Lord: Starting from a Taoist Temple

You're awesome, it's a fusion of martial arts + magic + immortality. However, I saw a few pictures that were all about farming and upgrading, which is boring.

I heard that a female protagonist is pursuing me 😍😍😍

Didn't you say start from the Taoist temple? The protagonist doesn't have a moral perspective at the beginning.

Now that the most chaotic time is over, now should be the time when the country is at its strongest. Where did the gang come from? Not to mention the Republic of China, then why are there state benefits for ordinary students? Moreover, students are supposed to be the national reserve force, but there are actually gangs blocking the way for college entrance examination students. Are you really not afraid of being targeted for elimination?

Overall, it's okay, but the start is a bit toxic. There are 500+ people participating in the spirit world trial, which is less than 5% of the candidates. However, the protagonist is blocked on the roadside at the start and is not allowed to take the college entrance examination. Guo Jia has no guarantee for the safety of the candidates when the number of people is already small. On the one hand, he complains about the small number of participants, and on the other hand, there is no guarantee for the candidates.

The setting of the first few chapters is very strange, more like the kind of underworld immortality novel that puts on the modern skin of the royal family, sect, and gangsters. No matter how awesome you are, there is no reason to openly touch the talent pool of other forces. Whether you pass the exam or not is one thing. This is not a slap in the face, but to cut off the roots.

After reading Chapter 200, I couldn't help but feel unhappy. Shennong will be poisoned to death by this heroine. To be honest, I don't feel much of a bond with the male protagonist as soon as I appear on the scene. After that, I just feel stupid and have no strength and only feel sad. I just wait for the male protagonist to rescue me and be jealous. Then the male protagonist is a human being in his second life, and he also falls in love with a 16-year-old underage girl. . . Apart from the toxic emotional line, the book is still readable.

Speechless. If you're not good at writing about feelings, why don't you? Why are you so anxious to create a female protagonist? How many days have we known each other? Women must have it, but there is no need to be so anxious. Also... The protagonist's mother is really poorly portrayed. Innocent and good at giving advice. Finally... Is this book about one girl or multiple girls?

Also, the pace of your book is too fast and the ambiguity is too high. Look for yourself how long it takes and how many extraordinary armies the protagonist has developed. Everyone else is stupid, and the development for hundreds of years is not as good as the protagonist for half a year.

Although I like fighting and exciting plots, other leaders' development time is calculated by years. Why is our protagonist calculated by days? Every time after a fight, things start to happen a few days later. At present, it can only take a week or two to develop stably, and there is no stable development for more than a month. And now it is three months or four months after entering the spirit world. Anyway, in less than half a year, the protagonist can already develop into a great lord for fifty or sixty years.

So well written. It's very, very comfortable to watch. It's like going back to the time when I was reading novels in elementary school 15 years ago.

There are several hundred people in the gym, and how many villages are under its jurisdiction, with 50-60 people in each village? Do you think it is reasonable? I want to punch someone when I look at it. There is a lot of logic and data in it, which is outrageous even for elementary school students.

In the beginning, the protagonist talks about time travel in front of her mother and her mother doesn't hear clearly. It's already 2026. Is there any author who puts such poison in it? Anyone who can continue reading after reading this paragraph is a genius.

Author, please read it yourself when you have time. The pace is too fast. New enemies appear every few chapters. I don't know what you are doing with such a fast pace.

Gym? Taoist temple? This reminds me

The writing is good, the world view is OK, the protagonist is not mentally retarded, and has no fighting power. The current content is good, and it can be regarded as high-quality food.

The evil god of subspace upgraded into the larval form of a higher civilization god. The Crystal Marrow people came to a bunch of war fortresses, and new aliens entered the earth and were discovered. You don't want to develop at all, you just want to fight.

First of all: Now that the territories have been industrialized and other territories are still primitive handicrafts, the best thing to do is to dump products in large quantities. If the products are not sold and stored in the warehouse, they will not produce any value. They can be exchanged for various rare drawings, and then exchanged for various copies to obtain various high-end resources, and exchanged recruitment coupons to recruit various people. Type of work, and then import raw materials in large quantities, and then expand production capacity and upgrade products according to the situation Divided into three lines, the first line: talk to the court, the court purchases in large quantities and gives discounts, the second line: sells to domestic and foreign lords, various small families, adventurers, large-scale transactions. Under the circumstances, appropriate discounts will be given to increase their viability in the spiritual world. At the same time, if they have suitable products, they can then purchase them at designated locations to earn global resources. The third line: design products, achieve good value for money, and sell them to rich businessmen and even middle-class people in the real world, and then to all kinds of ordinary people. A lot of money can be exchanged for huge influence in the real world As for real cities, resources can be invested in running various vocational schools and colleges and universities. Those without talents can go to vocational schools and train professional jobs according to their needs. After graduation, they can work in the territory and earn their own territory points, which can be exchanged for money and products from the spiritual realm. The generation has more capital to fight for lords. Talented people can go to colleges and universities to teach various knowledge of survival in the spirit world. Various basic combat professions are opened. They can change jobs as soon as they enter the spirit world. In addition, they can purchase equipment and products to fight to become lords. With the spirit world being so generous, even in the real world cities in the future If there is no room for it, we can also learn from extraterrestrial civilizations in the later stage. They can invade the earth, and the earth can also invade extraterrestrial civilizations. If the enemy can go, I can go too. In the mid-term and late stages, we can also write about invasion wars Moreover, large-volume shipments can also bring down the prices of various equipment, allowing ordinary people to The people can afford it if they work hard, at least reduce the outrageous 70% of casualties in the college entrance examination in the spirit world, and the remaining 30%. It would be great if the remaining people can become lords, potential big customers. If they can't become lords, they can become adventurers. That is also a purchasing power. By then, we can also write about the changes in the real world. Seeing the big from the small In the war of civilizations, hundreds of millions of races compete, and the layout is liberalized. Don't be so small. Otherwise, why should the earth win? Just rely on the protagonist? Ordinary fantasy heroes can still write like this, but this is a lord story. Of course, there are always people who are tempted by such huge interests, but these things are not If it can be achieved overnight, then it will be spread out slowly with the protagonist's territorial strength and personal strength. The time schedule should be longer, and don't arrange it so tightly Territory development: various unique buildings, defense, production, production increase, wonders of war, upgrading and acquisition of various wonders. , The emergence and subsequent updates and iterations of various war beasts, mythical beasts, various large-scale equipment, the emergence and iteration of various equipment and techniques that cooperate with the various arms in the territory to accelerate training and enhance strength and potential, the emergence and iteration of various arms and professions, what kind of blood, Eastern, Western, and in conjunction with the upgrade system of each arm and the improvement of development potential For example, from the basic Taoist soldiers to the heavenly soldiers and generals who patrol the sky step by step, they are in the same line. This is well written and has a clear context. It was originally just a heretic, the lowest corpse exterminator, ordinary zombies that match the characteristics of the army, a copy refreshed by the Corpse King, and then Customized exercises have gradually upgraded him to a corpse exorcist, and then to the latest coffin weapon tailored for his profession. The development potential and strength of the arms have been improved, from white zombies, green zombies, flying sky, and corpse kings. The system is smooth and the context is very clear. This is well written and very comfortable to read. You can also write about silver zombies in the future. , Golden Zombie, Yaksha, Drought Demon Some lord articles are written too much and too complicated to remember whether the arms are elite or miscellaneous. In fact, the vampires that have recently appeared in the article are paired with professional blood mages, in conjunction with the vampire promotion system of Western Fantasy, such as baron, viscount, or the blood sea in the East. System, it would be good to give some exclusive copies and building development prospects. The same is true for the ghost way. The ghost and fairy system is also good. Level 1 and level 2 alone are too general and have no real sense Coupled with the improvement of the protagonist's personal strength, strategies for various NPC indigenous forces in the spiritual world, and the real world Various developments, breaking the plot, messing with malicious lords, slaying the evil gods of secret cults, fighting anti-invasion wars, and then killing the high-dimensional civilization cubs who engage in rituals. In the middle and later stages, they invade foreign worlds, invade alone, form alliances, and join the whole country and the world together. Various developments are described alternately, so that It's not boring anymore There is more writing, the timeline is stretched, there is no need to arrange it so urgently, the events come one after another, it is too deliberate and too tight. It has developed into what it is now too fast in a few months. The real world must also be given sufficient time to ferment and develop. Summary: Overall, the writing is good, and the flaws are not hidden. I almost ran away in the first few chapters. I also wish the author can make money to support his family in this world, settle down and live in peace, and become a great god as soon as possible. Platinum

There is a problem in most of the author's novels. The plot is too rushed, as if someone is chasing the protagonist with a knife. What others take ten years to complete, the protagonist must complete in one year, otherwise he will be beaten to death. The author lacks relaxation and grace, which is also the difference between ordinary authors and great authors.

Look at it now, the writing is pretty good. This grade is not what it should be. Come on, author.

In the old novel style, the two characters are too conflicted. All in all, it is very embarrassing. It makes my skin crawl. The writing style is too old.

Update quickly, update quickly, too little is not enough to read!

I suggest the author remove the stuff about Jiang family women. The subject matter is good, but this Jiang family heroine is really a drama. Those who don't know better think it's the overbearing president falling in love with me.

I'd like to see what kind of lord starts with a conduit

His data is wrong, sometimes low and sometimes high. Sometimes 1~4 is low level, and sometimes 1~5 is low level, which is very uncomfortable to watch.

Aren't lords the strongest? It feels like they are all lords in the later stage. You can become a lord by occupying a force. High-level occupation of low-level territory. As long as the character is strong, he can grab dozens or hundreds of territories.

I think the most embarrassing thing is that the Ulan people's technology and alchemy technology, etc., The protagonist can easily crack these technologies, alas

What I love most is watching your exercises written as if they are real.

I still recommend everyone to read it. This book has a story about the lords of the Eastern armies.

Ignore what others say. Anyway, I will vote for you monthly