One Piece: Steel Chain Finger

Write well and grasp the outline well, not bad

This book is great, cheers for the author

I kind of understand why the author's performance is so dismal. There are too many original plot characters in the book. It's not that it's not good, but there are too many. After reading it for a long time, it will become boring. If you don't write the plot of the original characters, and write your own original plot characters, it will inevitably make people think that it is selling sheep's heads and selling dog meat.

So far, it seems that there are no flaws at all. The writing is really good. I hope the author can be more creative and develop more moves.

Damn it, this book is the only one among all the Pirates fics I have read that is close to Oda's Devil Fruit setting. When I saw the latest issue of the manga, Luffy's rubber fruit directly transformed into the form of the human fantasy beast Nika, I was immediately reminded of this book. I can only say that the author is awesome! ! ! ! !

The ending of the tragedy reminded me of Bucciarati. Although it feels a bit like a literary youth, Bucciarati with steel chain fingers is the embodiment of enlightenment, and Victor perfectly inherited this will. This is the one in One Piece that makes me feel the most perfect when writing JOJO.

What do you think of these three generals?

The image of the big brother, Bucciarati's ability, ennnnnnnnnnnnn

A very good pirate fanfic. It's the one with the least poisonous points that I've watched for seven or eight years. ①The protagonist is not a time traveler. From the side description of the protagonist's "apocalypse" in the ending, it is more like a pirate native who has read the memory of an earthling and achieved alternative omniscience. In fact, in my opinion, this setting is better than the protagonist settings of many time travelers or ignorant natives. It's not that there is any difference in terms of plug-ins, but that the mentality is different. The protagonists of most fan fiction are time-travelers. There are two major categories in this category. One is to clear the level as if it were a game. They are like rootless duckweeds in this fan world. The author who created them is just to make readers happy, and there is no core in essence. The other part of the time traveler protagonist wears the skin of the red spirit to make a revolution, completely ignoring the difference in world view and era. Just like Long Aotian, a little red spirit skin popping out of his mouth can shock a large number of people. To follow him as a saint, if the writing style is not suitable, it will look very dramatic and politically correct. But for the indigenous protagonist who doesn't know anything about the plot, it also makes many readers who have read fan works for a long time feel as uncomfortable as constipation. There are very few people who can write this kind of protagonist well. ②The protagonist's combat power system is actually not bad. Although it does not focus on describing the growth of the domineering system, it is actually not bad. After all, the protagonist's combat power is more reflected in the development of fruits. Since the setting is not about mediocrity in combat, then don't describe a genius as a mediocre person. How many authors describe a genius as someone who struggles to learn everything. In fact, it is just to reduce the number of words, but the work will appear to be bloated. In my opinion, the protagonist's three-color domineering is also very reasonable for the protagonist. This kind of protagonist is worthy of the overlord-colored domineering and high-level weapons, not to mention that one of the protagonist's plug-ins is the natural color of knowledge. Many people think that the protagonist's Devil Fruit is too powerful, but since the author also set Im's ability to be the power of Devil Fruit, there is actually nothing to say. It's also quite reasonable. Moreover, it takes the protagonist 8 years to surpass Im's 800-year-old fruit ability, and it is set that Im has eliminated the shortcomings of the fruit (fear of the sea and self-consciousness of the fruit), thus making the protagonist slightly better than Im. It's pretty cool in my opinion. After all, as long as a person has a normal IQ and has the ability to eliminate his own weaknesses, he will never leave any weaknesses, whether he is a person in the pirate world or a real person. If you are given a choice, you will not leave a fruit with no weaknesses unselected and choose a fruit with obvious weaknesses. So, has Im himself been deceived? In fact, many people are worried about the death of the protagonist. But in fact, I am a reader who hates bloody knives. For the first time, I felt that the protagonist of this book died because of the fate he chose. Since the protagonist's ideal is to overthrow the world government, the key to defeating Im is to disable Im's immortality surgery and prevent his countless resurrection methods. Then the protagonist will link Im's destiny by himself, exchanging his own end for Im's end. In my opinion, this is not a bloody death, but a sacrifice he chose. Without the support of a system or messy plug-ins, if the protagonist can avoid death through something, then there is no reason why Im's 800-year-old heritage can't do it. It is because I have been reading books for so many years that I feel relieved about the death of my favorite protagonist.

The author is invincible. Oda may not have read your novel before updating.