1985: From the Start, Snow Sealed the Doors

I didn't even need to open it. Just by reading the introduction, I knew that he was the kind of male protagonist who did not do his job properly and liked to mess around. He was not good to his wife and children in his previous life, which made his old age miserable. If he lives a new life, he will become a maniac who dotes on his wife. I'm really jealous when I see it. Scumbags like this have a damn chance to be reborn, but what about ordinary people?

The male protagonist hunted two red deer and sold them for hundreds of dollars, which is understandable, but after making money, he had no plans for the follow-up. After reading about 50 chapters, I really didn't expect that the male protagonist could do hard work unloading coal and pulling trucks, and earn 2 yuan for 8 hours a day? Even if the male protagonist was an ordinary person in his previous life, no matter how troubled his family of origin was, in 1985, even if you were 30 years old, you would have experienced all kinds of things in your old age. When you are reborn in your later years, you still have to work for others and do manual labor. Isn't your rebirth in vain?

The writing is okay, but the way it is written is for a TV series, not a web novel. How should I put it? It doesn't quite fit the tone of the web novel. It's not exciting enough. It has too many twists and turns, too many bad guys, and the rhythm is too tight. Things happen every now and then. But if you follow the logic of reality, there will definitely not be so many high-frequency messy things. But according to the logic of web writing, If there are too many things that don't go well, it won't be fun enough. You may have made a lot of money and developed well, but you just don't feel happy because you haven't felt "good" yet. Then the bad things come, and the protagonist has to work hard again and even risk his life. To give a simple example, there are happy feelings and bad feelings. It's 28 points, normally it should be at least 46 points. The other way around, the novel is 82 points. It's like fighting against the sky. The writing is really not that good and has no connotation. It's just a simple and enjoyable novel. It also has an aggrieved plot but it has a popular break-up story. I didn't think it was that good before, but the best thing about it is the rhythm. Very good, there is a degree of relaxation If the author is confident and wants to sell film and television rights, he can continue to write like this. If he wants to do better in purely online writing, he can lengthen the rhythm, make it less troublesome, and highlight the advantages brought by the reborn (Only a personal opinion, different opinions can be discussed)

The latest two are really annoying to watch. It's understandable but I'm very unhappy. I've worked so hard to find a way, but I have to make such a small amount of money and have to give it to others. Although this other person is a family member, it seems that these family members are not good people. Really uncomfortable

I found this book by chance. I stayed up late that night to read it and finished it. I saved 30 chapters. When I was listening to the book today, I felt there was a problem. I don't know what you think, author, and I don't know how many people think the same as me: Author, is this a period piece? I don't think it's a problem if you occasionally use some modern buzzwords, but is it really okay to keep using them? For example: Chaowei, you've got it; Zhang Er, I beg you, please sell the car... Seeing you live a good life is more uncomfortable than killing me. It feels like a primary school student who opens his mouth after using TikTok too much. It's very fragmented😵

The authors have basically avoided the poisonous points of period articles. The mother is partial to her eldest son, but she also cares about the other children. The father is equal to a bowl of water, and the brothers are of the same mind. Although the sister-in-law likes to show off, is jealous, and does not want others to have a better life than her, she can only talk about it, and will not intentionally stumble. She will help when she can (she can borrow food. In the previous life, she did not stop the brothers from doing business together and engaging in that kind of plot with me and without him). Many books are like enemies in order to deliberately create conflicts. The reason why the woman's family looked down on the protagonist was that the protagonist was bad and could not let their daughter live a good life. After the protagonist made money, they naturally changed. I have to praise the author for this. A certain book designed a plot in which the mother-in-law stops her daughter because the protagonist's career is dangerous, which can be described as extremely poisonous. It's not dangerous to work at home farming, can you have enough to eat? In those days, what kind of money-making work was not dangerous except for public meals? You have to fight to decide the fate of the turds The author limits all conflicts within the family to a certain degree, and does not engage in mindless conflicts of interest that inexplicably become enemies. Every character and everything has the most basic logic in it. It's not intentionally disgusting, which is good. The protagonist has his own set of logic in his actions. He treats the people around him by giving him a hand and giving him a way out at critical moments. He will not be a nanny. The villain is not mindless, everything is mainly about making money, and there are no extraneous matters. It makes me vomit to see a scene where the villain clearly has an important plan, but when he conflicts with the protagonist, he ignores all plans and targets the protagonist. Many conflicts in the book are handled well, and the description of daily life is also very graphic. The progress of the protagonist is also step-by-step, with main and sub-plots. It is a good book that can make people look forward to updates.

Among the period novels I have read, this one is a rare masterpiece. First of all, the following points: Logical and reasonable: It is really rare. Today's chronological books, and even books that are not only chronological books, have a huge flaw, that is, logical conflicts or irrationality. The better thing is weak logic that is barely established but too forced. In this book, at least the latest chapter (90 chapters), the logic is self-consistent and reasonable, and there is no forced closure. It is very comfortable to read. Warmth: What are the main things you read about period literature? Probably 80% of the book is about the protagonist's business counterattack and becoming a big boss after being reborn, and the remaining 20% is basically about daily warmth and trivial matters. But at least 90% of the books are excellent in the trade area, but the daily trivial matters are a mess. It feels like a silver gun but a wax head. This book The writing here is very good, and it is one of the few I have encountered that I find good and can read it. In addition, the protagonist is also relaxed and relaxed when it comes to making money. Although most period novels are eye-catching with their small details at the beginning, this one also has a unique flavor in its step-by-step approach. Language communication: This is really good. The protagonist does not deliberately make jokes, which is really rare. In today's developed Internet, basically people who write books will use a few jokes. The appropriate ones are fine, and the inappropriate ones are almost stuck in the throat. However, the amount of jokes in this book is extremely low, almost non-existent. This is really good. Although the joke of "there is a book in the memes" is fun, in fact, reading too much will cause aesthetic fatigue. There is no external cheat: As the title says, apart from business and trade, what else were the highlights of historical novels in the past? Of course I am looking for thighs to collect. This is the case in quite a few novels. There must be a thigh next to the protagonist that will develop in the near future, but this thigh happens to be at a low point now. If the protagonist tries to pull it, the thigh will be considered a bigger thigh. In fact, after watching this routine too much, I feel like that, because too many people have written it. Now, as soon as this type of character appears, you can see it everywhere. To put it bluntly, it means that the homogeneity is too serious. Finally, the setting of the protagonist is also very good. There is no dirty talk, unusual behavior, inconsistency, pornography, or philandering. Really, I have seen movies that are labeled as having a single heroine but are deliberately ambiguous in order to attract readers with multiple heroines. The protagonist is like a cerebral palsy. He says he only loves the heroine, but at the same time he allows other female characters to express their love for him without expressing rejection or distance from each other. He even has to find a special female character. , For example, a woman with a wild nature, or a mother in the family who is wild, and the daughter is used to it and imitates such female characters. I have actually seen it (¯―¯٥) The author of that book even had the idea of ​​making a mother and daughter fight, but luckily he was sanctioned. I really don't know what the female character is in the eyes of that author. In addition, I have also seen situations where the protagonist behaves differently from ordinary people at the beginning. For example, he is very lazy, and is regarded as a lazy person and a rotten person in the eyes of the host family, and then the protagonist does not explain. I really don't know where the sense of empathy comes from when writing this kind of male protagonist, or who can be substituted? After reading this book for a long time, it is really a masterpiece. Although it is reasonable to say that the behavior of the protagonist is actually a normal person, normal people are already a very high standard these days. In reality, there are very few normal people. It is hard to expect that the protagonist in the book is a normal person.

I know you authors all too well. As soon as I get some results, I start to drift off. If your grades are not good, you cry for your father and mother.

I suggest the author not to write down how to get up every morning, how to turn on the stove, and how to eat. If you repeat it every day, it is too boring.

I grew up in a Shandong town in 1986. Why do I like reading this book? Because it is so similar to my childhood life decades ago, reading this book is like seeing memories from decades ago. My dad is the youngest and inherited the family business from my grandfather. Uncle Second uncle, my grandfather has also arranged a way out. The uncle is a soldier, the second uncle is a truck driver, and my dad takes over the store that grandpa opened in the town. My aunt is a well-known unreasonable person in the town, and she kept encouraging my uncle to give me a side house in my yard. The reason is that I want my eldest brother to build a house in the side yard and do a small business. Later, my grandfather fell ill and was hospitalized. He was a little confused and agreed to this while he was in the hospital. The commotion was particularly unpleasant at that time. My mother was angry that my grandpa was ignorant and partial. My second uncle and aunt saw it and came to make trouble too. They also wanted to divide the side yard of my house. My family was uneasy in those years, and my grandfather was in a bad mood because of this incident, and he passed away not long after 😢. Before she passed away, she held my mother's hand and said, "I'm sorry for you. Just take it as my own fault and let me swallow it myself" 😭. A few years after my grandfather passed away, my uncle and aunt still came to make trouble and wanted to divide the side yard of my house. Originally, my family was planning to build a house in that yard, but they kept it abandoned! Let me tell you my story again. On the day my grandfather passed away, I came home from school. As soon as I entered the yard, I stumbled and knelt there. Maybe that day, grandpa wanted me to kowtow to him and then leave! My grandpa loved me the most when I was a child. I really remember when I was a kid, my grandpa asked me with a smile: What do you want to eat? I said: I want to eat fried pork, what a day 😢