Lei Fa Dacheng, You Told Me That You Are in a Strange World?

The author's novel style reminds me of Yan Leisheng's "The Taoist" Wu Xin is a little Taoist priest who suffered a lot of frustrations and frustrations in his fate and was finally forced to leave his hometown. However, he prefers the author's Zuo Chen, a great monk who sees all the sentient beings suffering along the way. This is the most eye-catching climax in this article. Those who follow the Tao are those who practice the Tao, regardless of Confucianism, Buddhism, Legalism or Taoism. When all laws return to the original line, practicing Taoism for the people to the best of our ability is the most worthy of recognition and praise. This should also be what I admire about the author's intention in the novel. The author should have a golden future ahead.

The writing is quite good, the stories are connected very smoothly and tightly, and the use of folk culture is also good. After reading so many novels, it is impossible for many novels to tell the plot honestly without being muddled. After reading this book, I finally got a complete story in my heart, an additional sense of satisfaction, and enriched my soul.

Very well written. The title of the book really needs to be changed, I almost missed it.

Is it well written? Not bad. Like it? Like. The first half is extremely gripping, the middle and rear parts are okay, not as gripping as the first half, but still interesting to watch. The rear part is a little fast and a little lacking, but it lands smoothly. Spreading Flowers—— Overall, I recommend reading it. Ask me what is good in the writing and comment on it. I can't tell, but I feel comfortable watching it. The rhythm is basically under control, the ending is a bit rushed but self-consistent, and the plot advances steadily. All of these are achieved, so I think this is a book that I can't comment on, but it makes me feel comfortable reading it.

The author is platinum-financed, and the first-class work has a third-rate title. But there is nothing that can be done about a new book. Maybe this kind of title is more attractive to read. I also came in to read the book with a refreshing attitude because I was waiting for the update of the master's book~ It turns out that I found a rare treasure. The writing is refined and mature, which is better than most of the current platinum titles with a low number of words. It feels like the martial arts novels of Jin Yong's generation in the last century 👍

It's well written, but the title is a bit vulgar.

Come on, Tietie, the writing is great! As long as you keep writing, I will always support you!

Please change this bad name. At first glance, the title of this book sounds like the kind of script that uses lightning to explode and kill all kinds of weird things. But it is obviously a good book about a Taoist priest going down a mountain to save the world in troubled times. With this name, it is too dissuasive for readers who have not clicked in.

Don't read those self-destructive novels from the past. When I read them, I felt that the protagonist looked like an imbecile.

Ever since meeting Zi Yi, the protagonist has completely lost her temper. Cai Yi's future incarnation is a sickly girl and is jealous. When interacting with the protagonist, the protagonist's state is very awkward, like the protagonist of a Japanese comic. It is very inconsistent with the Taoist priest described above. It feels really unnecessary. If I want to read these, I might as well read a two-dimensional novel 😅

Caiyi

I just don't know why, in this type of novel, you always have a woman by your side. You are also a Taoist priest after all. Don't you feel embarrassed hanging out with a woman all day long? In the past, I always thought it looked weird to see this type of cultivating people reviving the city's invincible spiritual energy, and casually accepting a female anchor as a disciple. Women and Taoist priests...

I have read the first forty chapters, and they are quite well written. However, there are always people in the book reviews who can only accept the modern cultivation system from practicing Qi, building foundations, Yuanying, and transcending tribulations to the Mahayana, but cannot accept classical cultivation or the author's own design, and they keep complaining that it is a bit annoying. I hope that in the paid chapters everyone will discuss more about the plot rather than focusing on system issues 🙂

Everything else was okay. At first I couldn't understand how the upper-class rulers of the Liang Kingdom could be so ignorant and stupid but still exist when the country was subjugated and even the human race was about to be exterminated... Then I thought about it, wasn't the last year of the Qing Dynasty just like this?

Half step of innate perfection, half step of acquired perfection, half step of innate peak, half step of acquired peak perfection, half step of innate peak perfection of late stage... It seems so inconsistent, I really want to complain, who created it? One realm is divided into eighteen realms

It was as if a player suddenly appeared in an ancient world, making a very discordant sound. He and others are like two different creatures.

Practicing the Tao is to keep the Taoist heart in mind, to save the common people at will, to spread the spark of compassion to others, and to teach the demons to leave no trace. When the world is overturned and the sky is angry, it can slay the dragon with a yue. Although the world is turbid, it can dance the golden crow.

The title of the book should be changed, it is not in line with the expectations of the people it attracts

Let's talk about the conclusion first, and let's make do with it. This book is actually pretty good. The biggest flaw is that it tells the protagonist's realm too early. This Chinese-style cultivation of immortality should be the best without any realm (similar to Lan Ke). Supporting characters can have some level of talent, but it is best for the protagonist not to have it, or not to have it so obviously. It's not the past now. I've seen too much cultivation and now I look down on those who are in the realm of Qi training and foundation building. The protagonist is just a foundation builder, and the foundation builder is so strong that he even got the title of "True King". The whole article seems very awkward and inconsistent

The rhythm is quite strange now. The protagonist has been busy with other people's affairs. He has been busy solving some existing problems since he built the temple for the monks. However, the embarrassing thing is that the protagonist himself has nothing to do. This may also be a common problem of Wudi. Since you are invincible, it is difficult to arrange a plot that can increase intensity and pressure.

There is absolutely no need to change the title of this book. The contrast, gimmicks, excitement, and sense of anticipation are all there. There are only about 400 comments in total. This book is probably rated as a masterpiece, right? There are thousands of people who have ordered the book on average, and the criticism of the book's title is only the opinion of a small number of active readers. Quidian is always the world of Xiaobai Wen. The readers who can click in are here because of the contrast created by the book title. This is your real audience. The author of this book is the first book in Qidian. There is no reader base, so he relies on gimmicks to gain fame. I have been reading at Qidian for a long time, and I can only summarize it in one sentence: From what I heard from readers, there is a dead end, and no one can escape.

Zuo Chen

The title of the book looks like a trashy studio novel, but upon entering, it turns out to be a fine book. It's nice and interesting. I suggest the author think of a shorter and better title.

The writing is good, clean and neat, there is no repetitive plot like matryoshka dolls, it is coherent, the story is well written, touching but not pretentious, and it hits the mark. Whether the author is a good person, not a bad money maker, or a poor writer, he will become a great master sooner or later if he continues like this.

It's very strange. It's clearly written about Mudi-ryu but it's not that exciting. Even if it's a daily article, it's not daily enough. It's neither good nor bad.

I have updated 74 chapters so far. The writing is smooth and natural. I can't say how good it is, but to my taste, it is better than the 70% starting point. There are no strange language habits, the paragraphs are reasonable, there are basically no grammatical errors, the use of words is reasonable, and there are some typos. The ability to describe events is quite strong, and the rhythm is reasonable. In my opinion, there are some problems with the setting up and detonation of conflicts, which are a little slow and not neat enough, and the ups and downs are a bit slow. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Maybe this is the author's characteristic, which is more natural. Let's talk about the plot first, let's talk about Caiyi first. I don't understand that the comment section is like a monk who is abstinent and has a look, and can't even see a woman? Anyway, Cai Yi's character image is second only to the monk so far, and the proportion of the plot is also quite reasonable. There is no unnecessary description of emotions. Anyway, I think it is very reasonable. It can be regarded as a character similar to a clown, but it can be more funny and humorous. As for the development of the story, at least I think this beginning is very exciting. When changing the map, it has a sense of déjà vu. In fact, you can refer to the writing method of "Hundred Demons Book" and format it into units. Finally, it is strongly recommended to change the title of the book! Too studio-y, besides just trying to make a buck?

Very good, The Lord of One Life and The Shadow of the Mahayana Period. I like those two books very much.

The story is a good one, but the relationship in the temple is too casual. How can aristocratic families control the court if they are parallel importers? The writing outside the temple is very good.

A good book, a rare good book in a cesspit like Qidian. It is really worth pursuing. It's a pity that in order to cater to the cesspit environment of Qidian, we have to choose this name to divert traffic, but there is nothing we can do about it.

Dear readers, it is very important to read a new book during the period, as this determines the subsequent income of a book. Follow-up reading refers to the number of people who have read the latest chapter within 24 hours. Whether a book can be continued depends entirely on this. I hope you can take some time out of your busy schedule, this is really important to the little ones. Kowtow to you all!