Forbidden Immortal!

I took a look at my previous works and they are all gone. What a pity.

In terms of favorite protagonists, they are Demon Prison>Disaster Tool>Buddha>Trainer>Zhenqi. If you read the full text, Zhenqi can be ranked 2 or 3. The number one in Demon Prison is unsolvable 😡

After thinking about it, I feel that the issue of the protagonist that everyone was discussing in the early stage is actually not about shaping or social phenomena, but simply about the protagonist. . . How should I put it? The protagonist simply doesn't look like a person who has lived for decades after being reborn through time travel. Too indecisive, or the inner drama is a bit too rich. No one who has experienced society has subjective initiative, the ability to act, knows what to do, what can be done, what cannot be done, and finally knows how to change oneself, and how to further implement the things that are difficult to change through planning. Instead of being like this now, just like a resentful woman in the palace, sighing after doing a little thing, and then not even having any follow-up thoughts.

The correspondence between the realms is extremely unreasonable. The Heavenly Spiritual Root + Spiritual Energy are sufficient. At the age of 28, I reached the fifth level of the physical body. However, this fifth level is not yet foundation building. Especially in the second chapter, it is said that this progress is considered excellent. The realm setting is broken.

It started well, and the plot unfolded reasonably and smoothly. But recently I have written incorrectly, I want to save the world, I have started preaching, I want to be a good person.

Can it be as long as the Zhenqi era this time?

I have read more than 20 chapters. The writing is smooth, but there is nothing exciting or attractive to read.

No belief, escaping from reality And the writing style is too upright, "good people should be held at gunpoint" I feel that this book is more upright than Buddha I guess it will be on the shelves to strengthen my Taoism Where is the buffoon that is essential in every book?

It feels too awkward and out of place. Besides, it really can't be compared with Konjac. It looks like a script ghostwritten by a studio

The compassionate, merciful and kind-hearted Holy Father

Generally speaking, this book can only give me the feeling of food and grass. . . My favorites in the past were Summoner of Disaster and Demon Prison. . In the Age of Zhenqi, Lord Buddha, the fifth level is okay. The new Forbidden Immortal released this time will probably reach Lord Buddha's standards in the end. . . After thinking about it carefully, the author's characteristics are the protagonist with three upright views, the supporting characters with their own characteristics, the villain with online IQ, rigorous plot logic, and detailed and unique background and system design. The weak point is that there are few explosive points. If you can produce an explosive point every once in a while, I believe you will be able to have a good memory and impression sense. . . In this regard, I still think the first two movies are very good. I can still remember them: The Treasure of Fortune for My Past Self, The Alternative Saber, Genghis Khan's Trial of the Brave, The Revenge of Monte Cristo in Chinese style, Super Martial Arts Luo Feng, The Four Demonic Monks, The Holy Sword God Jijiji, etc. . . Now this book, I feel that it is missing these unique highlights. To put it more formally, it means that it is a little less inspired and trendy. Probably because the author is an old man, he doesn't have the flash of inspiration he had when he was young.

The underworld world of immortality is barbaric compared to the main world, but the main world is only qualified because everyone is unified in cultivating immortals. In fact, does the main world really have advanced ideas to solve this problem? The protagonist is no different from talking about human rights and environmental protection in primitive society. The situation is that immortal cultivators see mortals no better than we see monkeys. If one day we teach monkeys language, and these monkeys had the same ancestor as us, do you think they should have human rights? In addition, immortal cultivators may also be able to communicate with other animals, and other plants and animals (perhaps metal and stone as well) are also "monkeys" with worse abilities. Now a stable and win-win environment has been formed (it is better for peasant immortal cultivators than big nobles). If the protagonist wants to break the situation by killing, it will only be worse. Immortal cultivators only know that there is a demon who specializes in killing people connected with mortals. Immortal cultivators will only enjoy less if they are separated from mortals, and mortals will have to endure more natural disasters if they are separated from immortal cultivators. The protagonist should do some enlightenment and establish an organization similar to animal protection to help mortals more, but the essence should be to explore the value of mortals. About Leader Li being able to help mortals but not helping: You can change the perspective. What mortals seek is the Dragon King. Who would think that the Dragon King must help mortals? Today he helps pray for rain, and tomorrow he helps to treat people. It is annoying to death. When the time comes, he will go to the sect to cry. God is not that kind. If a mortal has the ability to blast open a sect with a cannon, let's talk about it. You cannot blame a person for not helping because he has the ability. In addition, it is not a good thing to respond to requests. About the servants: Their family was able to survive the famine because of their wages, and they died because they did not follow the rules. There should be no objection to the result of death. The threat of hanging a corpse is about human dignity. It is too long, obscure and subjective, so I won't go into it. Let me ask: Do you think it is more serious to kill someone or to hang a corpse? I personally agree with the separation of immortals and mortals. I believe many people are like me. So do immortals want to save mortals?

I read the introduction and it's funny. Where are the resources? Do you provide resources for all people to cultivate immortality?

Why did the author write like this in the early stage? It's so tiring to read. Even if the author wants to give the protagonist an endogenous drive to change the world, there is no need to spend so much money describing the protagonist's inner growth. I feel that the main point of quarrel among readers is not the protagonist's perspective, but the process of the protagonist making up his mind in the early plot is too slow (originally the time-travel setting is so that readers can directly bring the complete protagonist without difficulty), and then describing the growth-oriented protagonist to a large extent is putting the cart before the horse. Coordinates Chapter 33

The author can refer to Xia Daoxing, Leader of the Six Paths, and Demon Prison written by senior Qidian. Just don't imitate him and be a eunuch all the time.

The protagonist of this book is too mother-in-law. The title of the book is Forbidden Immortal. You should not act domineeringly, but instead look at others at every turn. Can you show your courage in writing about Buddha's stick and leaving no one alive?

Xiao Ming is my favorite protagonist, he can play tricks, he is energetic, he can complain, he is a pushy boy, he is crazy, his characters are very vivid, and he incorporates a lot of two-dimensional elements Watch the university chapter of the saint repeatedly The other protagonists are not like this, they are too straight But Zhaizhu's counter-routine is quite interesting. Various classic plots are foreshadowed by novels or past life memories, and then the protagonist reverses the situation at a critical moment The classic boss in the scoring roll is difficult to win, intrigues, and serious injuries. I felt fine before, but now I like to watch the level without being injured. Either I crush it directly, or I make the boss suffer to death through calculations, and everyone betrays their relatives.

It's funny, first treat your own people as soft persimmons

Where do the resources come from? Cultivation of immortality without consumption?

I've read a dozen chapters and there's nothing wrong with it. But it just feels too deliberate. Many of the plots are just the author's big hand pushing behind the scenes, without a sense of immersion, and too impatient Also, it is too colloquial, with too much "traveler spirit", which makes people feel weird I don't know what happens next.

Has Zhaizhu completely abandoned the cultivation method of the realm during the Xia Daoxing period, or is it still a thing of the past? I really want to know when the conversion of this technology started.

I want to relive the classics but can't find them

At present, the way to accumulate should be to do things that are consistent with the way to accumulate the true meaning of the way. In this case, the Dao of tribulation should be about receiving tribulations and overcoming tribulations, and the Dao of sacrifice is to use one as a sacrifice to supplement the other. What are the current accumulations of Zhaizhu? Being a teacher + writing books and biographies + being in the system, I should have accumulated the path of civilization. The benefits are not good to get through the tribulation of poverty, sacrifice the chivalrous deeds in exchange for the Summoner, a tool of misfortune; be severely injured by a tile to get through the tribulation of the earth, sacrifice the leader of the Six Paths to get into the devil's prison; sacrifice the leader of the Six Paths to get through the tribulation; sacrifice the Mo Xialu to get through the age of true energy; sacrifice the postpartum anxiety to get through the heart tribulation, sacrifice the fake knight in exchange for the Buddha's stick, and leave no life; this In the middle chapter, avoid disasters and ensure that this trainer does not practice martial ethics to realize his dream; support the teachings and contribute to the great cause. I will be stronger after the sacrifice in the next game. I will be stronger after the reset... The accumulation of the Avenue of Disaster and the Avenue of Sacrifice should be enough, but I don't know what I want to sacrifice for this time. Of course, it is also possible that after surviving the typhoon disaster last time, there would be no need for sacrifice.

The morning dew disappears like my body, the world has become a dream within a dream, and the sad wind blows on my face, washing away the old grudges from the past.

The Devil's "The Tongtian Sutra" Buddhism's "Three Horizontal Worlds", "The Three Vertical Worlds" and "What's the Tathagata Now" The Demon Tribe's "Three Classics of Essence, Qi and Shen" What else is there?

Only now do I realize that I have read The Tool of Disaster by the author before, but not this other book. I read the comments section for this novel. The background is from other novels I have done before.

Speaking of what are the powerful techniques and people in the Confucian sect, I remember that the Confucian sect has always been quite embarrassed. Can the Wan Tu Yuan Evil Killing Sword Record of Taishangdao Dongfang Yi be considered half? Duanmu of the Liudao Sect is a Confucian cultivator. Are there any others that are powerful?

The plot is too contrived. The protagonist is not good

Is it necessary to spend so much pen and ink on the dual zones of the Zhenwu Sect? Isn't it interesting to spend so much pen and ink on the ideological confrontation with Lao Sun? Why not write about the Kun tribe?

Will there be a plot where the protagonist takes the gods from the main world to another world to show off?