A Mortal's Cultivation: Vermilion Bird's Fire

The big problem: The label is misleading. In fact, this is a one-sided marriage, which is ambiguous. Small problem: It follows the original work, there is no innovative plot, and Han Li and Han Li are conjoined twins; the hook is quite big, but it is not the same thing in reality. The true immortal skills are not comparable to Dayan Jue. Don't tell me that the Big Eye Skill is focused on spiritual consciousness, so the protagonist's True Immortal Kung Fu cannot compare with spiritual consciousness. When the incomplete Kung Fu created by a Nascent Soul can surpass the True Immortal Kung Fu in one aspect, it can only prove that this True Immortal Kung Fu is just a piece of cake.

The protagonist has no consciousness of being a ruling class. The Danjie disciples are the ruling class of Huang Maple Valley. If they want to win the Great Yinjue, they are looking up to you. Even though Huang Maple Valley made an honest request, Senior Brother Lin did not dare to refuse. Going outside to talk secretly is in itself weak. Han Laomo himself was a casual cultivator and was cautious in doing things. The protagonist is a child of the family, so he should be high-profile when he should be high-profile, and he should be domineering when he should be domineering.

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is too passive, and Yingying Yueyue is doing poorly. So I think it's a female author who writes male videos in the same way as women's videos, but can't grasp the coolness, which makes it look very awkward.

There are too many secondary settings. Mortal fans are advised not to read it, otherwise they will definitely criticize the author. There is also the poisonous point of male-to-female transformation. It is very likely that the author of the female video came to write it.

Authentic female video, classic fighting power fluctuates, and ambiguous quarrel with Han Li

I read dozens of chapters, and the protagonist added all kinds of plug-ins to the sky, but his performance was unbearable. Not to mention other things, the plot against Han Li also took many risks, but only for a few spiritual grasses. If the protagonist had calculated mentally and had no intention, I would have given a high opinion to the plot to seize the Sky Vase, but the result...

Ai made a rough picture of the main character Luan Xinghai during the Dan Formation period, with the spiritual pet Zhiyang Bird behind it

Male to female is not necessarily a female video, after all, transformation is also an old thing from the beginning, but! ! ! The opening scene shows the protagonist being cheated and injured by a scumbag. With this kind of plot, whether it is the original protagonist or the protagonist after time travel, it can be directly judged that this is a pure female video 😅

Wherever Han Li goes, the protagonist goes. It's really boring to write like this. Like a follower, there is no protagonist without Han Li.

Who is Ping An in all this? Is the author looking for a pirate?