Copying Traits, Starting by Eloping with Wang Yuyan

Your Huang Mao entry is too weak. The real Huang Mao entries are stronger than what you wrote. I suggest you change it. The favorability of good girls will be increased by 30% at the initial meeting, the bad girls will be increased by 80%, the widows will be increased by 200%, and the physical strength will be increased by 150%.

The supporting characters in this book are clueless. The protagonist wears clean modern clothes and says that he is a victim of a shipwreck. As a result, Abi immediately believed him and took him home. Within a few days, he developed a crush on the protagonist.

Are all authors today so confident in themselves? Even if everyone dies in Zongwu, is there anyone so brave?

This kind of lunacy is necessary. He pretends to be a genius and a waste even though he has the strength. He also forcibly turns someone into a virgin. That person is Wang Yuyan's mother! ! ! ! I originally wrote it very well, but I couldn't bear it anymore.

It all relies on a yellow-haired entry to drive the plot, just like a poison. In terms of martial arts training, I also made an entry and then upgraded it, which felt very empty. I feel like there isn't much development in the plot.

Emm, I don't mind having a harem, but it's really poisonous to accept one after another and basically don't need to develop feelings. No wonder there is a pornographic entry at the beginning, so that you don't have to consider feelings when recruiting girls, and you don't have to consider whether it is reasonable for the plot of every girl to like the protagonist, because all unreasonable things can be explained by the pornographic entry.

When I first read it, I thought the writing of this book was amazing. When I read it again, it had become a cliched stud book, which felt a bit pity. Having a harem is not a disadvantage, but you have to write it in a meaningful way, rather than opening a harem just for the sake of having a harem. Without plot and emotional polish, it is easy to get tired of aesthetics.

I hope there won't be a trend of avatars and vests in the future. Now that I see the ever-changing trends, I feel discouraged. I feel uncomfortable hiding my head and keeping my tail. Going to the world where people often show themselves to saints and collect stamps are the core attractions. There are also too many entries that will be confusing and not refined. Too many readers. I can't remember that I should write a realm at the beginning that can be assembled with one or two entries, which can be broken down and improved. There are also a lot of messy martial arts, which are all inferior skills. The author should optimize this aspect as soon as possible and collect skills to create one that suits him! The great master just walked out of his own way

I feel like I have to wear a mask behind me. I don't like to see this kind of thing.

Who taught you to ride on a horse and blend into the wind and clouds?

Don't know what to do at all? I don't even know whether to subscribe or not. There is no main plot at all. Either dominate the martial arts world or dominate the world. It's too mixed martial arts. The plot is too confusing. I don't know what the author is thinking.

I read more than a hundred chapters and deleted them because I was bored.

The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. It's like a game that I just started playing, and I feel bored if I cheat before I play it. The writing style is used in irrelevant places, such as the content of various entries, the plot of the yellow-haired heroine (the problem is that it is not very satisfying), and the author's various martial arts training experiences. Chapter 50! Not much content has been written about this world of mixed martial arts. As a harem party member, I would rather watch your plot where the protagonist wanders the world alone than write about women.

Shennong is urgently needed. Are pig's feet eunuchs? Are you pushing diligently or not?

It's mixed martial arts again, a dead end...

The harem also has its limits. If you don't even look at the character of each person you meet, you're like a bulldozer!

It's okay to accept female protagonists and start a harem, but don't treat the female protagonists as if they were just dusty and brainless, as they have no original distinctive personality at all! If the characterization is more detailed, don't be stereotyped and fall in love with the protagonist when you meet him. That kind of brainless plot will not look too fake even if it has a pornographic effect.

As long as you don't go to the world of comprehensive transportation and do business in person like the previous book (and it's still a world with broken layers), it's simply putting the cart before the horse. As a time traveler, if you know history, you should clearly realize that if you have fists, you have power. When you have fists and power, you will naturally have money.

... Author, I just have a question, is the Huangmao entry an aphrodisiac? There is not a single man in Mantuo Villa, and anyone who accidentally intrudes will be chopped into pieces to grow flowers. A'Zhu has no sweetheart, but they only left after being with each other for a while. Li Qingluo loves Prince Duan deeply. Why does she feel like she's falling in love with him after just one look at him?

The protagonist is a eunuch, who is limited to kissing, and the emotional line is really dragged out. The protagonist's character also changes really fast.

Mixed martial arts is very easy to cut. I don't know if this can be finished.

Without a system, I wouldn't be able to write novels now.

The front was okay, but some kind of natural disaster appeared in the back. It's similar to the catastrophes of several eras in fantasy (many people die), I can't stand it anyway. Slipped away

You must at least let us know what the protagonist's goal is and what he is going to do. This kind of hammer and stick makes people completely lose interest in reading.

After reading Chapter 34, I suddenly no longer had the desire to read any more.

In order to avoid criticism, the author next door, Wei Qianqian picked up Xuanjian and was still a virgin a year ago. If Zhou Zhiruo could have been born more than ten years earlier, why don't you learn from the author?

As a time-traveler, create martial arts and integrate the characteristics of martial arts There are also novels, fantasies, and the whims of the predecessors of time-travelers Don't the protagonists know how to use electromagnetism, for example, I think this achievement is very high.

Is it possible that I can't find any serious books to read? Want you to write? Since you are publishing a book on a serious website, you must write a serious book! It's really putting the cart before the horse and missing the point.

It can be changed to high martial arts, but changing comprehensive martial arts to fantasy is a bit inappropriate for my colleagues.

I read the first 3 chapters This book should be ntr but the main character is Lu Murong Murong Fu came back and found that all his cousins ​​and maids had been abducted by Huang Mao