A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Beginning with the Heaven-Piercing Bone

The protagonist's thoughts are the author's thoughts. Don't engage in some intellectual manipulation in order to force the plot. The protagonist is now faced with two choices: joining the seven sects or becoming a casual cultivator. Being a casual cultivator has no access to foundation-building elixirs and exercises, and is not suitable for dogs.

To put it simply, the protagonist's robbery of the Lu family's wind-elemental spirit and Chen Qiaoqian's Foundation Establishment Pill occurred on their return journey after purchasing the Azure Dragon Flag, far before their betrayal of Chen Qiaoqian.

I felt there was too much preaching or self-talk. Seven or eight chapters covered the undercover operation, the "golden finger" (a special ability to manipulate events), and the timeline—things that were actually pretty much shown in the first chapter. It felt like I stretched them out into seven or eight chapters.

Can the author have multiple female leads? And please, no original works! 😁😁

How could someone born like this not be subject to restrictions? As a transmigrator, what use is this talk of national sentiment? The best course of action is to quickly establish your foundation, befriend Han Li, and be transported to the Chaotic Star Sea to develop your career. What's the point of restrictions when you're so far away? Stop talking about sucking up to Han Li.

Even when killing, he holds back (ಡωಡ) Hilarious! Are protagonists like this still popular? Aren't all high achievers ruthless and decisive, eliminating all threats?

Even if Xin Ruyin is talented, there should be a limit. Writing it like this is worse than having a system. No matter how charming Xuan Gu Man Hu Zi is, he is still a high-level cultivator who kills without hesitation. Will he take them to ascend to the Spirit Realm later? With so many concubines, he imprisoned a Nascent Soul cultivator and released him after stealing his treasures.

I couldn't stand it after reading just two chapters. In those two chapters alone, there were at least 10 original settings, and the author seems to think they're very clever.

Authors who write about ordinary people often project themselves into the characters' lives, which is why we often see protagonists behaving in a subservient and obsequious manner.

After seeing the character card, the author is truly talented; the author risked his life to travel to a small southern country to woo Xin Ruyin.