The Undead Scourge Starts with the Graveyard Demon

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Yumin is the only author I have seen whose writing is getting worse and worse. Now he is in the fifth grade at most. He might as well let AI write it.

I would like to give you a small suggestion. After you finish writing, you can let AI polish it. The author's imagination is at the first level from the starting point, but his writing has not improved over the years.

It feels like what the author wrote is not like an undead, but a masked temple 🙂, how should I put it? . . The undead written by the author are too humanistic

A track that I have been traveling alone for 20 years

Or the undead lord Wen Duiwei of the Feather People

A few words, to be honest, the IQ of the undead seems to be too high.

In this book, are the undead so smart? He's so smart at level one, and he'll probably be as good as heaven in the future.

Everyone has the premise of failure. How can the protagonist stand out? And the protagonist is still lagging behind for so long. Is it possible that everyone else is a waste? 🤔

You are the only author who I feel needs to use AI to polish it. Your writing style is indeed not as good as AI. You can just honestly control the plot direction and imagination. You really can't control the writing style.

The writing is as bad as ever, but the imagination is very good. Looking at: Invincible Heroes again, I knew it was Featherman. Alas. . .

I hope that in the later stage, the explosion of troops will not be too exaggerated, the protagonist's territory will not be too large, and it will not be as difficult to remember as Breath of the Dead.

It's a pity to abandon it because it tastes so tasteless. After reading a little bit, the biggest feeling is that it is not as good as the previous one (the imagination is as good as ever). There are some chapters where the traces of AI are suddenly obvious. Maybe the author tried to use it but used it sparingly. The main reason is that there is no meal replacement to read. This book is up to you whether you want to read it or not. I'm here.

I just finished reading Breath of the Dead, but I haven't read this one yet. I feel that Breath of the Dead is not as well written as Evolution of the Undead in Endless World, and that one is a mess, which is a pity.

Damn, at first glance, I thought some author plagiarized the online game Judgment of the Feathermen. The name Graveyard Demon is so classic. But when I saw it, I found out that the author was me. That's okay, hh

It feels like the Yumin has a great sense of anticipation. Every time I see the buildings being upgraded and I get treasures, I'm very excited. This book's writing feels much better, but it still has the same old problem of being a bit sluggish in writing. There are too many descriptions of the environment. What can I say, it just feels like the writing is a bit mixed. But the main line is not clear. It seems to have been updated a lot but there is not much information. Encountering enemies, describing enemies, devouring enemies, the transformation of the Graveyard Demon is over. In the battle scenes, the strategy is very simple. There are hundreds of chapters at present. The general background is not clear. It is said that there is a main line. It can be upgraded to the graveyard, but the upgrade is still very slow. Traditional routines include upgrading monsters and blasting equipment, placing copies in the auction house, etc. But these are all vague and uncomfortable.

I read the newly updated chapters today and found something was wrong. The author clearly stated that the area of ​​the cemetery is about 800 square meters. It sounds quite small, but in fact it is only as big as two basketball courts. This size is naturally large for a person, but it is a bit too small for a lord. But in the author's previous description, I saw a grave, a forest, a tent, a strange tree, and so on. It sounds like a lot of things. But in an area the size of two basketball courts, I feel like there is absolutely no room for so many things. Another one, the protagonist now has hundreds of subordinates. If you add in the larger number of bone dogs, how could so many people fit into a space as big as two basketball courts? Not to mention there are a lot of buildings here.

I don't know why this article feels a little better. Is it because of the use of AI?

The idea is first-rate, but it always feels a bit generic. It is similar to the online games Judgment and Disaster Master. It turns out that the author is a Yumin 🤤🤤

I have the impression that I have opened this author's book many times, but never read it very long. It has been the same subject for more than ten years, and now it is on the cover.

Judging from the first copy, the author's writing style is still good, after all, it can be regarded as an antique. Originally, judging from the development of the plot, there was absolutely no problem in writing two more similar copies. As a result, the author's old habit relapsed. Even before I saw the second copy, I knew there was a reason why 1 million words couldn't be considered a high-quality product.

Have you ever been an undead person? How do you know so much?

After reading so far, let's summarize: First of all, according to the grade system, we have just reached the turning point of upgrading from white quality to green quality. Basically, it means that the protagonist has finished his Qi training and is about to start building the foundation. From gray garbage to forcible piecing together, and then to the exploration of white quality, he has finally found the right path. The direction of urban development and self-ability improvement has basically been determined. The next step is to build the foundation. This stage should be the most important stage for the protagonist. I look forward to the protagonist's growth next. Secondly, according to the current plot, I feel that the protagonist still prefers the Eastern aesthetic at heart, which I also like very much. Although the Graveyard Demon is biased towards the West for various reasons, whether it is the fusion of Peach Blossom Spring, the Mountain Temple, or the Fire in the Candle, I can feel that the protagonist is moving closer to the East. I just don't know how the author will arrange the protagonist's whereabouts, but the author's imagination is still very exciting. Although the protagonist prioritizes territory development, his personal career growth also makes me very curious. I wonder if there will be a job change or other growth and development in the future. The protagonist's personal ability is still relatively weak, but although C's ability is not strong, it is very distinctive. The elves' auxiliary magic, the study of botany, and the poison ability that has not been used yet. I really look forward to the strengthening and development of these abilities in the future, but I am afraid that there are too many things that the author forgot to write in the end hhh. Furthermore, I have read many of Yumin's books in succession. I found that his story line continuity is really strong, his writing of big scenes is also great, and his character creation is also great. However, he seems to rarely write about daily life, and there are rarely mascots, such as pets, around the protagonist. I feel that the "human" spirit of the protagonist is a little weak, basically. It serves the main plot, and the protagonist this time is also on the road to becoming stronger without touching the ground. I feel that the protagonist is quite tired like this. I hope that the author can arrange something for the protagonist in the future that can relax him and heal his mood, such as the companionship of kittens and puppies, or adding a little comedy to the daily routine of dolphin characters. However, the plot needs to be spicy and cannot be forced. Finally, I have always admired the author's writing style that does not give the protagonist too strong a golden finger right from the beginning, resulting in the protagonist being basically trapped by the golden finger, with a lack of growth system and predictability. The protagonists of Yuminda basically started to rise through a not too big opportunity, and their characters are also very self-reliant and strong. The protagonists also know the value of hard work. They will not fail, will not give up on themselves, and will not be arrogant and fall into the Long Aotian mode. This kind of thing is really exciting. I know some book friends will also attack and say that the author only writes the same routines, but I want to say that in fact, the author of every book has new innovations and new ideas. Just like the protagonist in his works, he has been working hard and growing, and has never failed. I believe that persistence will always have results, especially this kind of persistence, so I hope the author will work hard and output better content for us. We readers will always support the author. Thank you~

Someone recommended the book and said it was a perversion that specialized in undead. After reading it, I felt like the undead himself was writing the book.

The author is obsessed with drawing and doesn't update it properly, hahaha

What kind of game is this? I want to play it. Can anyone give me some directions?

Feathermen, Feathermen, let me ask you the difference between undead, undead, and immortal. Is there any author or expert who can give me an answer? The common skeletons, zombies, ghosts, corpse witches, knights, Darth Vaders, vampires, gargoyles, Frankenstein, etc. All belong to them. Other games: Dark blood, clay, steel, fire, 4 kinds of stone demons, Warcraft's crypt lord, and the Dreadlord are nothing. Dou Bao said that the undead in Warcraft 3 can be roughly divided into 4 types. 1. Spiritual undead (pure soul, disembodied body,) 1. Shadow (Shade) Acolyte sacrifices only the soul, permanently invisible, pure spirit, physical attacks are almost ineffective, and is only used for reconnaissance. 2. Banshee (Banshee) is the remnant soul of a high elf who died in battle. It has a spiritual form and can turn into nothingness to avoid physical damage. It has a wailing soul spell and a standard wraith undead. 2. Corpse Necromancer Creation (Corpse/Skeleton Activation, Corresponding to "Necromancer Creation") 1. Summon: Skeleton Soldier/Skeleton Mage Necromancer summons a skeleton puppet without an independent soul. When the driving energy dissipates, it turns back into bones, and the necromantic spell is a temporary undead. 2. Ghoul: The rotten corpse resurrected by the plague, a basic melee corpse soldier. 3. Abomination: A giant corpse monster made of multiple corpses stitched together. 4. The meat grinder is a siege equipment loaded with corpses and operates on the necromantic energy of corpses. 5. FrostWyrm The dragon skeleton was awakened by the dark magic of natural disasters, creating a skeletal dragon-shaped undead creation. 6. Crypt Demon (Spider) The spider corpse is activated and the underground skeleton monster. 3. Cursed flesh-and-blood immortality (intelligent creatures during life were transformed by plague/curse, between spirits and corpses) 1. Acolyte is a living person who voluntarily loyal to the Lich King. He is slowly transformed by the plague, leaving his half-living and half-dead cursed body. 2. Necromancer is a fallen human mage whose body is not completely decayed and is proficient in summoning the undead. 3. Death Knight (DK hero) The soul of the knight who died in battle is bound by Frostmourne. The flesh and blood remain but the life is dead. The standard vampire-style curse in the World of Warcraft world is immortal. 4. The Dread Lord (DL hero) Nasrezim, a vampire demon, has its own immortal curse and has the same origin as the vampire setting. 5. The Lich (Lich hero) mage abandons his body and seals his soul in the bone box, leaving only bones + soul, a high-level necromantic caster. 4. Special hybrid unit (stone/inorganic transformation, classified as undead in the game) 1. Gargoyle (Gargoyle) rock body + natural disaster undead energy infusion, can switch to flying/stone statue form; DND original gargoyle is a demon, but Warcraft 3 is set to be a creation of the undead. 2. Obsidian Statue/Destroyer An obsidian structure driven by shadow energy, a purely inorganic undead creation, the Destroyer is a hybrid form of a void spirit body transformed by the statue absorbing magic power.

There is a Fortress Fruit in the world of One Piece, which can put soldiers, horses and cannons into the body, and can transform into a super fortress when necessary. Is there any clue?

Myth of the Dead is good, but Breath of the Dead is a mess. I don't know what this one will be like.

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