Top-Tier Comprehension: Starting with Basic Fist Techniques

This is outrageous! Such a genius, unparalleled in history, yet the sect doesn't support him or allocate resources to him. And you just keep writing about how fast his cultivation is, then showing off and getting slapped in the face – it's getting tiresome.

The protagonist's ability to create his own martial arts techniques is the biggest flaw in the early game. If the protagonist can create level 5 techniques, why not create a massive number of level 1 techniques to increase his potential? Later on, the protagonist still has to painstakingly buy techniques from various places, which is a huge logical inconsistency.

Both the logic and writing style have significant room for improvement (high emotional intelligence statement).

The starting point for comprehension is a bit too high, 98, yet it's still just average. And to increase cultivation speed so rapidly with just a little more comprehension is laughable. This book is doomed to fail sooner or later.

The plot has recently fallen apart. The protagonist can kill anyone he can defeat without hesitation, acting arrogantly, which is fine. But the problem is when he encounters a skilled opponent he can't beat, the opponent is surprisingly reasonable and polite. In one instance, the protagonist even provoked the other first.

The combat power is described as terrifying, but the Dao foundation is only at the Foundation Establishment stage of the Immortal Cultivation path... Even though each Immortal Sect is incredibly powerful, the master of one of their halls is only at the peak of Foundation Establishment...

Problems started appearing in Chapter 21. The original text stated, "Most of those martial arts are only for the Blood Strengthening Realm, which are useless to Lu Changsheng right now." Does that mean he shouldn't cultivate them just because they're useless? Can't he increase his comprehension?

Even a random passerby's Turtle Yuan Disc at the same cultivation level can block a mental black hole. Is this divine technique that can produce boundless divine power fruits really that trash? Your setting is too damn low. You even used your trump card to fight a random passerby. You were so arrogant before, and this is all? It's disgusting.

If you create your own martial arts, you should at least explain the underlying principles. Simply stating the power and rank makes it both empty and awkward. You should write down the training method, usage, and source. Similar to your self-created turtle-style fist technique:

Let's cut down on the pretentious stuff. There aren't that many people who just want to gossip and be enthusiastic bystanders all day long.