I Can Add Points to My Talent Panel

It's not a level 8 mage with over 100 spirit points. He can hit a level 1 novice with a constitution of less than 50 with a big move and it doesn't kill him for a second. He just backhands the enemy shooter's big move and throws it back with his bare hands, killing him. The previous point was that the level suppression is very serious. The level 8 lord can beat the level 7 overlord is gone here.

Shennong's evaluation: A Good Grass There are some minor problems in the early stage, mainly: the male protagonist looks a bit useless, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists (it can be written more divinely, and later on, they are indeed two divine men) If you can tolerate the small flaws in the early stage, you will find that the author is getting better and better, and his writing is getting better and better. The main highlights of this book are: ① The protagonist's talent awakening, advancement, integration, and linkage. From the current point of view, there is no need to suppress the protagonist's talent, and there is no need to suppress it. After all, the protagonist's main enemies are the overlords, ancient gods, and high-level enemies. I hope there will be more interesting talents and more linkages between talents. ②Download the dungeon. The dungeon can design more world views, and then the protagonist will rush through it. Of course, don't write the protagonist as mentally retarded. The protagonist is intelligent, but his amazing wisdom tells me to use amazing power. I can see through those schemes at a glance. There is no need to argue and destroy them with one punch. This book is quite to my liking. The fighting looks very enjoyable and there are no frivolous reasons for fighting. It's because the protagonist likes fighting rather than "why do you force me" (laughing). It's pure fighting fun.

Over twenty chapters, the skills are weird and overly game-like. Over twenty chapters, I don't know what the world view is, I'm speechless.

Do you have a panel? Just write blindly and take it for granted

There are not many books at Qidian. Book lovers can't even read this. I will recommend dozens of good ones to you.

First of all, the talent is not marked for himself or others. Secondly, the protagonist's setting is also really good. He has to transfer to other departments with the auxiliary subsidy, and even uses money to top up the game. As a result, he cannot reach the attribute points in the exam, and the heroine even gave him 200,000 yuan to improve. There is something wrong with the author's brain. He wrote such a disgusting protagonist and had so many people bragging about it.

After more than a hundred chapters, her combat power collapsed, and the heroine passed just one dungeon, going from second in the school to first in the violent school, and surpassing the original so-called legendary ranking first. What does the protagonist have if he has trouble? Most Speechless, the protagonist's strength keeps rising, and the supporting characters follow suit. It doesn't matter if I'm cheating, I'm growing fast, but if you're not cheating, you're growing so fast, isn't it in vain?

It is not recommended to read. At present, there are more than 100 chapters in which he is trying to destroy a world at every turn, and he has to fight against the first level and the second level. The problem is that there are ten levels in the first level, and it takes two worlds to upgrade to one level. When the protagonist reaches level 3, he is already chasing level 9. After defeating the boss, high-level treasure chests can open daily necessities, which is invincible😄

Use the subsidy to charge for games, which is incredible stuff

It can only be said that the author wanted to write a long story at the beginning, but ended up not being able to grasp the rhythm well, which is why it ended up like this. Level experience is the most outrageous poison point. Normally, up to three or four worlds are more than enough to advance to the first level, but now it takes two or three worlds to advance to the first level. The twenty or thirty worlds at the first level are too exaggerated. However, this book is already over the top, and I can only say that the next book can be improved. It is suggested that although ordinary people enter the spirit world more times than the protagonist, it is better to clear a world multiple times, and then they have to clear a world like the protagonist to gain so many experience points. Then remove the level and leave only the level. In this way, the protagonist can catch up with others with a gap of several years without feeling suppressed.

I feel like the logic is a little bit toxic. I just saw the subscription here. The protagonist's group of students are at levels 1-9, which is the first level. There are also second and third levels above that may reach level 9 by blind guessing. Firstly, at such a novice stage, there are all kinds of gods, kings, overlords and the like. The description of the picture is so grand, but it turns out to be a novice village. After the early stage, I feel tired of aesthetics. Secondly, this is the real world, unlike a certain paradise that is deliberately divided into different levels. The protagonist, who describes how awesome and explosive his potential is, is still at level one. If a hostile force randomly sends some minions at level 2.34, He will be defeated in seconds. His self-protection ability is too poor. The third resource explosion is the explosive growth of resources at each level in the first-level pure novice stage. The income from level 1 copies is 100, level 2 is 1,000, level 3 is 10,000, level 4 is 100,000, and level 5 is millions. The equipment is also black iron, bronze, silver, and gold. If this is the gap between levels 1.2.3.4.5, It is very reasonable. The result is a gap of 5 levels within the first level

1. Upgrading is too slow. I don't know what the author thinks about setting an upper limit for experience acquisition. Neither world is necessarily enough to upgrade to one level. However, the world view designed by the author is still very grand. The protagonist is currently at level one, and level one has ten levels, and these are all prepared in high school for the college entrance examination. In the same type of classic reincarnation paradise, Su Xiao can advance to many levels in one world. It only takes three or four worlds to advance to one level, which is thousands of chapters. However, the protagonist already has two or three worlds to advance to one level, and it takes twenty or thirty worlds to advance to tenth level. So does the author want to write tens of thousands of chapters or is it unfinished? 😅 2. I have read more than a hundred chapters now. The protagonist has not even reached level 3, but he has already started killing everyone. Even when the Evil God Church came to attack him, he was ready to take revenge and go back in person, looking very confident. It is known that the most powerful among high school students preparing for the college entrance examination can reach level 9, not to mention that there are college students and college graduates behind them. So is the main character inflated or is this book about high school students saving the world? High school students will reach the top level of world combat power, or will the evil church dare to do evil and attack geniuses in the street? In the end, it turns out to be a little loser, not even a bit of college student combat power, all of them are at the first level? I don't understand it. I gave up the book when I saw this. If you read the rest, please tell me how to explain it later. 3. The various numerical values ​​are also quite outrageous. The author wrote it before, and the level advantage is greater than the professional quality. A lord profession one level higher can be on par with a hero profession one level lower, and two levels higher can overwhelm him. As a result, the protagonist with a level 2 legend can crush a level 7 lord, and still kill him instantly without even having the chance to use props 😰. According to your initial design, shouldn't level 2 legend = level 3 hero = level 4 lord? Even if the protagonist is cheating, one more level will make him a level 5 lord. Even if he cheats a lot, two more levels will make him equal to a level 7 lord. The result is an instant kill? ! ! He didn't even have a chance to use the props and was instantly killed without reacting? ? ? It feels like the numbers have collapsed. 4. The economic system also feels broken. The price to enter the level 4 dungeon in advance is 40,000 spiritual realm points. Even if you don't have an identity, it still costs 30,000 spiritual realm points. As a result, the protagonist earns about the same price by killing an evil god who has fallen and polluted the world. And then the heroine's acquisition of the evil god's breath from the protagonist is equivalent to a legendary profession? ? On the one hand, they are talking about how awesome the protagonist's legendary profession is. This profession alone is like being immune to control. It relies on this abnormal immunity to kill the remains of the evil god. But in the end, the heroine can be equivalent to a legendary profession with the prop of the evil god's aura that explodes? 😅 And more importantly, such an item that can upgrade a heroic profession to a legendary profession is equivalent to an item worth tens of thousands of spiritual world points? Is it equivalent to a prop that allows you to enter the dungeon in advance? What is the value of the initial profession? At most, you can get a legendary profession with a few hundred thousand. It is better to get a weaker profession a few years in advance, and then spend hundreds of thousands to get a legendary profession. Then the extra money you get to enter the world dungeon a few years in advance is worth more than these props. 5. Opening treasure chests really stinks. I know that Samsara Paradise is a classic, so many authors like to add a setting to the protagonist that he usually has bad luck and cannot open good things, but can open some good things at critical moments. In the end, I used this to force the protagonist, but others also spent a lot of hard work and spent a bunch of props and finally succeeded in killing a boss alone, but the result is a bag of salt? I'm really speechless about this plot. Although Su Xiao is unlucky in Samsara Paradise, there is a guarantee. Usually the treasure chests are at most lower level props. For example, a gold treasure chest yields silver props, and then luck retaliates at a critical moment and a gold treasure chest yields platinum props. Similar to this situation, even if it is a murder. The scarlet card that explodes also has one of three options. You can draw three props in the space or the remaining points or the first-level equipment equipped on you. Instead of forcing it to kill the monarch boss or the lord boss alone, you will be given a bag of salt 😅. This kind of plot is extremely poisonous.

If you take too big a step in the early stage, you will definitely lose sight of it later on. Even at level 1 and 2, it is written as semi-invincible, and you can beat any god. For the sake of temporary achievements, the longevity of the work is sacrificed. This is what many books do now.

It's quite incredible. The protagonist has several S-level talents and a variety of plug-ins. The heroine can easily achieve it by using the ancient god's breath given by the hero. The most outrageous thing is that the heroine herself has no skills at all. If it weren't for the hero's help to absorb the curse, she would have turned into a monster. Generally speaking, it is recommended not to read after 100 chapters.

It has to make people look down on the protagonist. The characters make all kinds of mindless remarks and make readers disgusted. This kind of garbage novel can persuade one by one. Of course, if you read the novel without thinking and think I didn't say anything, and you don't even think about it, then what else did I say 🙂

The protagonist is like a child with a sensitive heart. He is very touchy. Before you die, you may not even have a future. Why don't you see the protagonist being so sentimental? Novels with the label of light novels are like this. They are a little bit poisonous at every turn. The refreshing article also wants to move the readers, right?

To sum it up, this is the story of a good-for-nothing male protagonist who got a cheat. Before he got the cheat, he was just a wild dog on the roadside, without any ambition. It really fits that sentence. The more useless the protagonist, the bigger the cheat.

I have read more than 130 chapters, and many of the settings seem quite good, but there is one thing that is not just disgusting. Is the male protagonist such a licker? The dog really wants to vomit. Shuangwen licks the dog?

It's almost 300 chapters and it's still the first level 🤭

Since the article is written by readers, the readers have carefully selected it. After seeing a dozen chapters in the shelf section, if you can't stand it, I suggest you leave. Of course, if you can't stand it, it says that this book is suitable.

It's not bad, but it smells like a girl's video. Most of the authors are women, so I can feel that they try not to write female videos. But probably out of sheer habit, the emotional dramas and other aspects of the female videos are too heavy, and people who watch them are embarrassed. Nowadays, male video authors basically know that they can't write emotional dramas. Yes, many of them are written without a heroine or with a heroine but with a reduced role. I suggest that female authors can also write in this way when they come to male channels. It is easiest not to write emotional dramas. Male channels are not too obsessed with emotional dramas. It doesn't matter if they write or not, but if they can't write well, they are poisonous and it is better not to write.

What I mean by too slow promotion is that the plot advances too slowly. I understand some of the dungeon restrictions expressed by the author and the fact that the protagonist has only changed jobs for a month. But from a reader's point of view, 400,000 words are only level 2, and each dungeon is written in detail. So if you have 40% of your experience in one dungeon, you will not have to rush to 2 million words by the college entrance examination and level 10? One or two million words or level one? The author's writing is actually quite good, and the combat attributes have not collapsed in all aspects. The emotional drama is acceptable compared to many similar books, but is it possible to skip some unimportant dungeons and timelines? It's not good to jump too much at once, but in my opinion, if you write 600,000 to 700,000 words, you will still only have level 4 or 5 and have not taken the college entrance examination. If you write too detailed, it will look very watered down!

I've seen chapter 150, and it's only level 4? If you don't upgrade your level, what's the use of it? Upgrade and upgrade. How to increase the skill level limit without upgrading? You started to become a god when you were only at level 4. Oh, no, it was level 3. Are you such a cheap god? A kid with a big stick? My blood pressure went up when I saw it. I ran away.

The author's control of the rhythm in the early stage was okay, but after more than 300 chapters, the protagonist's "past life" plot accounted for an increasingly high proportion. The second level can exert a power that exceeds the fear of the ninth level strong person (in a special copy). How to write the plot? This hidden setting of the past life is opened too early. It is most reliable to reveal the powerful past life at the eighth or ninth level. The positioning of this novel has changed since the second level disclosed this past life setting. From the invincible flow where the protagonist cheats and climbs all the way up, it has become the invincible flow where the protagonist has a past life and relies on the power of the past life to show off and slap people in the face. It doesn't matter what the combat power is. Anyway, when encountering a crisis, the power of the past life will explode. The author is indeed a bit path-dependent now, and he always brings out the power of his past life to show off.

Not to mention the logic of the writing is wrong I set it to be at least the eighth level. After one or two hundred chapters, I am still at the first level, and then the dungeon has all kinds of divine rules everywhere. Well, the first level dungeon, high school level, all kinds of gods to kill 👍

It's too late. It only took less than ten seconds to put the chapter on the shelves and fight in the ring. You can actually beat five or six chapters, brother! A ten-second battle, how can you write so many chapters? Within a second or two of taking out the gun and pulling the trigger, Pigfoot was defeated by two teammates on the opposite side. The mage on the opposite side also used a big move? I really don't know how to write, so please go watch Ashero's Eye of Evolution twice more!

The level up is too slow. There are so many levels and you still have more than 100 cards at the first and third level. It's ridiculous. The plot is indeed exciting and suits my taste. I suggest the author find an opportunity to level up quickly. It doesn't need to be too high. I think it's fine if it's less than two levels.

It's time for a paid chapter, and it's still level 2. You have to write two or three worlds to get to the next level. Author, do you want to suppress the level so hard? I guess you won't be able to get out of the first level in two or three hundred chapters, right? Confirmed, poisonous weed.

It looks so cool, I've given you the monthly pass, please update soon

The outline of this book feels skewed from the initial setting.