite daily life after experiencing a series of pretentious and slap-in-the-face content. I hope to enrich the content and strive to write 1.5 Million words. The last two monthly passes are given away, and I hope it will become a hit soon

At least the current 50 chapters are very good. The writing is concise and plain. Although it is not that gorgeous, it is much better than those pretentious writings of the same type. Although the real-life part is a bit annoying for people who deliberately hide it, it is still acceptable. In other aspects, I have not seen any bad points so far. The overall evaluation is at least good. I will wait and see after it is released.

It's okay, it can be called top quality, but there are too few updates, the world view can be slightly expanded, and there are a few characters.

Update soon

It's me, I must control my junior sister and practice it as a shame/soul slave/slave bond before I can rest assured😌

Everything else is pretty good, but it's a bit embarrassing that the stinky chess basket still likes to play chess, it's too cliche...

The writing rhythm is very comfortable, and the food level is higher, you can read it I haven't read it since it was released.

This book's setting of binding the golden finger to the junior sister is very imaginative, and the writing also shows that the author is experienced and it reads smoothly. However, this type of golden finger that "enters a different space to practice, does not lose its own lifespan, and the external time is completely still" actually has a common logical problem - split time perception. The protagonist was talking to his junior sister one second, and in the blink of an eye, he went into seclusion in the cave for decades; to the junior sister, it was just a blink of an eye, but to the protagonist, it was a long time. It is actually quite logically inconsistent to be able to seamlessly connect the conversation, emotion and behavioral state of the previous second after exiting the game. And according to this rhythm, the protagonist's actual subjective experience of life is spent in seclusion for 80% of the time, and there will be a strong sense of misalignment with his physical age in his twenties and the social status of the outside world. Here are two small suggestions for the author's reference: 1. Add a perceptual compression setting: The moment the protagonist leaves the cave, the space will automatically compress and dilute the long time perception. The fruits and memories of hundreds of years of cultivation are completely preserved, but the subjective experience is just like having a dream that spans an extremely long time, or watching a feature-length movie. There is no sense of the vicissitudes of living through the years, and the ability to naturally connect to the rhythm of the outside world. ​ 2. Convert "bugs" into plot highlights: In the later stage, the cognitive conflict and mental alienation caused by this time dislocation can be written head-on, and it can become a unique plot line with great tension.

The writing isn't exactly flattering, but I really can't like the main character. The setting seems quite fresh at first glance, but the further you read, the more awkward it becomes. It took me a long time to realize that this male protagonist is purely a vampire. The one who was tied up by the system was obviously his junior sister, the heroine. The heroine was busy doing tasks and practicing hard, and all the rewards went into the hero's pocket. The heroine herself didn't know anything. The male protagonist didn't have the ability to actually help others, so he just stood aside and urged the female protagonist to curl up hard, so that he could reap all the benefits. At least part of the labor dispatch service is reserved for the workers, which is good, just swallow it all in one bite. In ordinary system novels, the protagonist works by himself to get rewards, becomes stronger and then advances to the next level, and the closed-loop gameplay is straightforward. In this book, the other way around is that the female protagonist takes on all the hard work, and the male protagonist prostitutes for nothing. She has to rush the female protagonist to take on more difficult tasks and work endlessly for him. Isn't this just skinning her alive? If the male protagonist is an obviously evil and unscrupulous demon cultivator like Fang Yuan, then I can completely accept this logic and even find it interesting. As a result, the author insists on packaging him as a decent and good person, using the resources obtained by cheating the junior sister to act like a gentleman, and he is both upright and upright, which makes people feel uncomfortable.

It gets duller and duller as you go towards the end. The most interesting and interesting point in the early stage is the interaction of killing the little fish. There are other exciting points as well, but it can be said that there are almost none. Logically speaking, in fairy tales, the improvement of the protagonist's cultivation will bring about changes to the people and events around him, which is a great pleasure. However, the interpersonal relationship between the protagonist and other people here is too weak. The protagonist in the emotional line seems to have no desires and desires. There are many female protagonists but zero progress, and the career line has no main event to support it. Especially when I see the Dharma Realm, my cultivation has improved, and my status has reached a high level in the Dharma Lineage. However, the changes are too small, and it does not solve a certain person's dilemma, and the relationship with him/her has changed. I didn't achieve any of my goals, which gave me a sense of gain. That's right, unremarkable. At first I was looking forward to the further development of the game with my uncle, and looking forward to how the persecuted Xiaoyu would be the host in the future, but by the end I was a little bit lost in interest. Subsequently, no new highlights or expectations were added. So much so that it is a pity to abandon it and tasteless to eat.

When I saw the last few pictures on the shelf, especially when his uncle's best friend came to see her, I couldn't stand it anymore, two real-life monks who were almost a hundred years old, and a young woman who had just started to fall in love.,,,, This kind of novels nowadays all have the same routine, and the performance of an old woman who has been practicing for decades is... Just like a teenage girl, yes, you can say that she spends most of her time in cultivation and is ignorant of worldly affairs. She is a pure giant baby in a vase. She grew up in an environment with beautiful flowers and a full moon, and all living beings are equal. She is cared for very much, so don't describe her fighting scenes! A monk who has lived for such a long time and achieved great things may not understand what love is or what worldly things are, but he is absolutely firm-minded and decisive in killing. Moreover, the author also said that he went through hardships and went out to fight in his early years, and he still insists on writing this kind of character that has experienced life and death into blushing, crying, and being arrogant at all times, just like a silly Baitian.,, There is also a setting of divine consciousness in this book, which can quickly Quick memory, covering a vast area, and discovering small differences. A real person with this ability is just like a little girl. That is not called ignorance of the world, but a lack of brain stem. The monks in this kind of novel seem to be purely based on years of study and not on character. It is purely a matter of the author's level. In order to highlight the protagonist, he forcibly reduces the difficulty of the supporting character's guide, and reduces the IQ of the supporting actress to the level of a child, creating a low-level sense of satisfaction.

This book is quite interesting. Most of the articles about cultivating immortals that I read before focused on killings, family fights, and vying for girls, but there were very few descriptions of the cultivation of immortals themselves. The plot is also smooth, the pace is slow, but it is not boring. One more thing I have to admit, as I get older, I like some ambiguous descriptions in novels. Without female supporting characters, I always feel that something is missing. This book has a good grasp of this degree. I hope the author can continue to work hard. I will subscribe and support it once it is released.

Every time I finish reading the latest chapter, there are a bunch of negative comments. As a person who thinks there is no problem, their mood will be affected by them. Author, you can either change it according to their wishes, or reply to them. What a mess in the comment area, and don't you think these people are deliberately setting the pace? They are nitpicking, scolding and reading at the same time. I believe that they are hired trolls.

After reading more than 290 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. This Dharma statue is as long as an old lady's foot-binding cloth. The extremely long period of the Dharma statue realm directly turns the immortal's strength into a sewer. Using similar analogies, if you are at the peak of Qi training and in the early stage of foundation building, I will praise you as invincible. But now that you are at the peak of Qi training and kicked to death by the peak of foundation building, I will say refund your money! Let's play this part for me! And I don't understand how, in the early days, it was clearly based on realm crushing and giving some real shock to the little Taoist priests who had thirty years of skill, but now it has turned into a traditional genius fighting over the next level. Ignoring these issues, the plot route has also entered path dependence. A new map will be summoned and a new female character will be summoned. When the handsome protagonist is seen, she will say a few words and take action to shock the people around her. After a few chapters, the protagonist's xxx skills will be improved. This cycle has been going on for too long. The long cycle has made me desensitized to the improvement of the protagonist's numerical value. In the past, the skills were higher and stronger, but now, compared to other methods, it is the same as Hawking going to the boxing ring to fight Tyson or Taylor.

It feels tasteless and a pity to abandon. The protagonist feels like a tool to protect the junior sister. The character of junior sister, I feel that she is written very flatly. She eats and eats every day, and then complains about pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, pain, etc., And takes the best resources but has no development. Showing the highlight of one's own character, the Dharma competition that was supposed to be the highlight turned out to be three accurate magic weapons. It seems that everyone is the one who is the one who inserts the bid. The male protagonist who doesn't know how to write is written as a bodyguard who loves to show off, and the female protagonist is written as a silly white sweet who only knows how to eat.

Hiding his cultivation level is a bit too deliberate. Every time he talks about the protagonist becoming a real person, he is always interrupted. The protagonist also seems to be mute and cannot speak.

The first 30 chapters are good to read, but the rest of it is just pretending to be stupid until it is released. As mentioned before, the temperament of the real person has changed a lot after washing the menstruation and severing the marrow. As a result, everyone is like a blind man regardless of their level of cultivation. After watching the protagonist take action, he sighed, "This person will definitely be able to break through the real person in a few years." It's as if the story that should have ended in three chapters was dragged to the seventy chapter in order to get it on the shelves.

Single or many? Don't do that kind of crazy and ambiguous thing and then have a single heroine

You can jump to Chapter 47 first. Junior sister's opportunity. The protagonist has to try and waste the opportunity. He looks selfish but clings to other places. It's not a selfish protagonist, but a character's personality is varied. It's amazing. It's the same as what the AI ​​wrote. Does the protagonist have multiple personalities?

As title

It's okay, but, smile bitterly, smile bitterly, smile bitterly, can you smile less bitterly?

It is repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist is terrible at chess without realizing it, and he still hasn't improved even if he becomes a real person. I was wondering, has the author ever played Go? The rules are clear and simple, it's nothing more than calculation ability. After improving your cultivation level and cultivating your spiritual consciousness, how can you be inferior to the level of a three-year-old child? The key is lack of self-knowledge? As a practitioner, you can't even know yourself. The protagonist has even studied chess records. How could he not know his own level? What you are writing is not a two-dimensional urban heroine. You have to create flaws such as falling on the ground, poor cooking skills, and not being able to take care of yourself to increase the sense of life. This method of labeling to increase recognition is so clumsy that I can only judge that the author is trying to improve the word count.

Does the male protagonist not realize that so many people like him? He knows it. Knowing that there are still so many people hanging around, he is a bit of a scumbag. You scumbag can't you just be a scumbag and be honest? You have to pretend to be innocent while swaying others to earn benefits. How is this different from those who raise fish with green tea? Even more disgusting, you have a system and you can sweep away with your looks. But can we not build a memorial arch and be a watchmaker at the same time?

The title of the book is a bit wrong. How about changing it to "My Junior Sister and I were at the Taoist Temple"?

Did the author completely ignore the comment section and write his own thing? Byd is still arguing in the comment section about two female protagonists with two character cards. Wouldn't it be nice for the author to clarify the issue of one female protagonist earlier? If you have such a big appetite and want to eat everything, some readers will always feel uncomfortable at the end.

It looked good before it was put on the shelves, but it became more and more boring after it was put on the shelves.

The front is considered to be fairy grass, and the back is barely considered to be food.

I have read Chapter 20 and have been practicing, but I am not happy at all. Where is the coolness of the label reflected in the text?

Absolutely amazing. Why does the protagonist like so much that the Heavenly Consciousness comes to his door to feed him, and then he pretends to be a little white lotus when he is done? Does he like adding three spoons of sugar so much? It's disgusting. After all the greed for money and profit, you still expect the protagonist to not be morally condemned at all.