I Just Collected a Corpse, Why Did I Become a Demon?

It looks good, and the writing is better than before, and everything is smooth. The protagonist is a bit of a god, but why didn't he learn about spiritual practice before? Is it because the plug-in time is too short? In fact, if people in the world think that the protagonist is unfathomable, it would be best to have the protagonist appear in this city out of thin air with no roots, family or friends. In this way, the past will not be found, and the present will appear more mysterious. I think this book is very well written, keep it up

It's too complicated, it's all words, how can we understand it 😴

It's pretty good, I read more than 20 chapters. The protagonist's thoughts are very clear and his motivations are also very clear. The games in the Shen family are also very exciting, whether it's fighting or various conspiracies. As for the real culprit behind the scenes, in the end, people have a sense of expectation, and then he is involved in the door, and there are infinite possibilities for wits. Moreover, the black box is quite versatile. It must have an extraordinary origin and be both an enemy and a friend.

In addition to the really awesome people, there are a few double-openers who have good endings. Sword Dance Show is an old author who has been writing for so many years. Both of them are half fucking useless. It was because he had a book that Gao Lou Mansion opened in the first place. In fact, it was almost finished and the manuscript was being archived. Nearly a million words. If you didn't have a studio, if you could still get good results, everyone would have to recognize you as their father.

🎬 Plot: quite interesting ✒️Writing: OK 🎭Fresh

It looks okay so far, but the characterization is a bit thin, and there aren't many vivid characters that I can remember.