Junior Sister, I Really Need to Keep You in Check

If it were me, I would definitely control my junior sister, and only feel at ease if I trained her into a human/soul slave/slave contract or something like that 😌

Everything else is fine, except that it's a bit awkward that a terrible chess player likes to play chess; it's too cliché...

The writing style and pacing are very comfortable; it's at least a high-quality read and worth checking out. I haven't looked at it since it was released.

This book's premise of binding a cheat ability to a junior sister is incredibly imaginative, and the author's skillful writing style makes it a smooth read. However, these kinds of "golden fingers" that allow one to "enter another dimension to cultivate, have no loss of lifespan, and have time completely stand still in the outside world" actually have a common logical problem—a "disjointed…

The writing isn't terrible, but I just can't bring myself to like the main character. The premise seemed fresh at first glance, but it became increasingly awkward the more I read. It took me a while to realize that the male protagonist was simply a vampire. The system clearly bound him to his junior sister, the female lead.

The later parts become increasingly bland. The interesting and engaging aspects in the early stages are the interactions with the little fish, and while there are other points to look forward to, they are practically nonexistent. In a typical fantasy novel, the changes that the protagonist's cultivation level brings to the people and events around him should be a major highlight.

This book is quite interesting. Most of the cultivation novels I've read before focus on killing, family feuds, and competition for women, with very little description of the intricacies of cultivation itself. The plot flows smoothly, though the pace is a bit slow, but it's not boring. One thing I have to admit is that as I get older, I appreciate more ambiguous descriptions in novels.

Seeing the first few chapters after the novel was released, especially the scene where her martial uncle's best friend visits her—two nearly hundred-year-old Grandmaster cultivators with a young woman just experiencing first love… I really couldn't bear to read it. These days, all novels follow the same formula: an old woman who's cultivated for decades acts like a teenage girl.

Having read over 290 chapters, I couldn't take it anymore. This Dharma Image realm is as long as an old woman's foot binding cloth. The extremely long cycle of the Dharma Image realm has directly turned the strength of an immortal into something like sewer.

Every time I finish reading the latest chapter, there's a ton of negative comments. Even I, someone who thinks there's nothing wrong with it, am affected by them. Author, you either have to comply with their wishes and revise it, or you have to respond to them. What kind of mess is this comment section? And don't you think these people are intentionally stirring up trouble? They're nitpicking, criticizing while reading. I'd believe they were hired trolls.