Beginning from Predicting Death, Killing the Dragon and Becoming the Taoist

I haven't read it yet, but it made me laugh. Does the author have a glass heart? Just three words made you post forty comments, but no one responded to you.

I'm currently at chapter 180, and I can't stand it anymore. It's so boring. I was confused from the beginning to chapter 30 of this book. After chapter 30, I feel that this book has just begun for me. Personally, I feel that the 100 chapters from chapter 30 to the release are very well written. Various calculations, reversals, peripheral characters, etc. Are all very well written. However, since it was released, sometimes the protagonist can talk to himself for several chapters with zero interaction, and he can repeat what he has said repeatedly in one chapter. Various calculations also seem naive and far-fetched. Also, this is about cultivating immortality, not the political arena. If cultivating immortality requires so many clumsy calculations, then it doesn't matter if this immortal is not cultivating. In the final analysis, I did not feel any satisfaction from the article. The several re-cultivations of the protagonist have worn out all my patience. The weirdest thing about this book is that in this book, there are zero people who have any contact with the protagonist, no matter it is relatives, friends, enemies, or elders, the protagonist is like a ghost wandering in the world, and no one knows that there is such a person. It's like carrying an emulator and playing a stand-alone game.

Yes, I mentioned that the writing is not good. I think the writing is quite good and the plot is compact. So far, I can't fault the plot. The most important thing is that there are hooks and foreshadowings in many places, which are fascinating. Some people say that it is like AI, which is completely black. AI probably cannot write the feeling of being a fighter. The author is actually a fellow countryman with me. Can you update 600 times a day?

Volume 1: My Earthworm Master (Completed) Part 2: My Li Lei Master (Completed) This is currently the third volume, everyone is welcome to read

Isn't this a little bit? The protagonist is still borrowing Li Lei's front foot, and he reveals his true feelings to fight against the cannibals. After he is not restrained by Li Lei, he starts to kill an innocent person with a borrowed knife. This world is ugly and the world is bad. How did you come to the conclusion that I can harm innocent people? The protagonist also explained that he is not a cannibal but a murderer. It is understandable that the protagonist is not the kind of person who can risk his life for justice, but is this a bit

Li Lei is the master 🤭 and the bouncer 😌, and the cultivator is ⭐️wrath 😥😄! Li Lei is easy to train, good outdoors, easy to control, easy to show off The so-called slaying demons is because it is too exciting 🙂, ⭐️can't stand the anger, and wants to be exposed in front of evil spirits 😃, please lower the gear 😭! Good training: train ⭐️Wrath to be like yourself 😍 Good outdoors: Li Lei needs ⭐️Wu to often go outside to see monsters 😌 Good control: ⭐️Wrath is controlled and increases when seeing monsters Power, oh🙄🙄🙄😆😆😆😥 Good to reveal: ⭐️Let the evil spirits see their body in anger , begging the master to lower the gear 🙂🙂🙂😭 Those who repair Li Lei are all M, ⭐️ stay at home angrily, the master does not agree 😡, go and slay demons (exposed) [f n=31] Otherwise, increase the power. ⭐️When you see evil spirits when you are angry, Li Lei will trigger the bounce. ⭐️If you can bear the anger, just clamp it down and endure it. If you can't bear it, just oh I am going to slay the demons 😌😌😌! The more people you see exposed and stronger, the more satisfied the master is, and the more it stimulates Li Lei's desire for training, so ⭐️Wu can't stand it anymore, so he goes to slay demons and slay demons (reveal), the more satisfied the master is, and turns down the power, and then sharply increases the power, allowing Xing Fury to continue (slaying demons and slaying demons), and the cycle continues!

Didn't I just post a scroll that starts out very much like Netherworld Painting? Why can't I find my post?

The author can't control the plot. In the world of Xuanjian, practice qi and kill the fake Zifu. This is just written like this when it is released. It would be strange if it doesn't collapse later.

I like this protagonist very much. No matter who he faces, he dares to say no, and he dares to say that I don't want to. If you make him unhappy, your blood will be splashed all over you even if you die. The best time to read this book is when you are alone, using Li Lei, and there are all monks in the world who are invincible. Evil! Evil! Evil! Evil! Everywhere you look, they are full of man-eating demons! Kill! Kill! Kill! It's a pity that the protagonist gave up on Li Lei and switched to Shaoyin, which changed from a passionate story to a boring and sinister plot.

Taiyin is the master, and Shaoyin is the wife. When something goes wrong with the master, there are also some problems with the wife, so he can control the maids of Huode, but they can't control the evil slaves of water, so the evil slaves become lustful and want to make the wife and Shaoyin their own, and violate them violently. Those who cultivate Shaoyin are like Shaoyin's natal family People want to help Shaoyin inherit the inheritance of Master Taiyin, but the evil slave Shui De does not agree, so he hinders it. Now it depends on whether the widow Shaoyin will inherit the family property first and get rid of the control of the evil slave, or whether the evil slave Shui De will successfully train Shao Yin and ravage him 😍😍😍

I haven't read it yet, but according to the introduction, the population of the world in the book should be refreshed

It is suggested but not taught to the author to write a book and may be adopted as appropriate. In fact, you can use the realm of the Xuanjian system, and then add the settings of the interior and exterior scenes from the realm, instead of directly using the interior and exterior scenes as the realm, which is better. The current state of things is a bit strange. It cannot attract people who like the Xuanjian system, nor can it attract other people, so we have to start over. I hope the Taoist settings are not random settings, but have some basis, otherwise the reading will be very vulgar and have no artistic conception. After all, Da Chi Xian Sect is already very good at writing about thunder, while writing about the Five Elements and Five Virtues is very cliché. I hope I can write something new.

I now believe that this is the author's first book. The plot after Xiu Shaoyin is interesting but the setting is too poor.

That is, before each use, you can describe in detail that the protagonist is about to enter the death mirror. Every time the author writes about the death mirror, it is too vague and obscure at the beginning, resulting in the interweaving of reality and fantasy. If the reader is a little careless, he will not be able to find the main line.

It makes no sense, the protagonist system, the plot, the character's purpose, the main line, the hidden line, none of it is right. This book will not be published for a month, I will read it.

It seems to be the unified dilemma of Xuan Jianliu, the endless crisis and the sense of relief.

There are even gaps in the character changes and plot transitions. It is estimated that many people gave up immediately after reading the first part

Nowadays, the plot is becoming more and more boring as it is written. It is like a pool of stagnant water, and it can be watched or not watched.

I can only say that it goes against the heavenly cultivation system, and cultivating oneself to a certain standard relies on seeking. The purpose of cultivation is to have the qualifications to seek. Can you bear this?

Li in Li Lei should not correspond to fire, but Li in the hexagram. Combined with the thunder at the back, it forms an upper and lower shock, which corresponds to the bite and bite hexagram. It means clarifying the law of punishment and applying punishment and prison. It is also consistent with Li Lei's image of bullying evil and upholding righteousness.

The book is not bad. It starts low and goes high. It can be seen that the author has writing skills, but he probably has not written much online articles, or has not systematically learned to write online articles. There are often some contents written in the front that are too simple, which makes me have to think about what happened for a while, so I can pay more attention to it.

Why do you feel like you changed someone in the middle of writing?

It's really not possible after Shaoyin. It's too crazy to be tricked like this while holding a simulator. Later, Zifu hopes that the protagonist is just simulating the calamity, instead of rushing like this with no way out.

After arriving at Shaoyin, he began to lose his intelligence. . . Not interesting

Give me some help from the author, I want to see Haji Chan make the world flow with blood.

Dear book friends, what other novels are there in this "Taoguo" genre? I have read two books, You Gou in the Two Realms and The First Saint. Are there any other books about classical cultivation of immortality such as seeking the golden Daoguo?

It's 900,000 words, so why haven't we seen any superiors appear?🙂

I really don't want to read the introduction to supernatural powers in detail.

It's not enough. I feel like I need to keep it up. I'll wait until I get 100 pictures before I look at them.

It's well written, but the title is a little delayed. Come on.