Everyone Sets Sail: My Submarine Seems to Be Alive!

Although the author said there were foreshadowing elements and the protagonist wouldn't suffer, I still felt incredibly annoyed while reading it. Even though there were gains after the beatings, couldn't there be less of the protagonist's suffering? At least let the protagonist be healthy at least once! 🙂🙂 The premise is excellent, but the plot is so confusing I don't even know how to describe it. 💀

"How exactly did he manage to turn an Old God into a throne?" I will spend thirty years offline researching this question.

In this kind of game where everyone travels through time, babies, disabled people, and people with Alzheimer's are practically doomed from the start.

The protagonist must be crazy, wearing equipment that reduces recovery when injured.

Is cigarette really that important to smokers?

The scene descriptions and imaginative settings are good, but the various tests are too verbose and feel meaningless. A simple "test" followed by the results would suffice. Of course, if you're just padding the word count, then ignore this. There's also a lot of internal monologue.

As above

The early progression and development were great, but the style changed later on.

Authors, please stop having the protagonist think and then only say half a sentence every time... And find a different way to place foreshadowing... There are just too many of these half-sentences.

I don't understand, why would a submarine need fog to hide underwater? Is it to surface, release fog, and fight with other submarines? Is it to exploit its weaknesses and avoid its strengths?