The Unbound Dao Master

You've been showing off and getting slapped in the face all this time, plus all sorts of breaking limits. If you're really that good, I won't say much more. Your supreme foundation built by breaking limits is comparable to the mid-stage of Ming Jin in terms of early stage strength.

The writing is sloppy and formulaic; the plot is worse than an AI script; it only uses exaggerated data; the plot is nonsensical; it's not worth spending a penny on.

I really shouldn't have had any hope for this author. He truly deserves his reputation as one of the two giants of Qidian's fantasy genre, alongside Chengfeng Yujian. Even if he wrote for another ten years, it would still be the same.

Taking those three ingrates as his underlings, what was he thinking? How can this kind of behavior even make it onto the Three Rivers list? It looks like Qidian is doomed.

On one hand, he broke through the limits twice, forging an unparalleled foundation, a rarity in the world. On the other hand, he's over 16, not worth the sect's generous cultivation. It's a constant internal struggle between the left and right brains, utterly devoid of logic. 😅 Is that all? And this is supposedly an experienced author? (Swearing and cursing are prohibited at 7 PM; please see the image below.)

Your writing is so simplistic and mindless, just a pretentious attempt to show off. Can you please speed things up a bit? Who can possibly read this much in a day?

The writing style is really awkward. Many words and phrases appear in the same sentence repeatedly. Moreover, the protagonist's name appears in just one or two sentences, too often. It's fine to read, but it sounds very verbose to listen to.

One lineage after another, like a nested doll. I want to swear, but I feel it's uncivilized. 🤮

I really don't understand. Isn't it enough to use the same formula from 10 years ago for 10 years? The protagonist's actions are always marred by unexpected complications, preventing them from completing tasks smoothly. Every time they're about to break through, a bunch of problems arise.

Here's a suggestion: ideally, the compatibility level should increase along with your martial arts knowledge and foundation. It's unrealistic to expect you to master many sword techniques or skills while others' compatibility remains stagnant, or even to the point where some skills are maxed out with just a glance or are completely unnecessary to learn. After all, it's ultimately just a combination and accumulation of basic elements.