Lord: Starting from a Taoist Temple

Wasn't it supposed to start at a Taoist temple? The protagonist doesn't even have a Taoist temple at the beginning.

Now that the most chaotic period is over, the country should be at its strongest. So where did these gangs come from? Don't even mention the Republic of China era. Why are there national welfare benefits for ordinary students? And students should be the nation's reserve force. How can there be gangs blocking the way of college entrance exam takers? Aren't you afraid of being targeted and eliminated?

Overall, it's alright, but the start is a bit unlucky. With over 500 participants in the Spirit Realm Trial, less than 5% of the total number of examinees, the protagonist is blocked from taking the exam right at the beginning. Given the already small number of participants, Guo Jia doesn't guarantee the safety of the examinees. He complains about the low number of participants while simultaneously failing to provide any protection for the examinees.

After reading Chapter 200, I couldn't help but feel unhappy. Shennong will be poisoned to death by this heroine. To be honest, I don't feel much of a bond with the male protagonist as soon as I appear on the scene. After that, I just feel stupid and have no strength and only feel sad. I just wait for the male protagonist to rescue me and be jealous.

The setup in the first few chapters is strange; it's more like a modern-day fantasy novel with royalty, sects, and gangsters as its core elements. No matter how powerful someone is, there's no reason for them to openly access another faction's talent pool. Whether they pass the exam or not is one thing, but this isn't just a slap in the face; it's an attempt to eradicate their entire lineage.

Speechless. If you're not good at writing about feelings, why don't you? Why are you so anxious to create a female protagonist? How many days have we known each other? Women must have it, but there is no need to be so anxious. Also... The protagonist's mother is really poorly portrayed. Innocent and good at giving advice. Finally... Is this book about one girl or multiple girls?

Also, your book's pacing is too fast, and the plot twists are too overpowered. Look at how much time has passed and how many extraordinary armies the protagonist has developed. Everyone else is an idiot; their development over a hundred years is less than the protagonist's six months.

While I enjoy the exciting battles and storylines, other protagonists' development time is measured in years, but our protagonist's is measured in days. Every time there's a fight, another problem arises a few days later. So far, he only has a maximum of one or two weeks of stable development, never more than a month.

This is beautifully written. It was a very enjoyable read. It felt like stepping back into the days when I was in elementary school and reading novels 15 years ago.

Author, you should read it yourself when you have time. The pacing is too fast; a new enemy appears every few chapters. I don't know what you're trying to achieve with such a fast pace.