
A Mortal's Cultivation: Vermilion Bird's Fire
凡人修仙之朱雀离火
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- Completed
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- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 8mo ago
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I am Shennong
Big problem: The label is misleading; in reality, it was a one-sided marriage with ambiguity. Minor issues: It follows the original story too closely, with no innovative plot, and Han Li is practically inseparable from it; the overpowered abilities are exaggerated, but the reality is not quite like that, and the True Immortal techniques are inferior to the Great Evolution Technique.
The protagonist lacks awareness of his status as part of the ruling class. The Core Formation disciples are the ruling class of Huangfeng Valley; demanding the Great Yin Technique is a sign of respect. When Huangfeng Valley openly demands it, Senior Brother Lin dares not refuse. The fact that they're trying to negotiate secretly outside already indicates their weakened position.
Generally
I read dozens of chapters, but I couldn't continue. The protagonist is too passive, and there are subtle hints of him playing the victim. So I think it's written by a female author using female-oriented writing style for a male-oriented story, but she can't grasp the satisfying moments, making it feel very awkward.
There are too many secondary settings; fans of "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" are advised against reading it, otherwise they'll definitely criticize the author. Also, the male-to-female transformation is a major flaw; it's highly likely this was written by a female-oriented author.
A genuine female-oriented novel, with classic fluctuations in combat power, and the female protagonist is ambiguous with Han Li while remaining stubborn.
Does the main character have a serious illness?
I've read dozens of chapters, and the protagonist has all sorts of overpowered abilities, yet his performance is utterly pathetic. Putting everything else aside, his scheme against Han Li involved numerous risks, all for a few spiritual herbs. If the protagonist had been more deliberate in his plot against Han Li, I might have been more impressed with his attempt to seize the Heavenly Bottle, but instead…
Nie Lin
AI created a rough image of the protagonist in the Chaotic Star Sea Core Formation stage, with the spirit pet, the Fat Sun Bird, in the background.
A male-to-female transformation doesn't necessarily make it a female-oriented novel; after all, body-swap is an old trick on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform). However!!! The opening scene features the protagonist being deceived and hurt by a scumbag. With this plot, whether it's the original protagonist or the transmigrated protagonist, it's immediately clear that this is a pure female-oriented novel. 😅
Wherever Han Li goes, the main character goes too; this kind of writing is boring. He's like a shadow, wherever Han Li is, the main character is there too.
Who is this "Peaceful World" person? Did the author hire a paid troll?