Enlightenment in the Old Days

The author looks here Big brother, I have already asked you, the solution is as follows

I can't understand it. It seems that the time traveler's brain has not been brought over. It is obviously a soul-traveling setting. Why does it feel like the indigenous people have absorbed the feeling of the time traveler?

My feeling after reading this is that I like this setting very much, including the practice system, but I feel that the protagonist has no motivation, the pace is too slow, and it is not exciting.

[Shangjiu Dao] Wen Zailu, after hundreds of battles, practicing Taoism Lotus in front of the Buddha, wealth becomes the mountain, destiny is clear Pity the world, forging the mountains, people in the song [Guangjiu Dao] Bushing the way of the world, carrying the jade dragon, the general in front of the door Ji Shanggong, Bai Shangong Home fresh food, drunk today Traveling thousands of miles, embroidering clouds and brocade, painting a beautiful heart [Mojiuliu] Stealing hands, coaxing and deceiving, begging for rice Howling wasteland, colorful troupe, happy fish Jin Yuan Tang, cutting off the solution, being lonely [ Other Ways] If love is deep, if you don't know you, how can you see the sea [Realm] Getting started, training, climbing the steps Opening the door, seeing the mountain, looking at the moon Fang Hua [Skills of the male protagonist] ① Text-Shi Zihou, knowledgeable Text, year-end scroll ②Wu-Zhenyang saliva, humming haqi, bone-holding technique ③Hun-calling soul, consciousness cutting, not falling for three lives ④Xing-Tengyun technique ⑤Guan-Tong Taoist, God watching the show ⑥Ming-Tian Yan's technique ⑦Taking-reaching for the stars

I am going to Chongqing to see a doctor now. If the author has a chance in the future, he will write a small side story, all about Xiaojiu and Zhou Jianye. If not, it doesn't matter. Maybe I will recover and survive. Come on, author, I don't know if I should come back and read it. The final monthly pass is all given to you.

The author just needs a big guy to help push the flow... It looks really good

I'm relatively earthy. Personally, I think the writing is good, and the words are very immersive when read. It gave me a strange feeling in the early stages, switching back and forth. The plot so far is interesting, but it doesn't advance very quickly, but it doesn't have much substance. It's concise when it should be, and complicated when it should be complex. Currently, the map only shows Dashan City, but there are many connections between Dashan City and Birufan. Is it because whoever the protagonist knows, he will meet in the past? I don't know how to write it later, which may result in a small vision of the pattern.

It was supposed to be a very exciting and interesting setting, but in the end, the realistic part was written in a boring way without any sense of expectation. It can be seen that the author deliberately did not want to write too routine and wanted to write his own style. The question is why are routines so popular? It's because they look cool enough. If you write like this, it's not routine, but it's not fun at all. How can you attract readers to follow it?

The author's choice of subject matter is too niche, and he also chose an unpleasant modern history. 80% Of people will probably not click to read it when they see the label of the Republic of China.

Order now is 500 each. Is it because I have high goals that I can't continue writing? I really have no money (

Whether it is writing or plot, it is better than most crappy books recommended by various starting points.

The content of the book is very good and the writing style is not pretentious. I have already voted for it three times. The title of the book needs to be changed. Although it is mainstream, it is not mainstream, hahaha

Why are the results so dismal? It's really good books but bad luck!

Just like the title, if you post a new chapter of an old book, you will be prompted that you cannot modify the completed work.

Increase the amount of interaction, start today

This book is so awesome. Many novels don't look like novels. They have to use a few modern words and memes. This one doesn't have this problem at all. It can make people completely immersed in it without being out of touch. The foundation is too deep, and it doesn't start high or low. I support it all. Qiangqiang, I don't need much recommendation. If anyone knows about this novel, it will definitely become a hit.

Kunde's

Less fun and slow pace. These are the two most serious pain points of this book. It feels like a low-end version of Big Eyes. Either improve the quality or increase the quantity, otherwise it will be difficult to win.

I've read the latest chapter. It's really a good drink in the alley.

Such a good book, not one of those people recommended it (do you have to spend money on marketing?), But I found it in the vast comment area, the author, come on💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

After reading the author's previous book "Lei Fa", I felt that it had a special flavor of cultivating immortals. I only found out about this book when I browsed through previous books and clicked on it to read the author. I never skipped reading this book, as if I was savoring a cup of tea. The more I read it, the more flavorful it becomes. However, the author's situation and mentality are a bit pessimistic.

The beginning was S, which was all praise, but starting from Chapter 20 to Chapter 30, it was fine grain again. Abstract. If you feel you can't stand it at the beginning, you can skip it and give it a try.

I feel like this book is getting better now, and the monthly ticket ranking seems to have gone up a bit.

The novel is really well written, the system is novel, and it feels a bit like the original world of cultivation.

I think it's well written, why isn't it popular?

It's a good book, and the setting and writing are very good.

I found a book that has the same subscription status as this book. Both have good plots, but the traffic results are terrible.

The writing is still good-looking, good luck to the author✊👍

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Come on, this is one of the few books I can read.