The Immortal Cultivation Tale of Mei Ning

The next person to appear is the body of jade and phoenix marrow, the reincarnation of Han Dao's ancestral sister, the best friend of Young Master Wen, the woman that Young Master Wen can't get, the master of Silver Moon, the future No. 1 Demon in Chaos Star Sea, the supreme elder of Luoyun Sect, the aging terminator of Nascent Soul, and the youngest transformed god in the human world.

Don't write about spending dozens of times the resources of others, only to end up with progress several times faster than others? Is this genius? This is pig farming, right?

The control of Han Laomo's mental fluctuations, body parts, and facial expressions is so unbearable. This is also during the training period in the world of mortals. Han Laomo is indeed prone to emotional fluctuations, but when he first met the protagonist, he stood up and exclaimed "little sister" What the hell is this? Old Han's mind training in the illusion of Demon Xutian Palace was not so unbearable, right? Remove the stand up and just whisper "little sister". Author, your starting point is to use Han Laomo as "little sister" to start the story, but it is feasible to add a setting, such as after Han Laomo said "little sister". The protagonist thinks to himself, "Did my little sister see me and think of my little sister?", But the original novel between Han Li and Mei Ning did not say that she looked like little sister Han Li when they first met. Maybe I replaced the original Mei Ning, and my temperament is different from the original Mei Ning. The so-called similarity comes from the heart, maybe I am more like little sister Han Li? The addition of the above paragraph is to add an element. After the fusion of the time traveler from Blue Star and the original Mei Ning, the temperament will be more like that of Han Li. This is used to insert the plot, rather than the author's rigid insertion of the second creation into the plot. After all, neither the original book nor the anime mentioned that Mei Ning resembles Han Li's younger sister. And after discovering that the protagonist can control more than a dozen needle-shaped magic weapons at one time, the old demon's facial expression became one of surprise with his mouth open? At most, he frowned slightly. There are also twelve layers of Qi training to build the spiritual consciousness. Is the movement in Han Laomo's heart a turbulent wave? I'm afraid I'm going to die laughing, but Han Lao Mo already has the consciousness of the Nascent Soul at the elixir-formation stage. Compared with Han Lao Mo, the protagonist is still an inferior qi-training ant. Seniors, Taoist friends, and ants This joke is not a joke, it is true. The summary is that the writing of the old devil is too unbearable. He is like an ordinary person who has never seen the world. His movements, micro-expressions, mental activities, and the description of the crotch are completely inconsistent with the old devil Han. Isn't AI writing the book? Didn't the author polish it himself?

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It's the Zhuque Lihuo you wrote. I saw half of it abandoned it. The protagonist saved too many people. It doesn't matter whether it's relevant or not, it feels very holy.

The first half was okay, but the second half... When it came to the plot of Tiannan Luoyun Sect, I simply couldn't stand it... Zi Ling even became jealous of Mei Ning and Han Li... He had to rectify Gong Doufeng.

It feels like something is wrong the more I watch it. Why does it look more and more like a female video? What does it mean to have a gentle personality? How to write it? The more you write, the more you get off topic?

I don't understand the author's intention. Is the protagonist going to change his marriage or compete for favor in the harem? I just ordered the last book and that's the end of it for this one.

Keep it first, Golden Finger is very strong, but the protagonist is Mei Ning, not Han Li. I hope that the follow-up will not be a nanny story. If you get the opportunity, you will grab it, and it is not necessary to suppress the realm's combat power. The subject matter is niche, and there is no romance. Only fighting or the realm's combat power surpasses Han Li's are interesting. Help cannot be free. The plot can be brainless, but the protagonist must be unprofitable. If you are afraid of some readers' comments because you are snatching the opportunity, you will definitely be tied up and eventually become a joke.

I have no desire to watch the rest of the story. Han Li and I are brothers and sisters.