Wasteland: I Have a Magical World

It's well written, without the typical self-promotion of newcomers, and overall it's just good food. The only drawback is that it is a bit too rushed, and it feels like three chapters in one. You can slow down the pace appropriately to polish the plot and enrich the emotions of the characters. Don't collapse in the back, it can reach above the grain and grass. Also, the newly opened vest, a little white snake?

The wasteland world has no value! Why write about this world?

I've read the update. Overall, there's too much focus on the magical world, and the school life there is rather boring, almost like high school life. The wasteland life, on the other hand, is much more interesting. Also, the various high-tech features and biological evolution in the wasteland should be considered in how they complement the magical world. That would be what makes it unique.

It's well-written; it doesn't feel like something a newbie would write. It's a pity I discovered it so early. I'll be updating like crazy once it's officially released.

When do you update, bro? Keep it consistent.

It's good, don't abandon it.

Please read this book during its new release period! Thank you everyone! 🙏