A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Beginning with the Heaven-Piercing Bone

I always felt that it was preaching or talking to myself too much. Chapter 7 or 8 only talked about the undercover "Goldfinger" timeline. In fact, it was almost shown in the first chapter. Chapter 7 or 8 was written abruptly.

The protagonist's thoughts are the author's thoughts. Don't engage in some intellectual manipulation in order to force the plot. The protagonist is now faced with two choices: joining the seven sects or becoming a casual cultivator. Being a casual cultivator has no access to foundation-building elixirs and exercises, and is not suitable for dogs. It means that the original Dayan Jue Spring of Spiritual Eyes, There is no chance of teleportation array. What is more realistic is that Gushuang Puming did ask you to come to the seven sects as an undercover agent. He knows your identity and your life is in the hands of others. He always pays attention to your information. You want to be a casual cultivator. If you don't join the seven sects, isn't it a rebellion? This is not a way out. For you to be undercover, you have to be more useful and perform better. It is no big deal. You have to have a high status to provide key information to be worthy of being used. Pure is troublesome. In the end, you still have to join the seven sects. As for the fear that Xiang Zhili will find out about the physique of seizing the body and refining the body to incarnate pure He is suffering from paranoia due to persecution. It is unrealistic. Seizing the body does not increase his lifespan. Can he be allowed to ascend to the spirit world? It is estimated that Seizing the body will be dead before he can practice to become a god. Refining the incarnation is purely redundant and does not help at all. There is no opponent in the human world, and there is no Xuantian Spiritual Treasure that is useful. Join the seven sects and have one in the Immortal Ascension Conference. , Senior Brother Lu can get two or three for absolute foundation building by planning, and it is not the spiritual root qualification of the old demon. If he does not participate in the Blood Forbidden Land, he will retreat to the Spring of Spiritual Eyes for two or three years, and then Lao Xiang will leave. After all, he is here to find the Ascension Node, and he cannot stay for a long time. He will devise a chance to arrange a technique. , You can run around and mess up the sea of stars without being threatened by Gu Shuangpu. When I return from having a baby, I won't eat beef. It's not up to you to decide whether to destroy Gu Shuangpu. If you are stronger, you can repay the kindness of the Mulan people. Why do you have so many choices? Don't engage in some plots just for the sake of a quick inspiration plot. It's very intellectually depressing.

Let's just say that the protagonist went to rob Lu Fenglinggen and Chen Qiaoqian's foundation building pills when they were on their way back after purchasing the Qingjiao Flag, and it was far from the time to betray Chen Qiaoqian. The protagonist killed the people named Lu and robbed them of two foundation-building pills, leaving the Lu family's foundation-building elders and Chen Qiaoqian alive. The protagonist still felt that he was principled and measured. This is still the situation where Yin Ruyin's master and servant live together with the protagonist. The protagonist comes alone to rob the road. Killing one person will cut the grass without eradicating the roots🤡

Can the author have more female protagonists? And don't be original😁😁

How could such a birth not be banned? As a time traveler, you have a bullshit feeling about your family and country. The best strategy is to quickly build the foundation and then befriend Han Li and teleport to the Chaos Star Sea for development. Banning it from such a distance is useless. Don't keep talking about licking Han Li. During the insurance period, there is no need to risk gambling on the cause and effect line. The alien spirit root is also familiar with the plot. As long as you have some brains to practice, you don't need to use plug-ins, at least until you have enough resources to transform into gods. Everyone who has read the original work of Mortals will know it!

You have to keep your hands when you kill someone (ಡωಡ) It's so funny. Is this kind of protagonist still popular now? People with good grades don't always kill decisively and eradicate the root of the problem.

After reading the character card, the Mulan people risked losing their heads and went to the small country in the south of China to pick up Xin Ruyin. The author is also a talented person.

I just couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. In these two chapters, I created at least 10 private settings. The author seems to think he is very smart.

Authors who write about mortals do so on their own behalf, so you can often see the protagonist behaving in a subdued manner and licking the dog.

As a person who listens to novels, I feel like it's grinding.