The Immortal Cultivation Tale of Mei Ning

Next up is the reincarnation of Han Daozu's sister, possessing the Jade Phoenix Marrow Body; the best friend of the young master of the Star Palace; the woman the young master of the Star Palace cannot have; the master of the Silver Moon; the future number one demon of the Chaotic Star Sea; the supreme elder of the Falling Cloud Sect; the terminator of aging of the Nascent Soul stage; and the youngest Nascent Soul cultivator in the human realm.

Don't write something that uses dozens of times more resources than others, only to find your progress is several times faster. Is that genius? Or is it pig farming?

The portrayal of Han Laomo's emotional fluctuations, body language, and facial expression control is too poor. This explains why Han Laomo was prone to emotional fluctuations during his cultivation in the mortal world. But what's with him standing up and exclaiming "Little Sister" upon first meeting the protagonist?

The above images are from Fanren Xiaozhan (a website/platform).

It's the novel you wrote, *Vermilion Bird and Departing Fire*. I dropped it after reading about half of it. The protagonist saves too many people. He saves everyone, whether they're related or not; it feels like he's a saint.

The first half was alright, but the second half... Especially the parts with the Tiannan Luoyun Sect, became unbearable... Zi Ling even got jealous of Mei Ning and Han Li... It turned into a palace intrigue drama.

Let's nurture her for now. She has a strong cheat ability, but the protagonist is Mei Ning, not Han Li. Hopefully, this won't be a babysitting story; she should seize opportunities when necessary, and suppressing her cultivation level and combat power is unnecessary.

Actually, Mei Ning's high water level isn't necessarily a bad thing. What really makes me want to curse is that the protagonist himself is a ruthless underworld figure who uses people to make pills. Then, during the Mulan War, he suddenly starts spouting patriotism. Can't he write without all this? I'm paying to have fun, not to listen to your lectures.

The more I look at it, the more something seems off. Why does it seem more and more like a female-oriented online novel? What does it mean to have a gentle personality? How do you describe it? The more you write, the more you stray from the topic.

I don't understand the author's intention. Is the protagonist going to get married or engage in harem battles for favor? I subscribed to the entire last book, and now this one is the last.