Peninsula: Love Begins Tomorrow

I feel that the biggest problem is that there are too many female protagonists. Instead of casting a wide net, it is not a key breakthrough. Mina, Sana, Momo, and Tzuyu are the most popular and best-written characters. Bae Joo-hyun feels like she's a bit of a drama every time she appears. Ryu Jimin's quarrelsome feast should be quite effective. If you force it, it will be too long to finish it later.

The comments were deleted again. Although the ones deleted were the author's own, the ones I replied to were also gone.                                                                           How to solve the plot of A later? Your answer is that there must be a Shura field. So in the previous plot, what is the purpose of bringing the nine TWICE people from different practice groups, different practice rooms, and even different dormitories together? Isn't it to cultivate the group soul earlier? From the first chapter, you write that you can feel them, they are crying and laughing. When we first met Tzuyu, she also said that she will transform in the future. What this reveals, at least I understand, is that the male lead in JYP will make TWICE better in the future.                                                        ，？ Not to mention that girls still have tendencies between each other. For example, Jeongyeon supports Nayeon, Dahyun supports Tzuyu, and MISAMO is completely torn apart. When TWICE debuts, how will they let them go?                                                                                 TWICE，，？ Don't tell me just because you like it or are reluctant to give up. At least so far, the bond between the male protagonist and the girls is not enough, and the bond between the girls themselves is not enough.                 ，，， If the male protagonist wakes up the memory of his past life and feels the various situations of TWICE, and his behavior in coming to JYP is to cause a Shura field and destroy their group soul, then the male protagonist is not a scumbag, that is called an inappropriate person.                                         TWICE，，，，，，，TWICE，？ Or are you just going to write a character that is ruined like this? The inability to refuse, warmth, and kindness shown previously are all disguises. Even if the memory is awakened, there is no filter, and it is still selfish to go its own way?

Is this because after watching the romance series, I couldn't help but write it myself?

Suzy

Got7 debut? It's hard to top it🤣, this group feels like it's a hit or miss, it's not as good as the summit group, but it's better than other groups at the bottom. Solo feels better.

Let's add a bookshelf first. I read a lot of Rabbit's Gambit and tricked me into it. Then I wrote about Kim Taeyeon and Lin Yoona. I can accept Rabbit when I'm around 30, but I can't really relate to SNSD who is on the run 😰

What do you mean, it's free as soon as you place an order? You're just out of luck.

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It's okay, a bit like a mixture of asteroids and love. The setting is similar to that of Love, the same story about being excavated by gorillas abroad, the same GOT7, and the mole with tears on the corners of the eyes. The water is similar to an asteroid, the same apocalypse, but I haven't made my debut after reading the free chapter... The writing is a bit immature, but fortunately it's not too poisonous. But at this pace, I feel that the word count must be about the same as the current Asteroid before I can start it.

Ryu Jimin's father is an anti-China and pro-Japanese leader in South Korea.