Subdue the Dragon

The writing is really good, and the main plot is very clear, which is to subdue the dragon. This evil dragon villain is indeed the best villain described in the book. The confrontation between the protagonist and the evil dragon naturally represents legitimacy. It is much better than the underworld cultivating immortals among mortals. The golden finger matches well and is not obtrusive. The above is well written, but here are some shortcomings The most coveted magical spells in Xianxia did not appear, and the world view was instead like the duel between swordsmen and swordsmen in Gulong Secondly, I felt that the plot was a bit stiff, with more ancient routines. Compared with the heroine, it was a poor boy chasing Bai Fumei. Then the protagonist kept offending people and was chased to the end. After fighting monsters and upgrading, it seemed that he had no life. Like a tool man, the protagonist could also relax and enjoy. Don't stay in the mountains every day. The standard of living is worrying In the end, apprenticeship has not shown any effect. The protagonist learned all the skills by himself or exploded with equipment. Just like why Sun Wukong has such a deep relationship with Patriarch Bodhi, it is because all of Sun Wukong's skills were taught by Patriarch Bodhi, and they have time to get along with each other, which is equivalent to a master plus half a father, so they have a deep relationship. The protagonist and his master have only been together for a few days, and they have not learned anything. The main character seems to have a very deep relationship with his master, which is a bit gratuitous. The above can still be said to be flaws. Recently, when I opened the Xianxia or System or Mortal stream, I almost got tired of watching it. The old author's Xianxia can't stand it anymore, so Ji Cha and Wenzhao Gong are always online. I wish the author can surpass them {"TopicId":"1234523610992672768","TopicName":"Qidian 2026 Spring Festival Event"}{"TopicId":"575683685907562496","TopicName" ":"Book Recommendation"}{"TopicId":"995007324090269696","TopicName":"Book Review Activity"}{"TopicId":"586286831142961152","TopicName":"Book Recommendation"}

This is too obvious, just to make up the word count

Poisonous Weed is too confusing. It has no logic, no worldview, no characterization, and no system. This novel has no outline. I can't stand it.

The writing is very good. The only flaw is that it is a little messy, but the flaws are not outweighed. I can give it a score of 7.5-8 Out of 10, which is very good. The number of words is too few. Keep it.

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After reading dozens of chapters, it was okay. There was a wave of group battles where the details were a bit rough.

Using AI water words to count water is disgusting and has been reported.

As soon as this woman appeared, half of the book was gone

The protagonist is a scoundrel who tells a lot of lies and only knows how to be clever. His survival depends on the protagonist's aura. All the people he meets are good people. Otherwise, if there is a bad tempered one, he will be hacked to death with a knife! He doesn't run away when something happens, he just waits for others to come looking for trouble, and the main character doesn't matter whether it's reasonable or not, he just pushes the plot!

I've read more than 40 chapters. The writing is average and very confusing in some places. Including but not limited to: multi-person fighting scenes, whether friendly or enemy forces, are all replaced by "that person". Several "that person" in a paragraph are confusing to readers; The separation between inner words and spoken words is not obvious, and they are both directly referred to by " ". Even if you add "", "", ""? Even if you are a little lazy, why not use single quotes to express your inner thoughts? There are typos and garbled words, such as, "The knife broke the broken knife over there" A little bit of trouble, the first reaction after killing someone is not to run, but to continue wandering around like no one else. In addition, what I personally don't like is that the author seems to prefer to use the plot to "educate readers", and there are a lot of expressions of values ​​​​in it. For example, there is a woman in the article who became pregnant out of wedlock and could not find the father of her child. The child is definitely innocent and I have no problem with helping the child. Of course the child is innocent, and there is nothing wrong with helping the child. However, the plot seems to deliberately describe the negative comments about her as the "malice" of the people around her, and even has the protagonist hint at threats to make others feel that they will be punished if they continue to talk about her. Is her mother really innocent? She couldn't be pregnant alone, right? Apart from being raped, she couldn't even find her child's biological father. Is she really pure and innocent? Then the protagonist makes a backhanded threat, saying that you have a bad reputation about her, so she turns into a ghost and comes to you. Why does she have a good reputation in this situation? She has an excellent reputation in this situation, so why should she let those really good people be embarrassed? He also asked, "Is it envy, jealousy and hatred?" When I saw that paragraph, I didn't understand what envy, jealousy and hatred were? Do you envy her as early as possible or do you envy her child for not having a father? Only later did I realize that this episode was not a plot, but that the protagonist was educating people? Anyway, I didn't see where Xia was. If good people are not rewarded and evil people are not punished, who will recognize justice? To sum up, if you can accept the writing problems and these little poisonous points, you can continue watching. But I escaped first!

Blessed are those who like to watch sadistic masters. No matter they are gangsters, officials, big or small, or demons and monsters from aristocratic families, all of them have to fight with the protagonist. The last trouble is not over yet, the next one is here again😅. I can only say that those who like to watch sadistic masters are blessed🤣

When I was caught by the Yamen at the beginning of the game, I couldn't help but want to laugh. What a bloody piece of shit. What kind of beautiful girl is catching the fast guy? Xiang Feng. Speechless

You have to read this book carefully and read it as a story.

After reading a few chapters, there are so many poisonous points that it makes me unhappy Poisonous point 1: If there is a danger, don't hang up. If you don't have a big problem, you can add up to a small amount. Start killing small monsters and gradually improve your quality. , Knowing that there is danger, insisting on not running away, trusting your life in the hands of others Poison Point 3: Regardless of priority, always worried about being wanted, because of the level of communication and transportation in ancient times, and having a knife in your hand, you can run rampant in the world.

When I clicked on it, I saw that it was still the source of the poison in Chapter 2. I'm not a trash guy, and I'm fed this kind of garbage online guide every day.

The protagonist is as if he is sick. He won't go anywhere that isn't dangerous, and he keeps doing things he's not sure about. I'm still clinging to that wretched place, knowing that all the enemies know it, but I won't leave. I just stay here and bet on the enemy to send them off one by one. No matter how difficult it is, I will definitely win. The more I write, the worse it gets

At the beginning, he was inexplicably hit with a black handprint (the reason was not explained after reading the last three chapters). After years of seeking medical treatment and draining his savings, he still couldn't get a cure. He only managed it for a month, but he was actually quite cheerful and had the leisure to joke around. Are he from Earth? Would you be offended if the author gave you a cut of Quanqin's monthly salary? Then he was wanted for no apparent reason, he was fished out by a woman for no apparent reason, and he started to fight monsters for no apparent reason... Did he choose the wrong platform and play a short drama for everyone?

I really can't stand it. I actually like the writing style. But there's no logic in the behavior. Why does the author have to be so disgusting?

What are you writing about? Is this the beginning of buying? The first 10 chapters and the following were written by two people, right? The plot at the beginning is compact, the fighting tension is sufficient, and the description of the supporting characters is also very good, but what is written after chapters 12 and 3? After killing the fourth child, he will be gone? Don't think about why he wanted to kill him with the wanted notice, don't think about the dangers involved before, and don't talk about why he disappeared after seeking revenge. Just talk about the protagonist who is wandering around like a normal person. He wanted to practice crazily in front of him, turned around and started wandering around, looking for monsters, and getting into trouble. What the hell is that? The reason for killing the demon? You didn't write about the righteousness of pig's feet when you killed monsters, and you didn't see any benefits after killing monsters. Killing the first few is of no use? The triangular soft-shelled turtle has an extra turtle stoma secretary, and then what? There's nothing more... You can either make the protagonist realize that killing demons can make you stronger, then kill fiercely, and then write down the improvement clearly, or go to practice martial arts, don't write anything, just like a drunken person, running around, touching this thing, checking that, kicking a wild dog on the roadside... Does this make sense? After seeing more than 20 chapters, what is the main character's purpose? Is it to become stronger? For cultivating immortality? I don't know anything about it. When I was studying with a beautiful woman, I thought it was for the purpose of cultivating immortality. Later, I thought he was talking nonsense. He was just a loser. He had no purpose and no driving force. It was really boring and annoying. You guys continue, I will withdraw it. I really don't understand the contrast between this book and the previous one.

Some of them are unpleasant, just purely personal feelings. ——It feels like this book was not written by one person. ——The plot alternates between exciting and dull, the pig's trotter's IQ alternates between high and low, and the logic becomes strong and weak. But the writing quality remains basically the same. Of course, the water word count is also maintained. A little strange.

Introduction: I am mentally retarded. The protagonist in the book I wrote is mentally retarded, and the supporting characters are also mentally retarded. This protagonist is like an earthbound spirit, just wandering around in this small place. Anyone can threaten him, and then passively fight back the whole time. Are you the son-in-law? So resigned

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After reading a few chapters, the plot is bland and the protagonist is rubbish. So for the monthly ticket of more than 1,000 yuan, has the starting point reached this level?

I want to use dragon horns and tendons to make a slingshot to hit your glass

The starting point is getting longer and longer now, hey

After reading Chapter 20, I want to ask you guys, what is this novel about? There is no background introduction, a very abrupt conflict. There is no cultivation, no realm, no Kung Fu, but it is said that it has found a pile of skills that may be a Kung Fu! Then this or that one wants to kill the protagonist. I could have figured out the wanted order in advance, but in the end there are endless enemies! There is a golden finger for killing monsters, but it is not clear. Is this protagonist a time traveler? It's not even explained clearly! Anyway, I was confused when I read this novel, and I didn't know what it was about!

Not bad, I can read it, keep writing.

There is a level of 80-90 points

At that time, the protagonists were either gangsters or military kings, their behavior was obscene, their thoughts were dirty, and when they saw a woman, they looked like a pig.

The writing is very solid, the plot is very scattered, and the logic is basically incoherent. Obviously, the scope is limited and I can only take into account the plot of one or two chapters.