Top-Tier Comprehension: Starting with Basic Fist Techniques

It's outrageous. Such a talented person has been forgotten forever. The sect does not support the resource allocation. You just keep writing about how fast he cultivates and pretend to be a slap in the face. I'm really tired of watching it.

The biggest failure in the early stage is that the protagonist can create his own martial arts. Since the protagonist can create level 5 martial arts, why not create a huge number of level 1 martial arts to increase his potential? Later, the protagonist still has to go to various places to buy martial arts skills. Isn't this a huge logical flaw?

Both logic and writing have a lot of room for improvement (high emotional intelligence speech)

The starting point for understanding is a bit high. The starting point is 98, which is still mediocre. And just adding a little bit of understanding makes the cultivation speed increase so fast. It's a joke. This book will collapse sooner or later.

The plot has been a bit broken lately. When the protagonist encounters someone he can beat, he will kill him whenever he wants. He is very crazy. This is no problem. But the problem is that when you encounter a master that you can't beat, the master is very reasonable and polite. There is even one where the protagonist provokes first.

The description of combat power is so terrifying, but the Dao foundation is quite a foundation for cultivating immortality. . . . Each of the Immortal Sects is so awesome, but the master of one palace has only reached the peak of foundation building. . .

Problems started to arise in Chapter 21. The original words were, "Most of those martial arts are blood-strengthening martial arts, which are of no use to Lu Changsheng now." If they are useless, why not practice? Can't add understanding? Sometimes he says there is nothing new to increase his understanding, and sometimes he puts it in front of him and does not practice it. After breaking through the realm, you should be able to continue to strengthen your health. After all, the realms you set later need to be broken through by qi and blood.

A Turtle Yuan Disk from a passerby of the same realm can block the spiritual black hole. Is this magic that can bear the fruit of infinite divine passages so rubbish? Your setting is so damn stupid. You even used your trump card to play a passerby. You were so awesome before, but now this? It's a bit disgusting.

You must at least have a principle for your own martial arts. There is only one power and level, which is both empty and embarrassing. You should write down the practice method, usage, and source. Similar to your own Wang Baquan: Practice method, Qi and blood gather in the arms, and the Qi and blood will not disperse during high-speed activities. Usage: Hold tight, the style of play seems to be unorganized, but it forces the opponent to follow the chaos, and there is a way to win in the chaos. Source, street fighting, the murderer has no restrictions on his moves.

There should be less pretentious plots. How can there be so many people who like to eat melons and be enthusiastic people all day long?