I Owe the Female-Dominant System Ten Billion

Build a building, everyone. As we all know, this book is a book about women. The content is a bit confusing between men and women, and the description is also unacceptable to some readers. So of course there will be criticism and scolding. Of course I accept your criticisms and corrections, so I put a floor here for you to play in, and focus on it when others see it. If you think there is anything toxic, anything unacceptable, or anything you find objectionable in the article, you can say it here and I will accept it. For those outside this building, I will control the comments so that other readers will not have trouble finding them.

I saw that Lao Jiuchao liked the Norton couple, so I couldn't help but draw a fanfic

I remember the Chinese teacher said something: "Real artists dare to write clichéd stories, and write them with new ideas." The first volume is a very clichéd classic Western fantasy story of Dragon Quest (Devil King), but it has several distinctive characters: Freya who lacks friends, Miyamura Hiyu who is deeply in love... PS Give me a mouthful of knives, the first volume alone is enough to eat 5 knives), it is almost not a novel, more like a living world. It can be seen that the author has put his heart and soul into it, and the ending is very reasonable and in line with the development of the plot, but there are many knives, which may not be in line with the readers' feelings PS For example, I cried about four times after reading the first volume, and waited for a day before I dared to read the second volume. In the end, Timo ate two knives. It was really painful and happy Despite this, I don't recommend changing this plot, because the development of this story is really reasonable and wonderful. Well, that's all

This ending is too cruel to Norton and Miyamura Hiyu. There seems to be something stuck in my heart, and I feel flustered. At the same time, I complain to the author. This ending is too unsatisfactory. If after the end, Su Chang can spend points to appear from the flower to accompany Feiyu at any time, and when he leaves, he will turn into a white flower on Feiyu's hair. , Such a picture, how beautiful it is... The story is rich and fascinating, but when I think of all the foreshadowing, just for the final farewell, I don't have the courage to read anymore. After all, I can't stand this kind of separation. I thought of a lyric in confusion, people in the audience walked by, but no old color was seen. People on the stage sang, a heartbreaking farewell song The story is really good, thank you

Feelings in Volume 2 Only love is desolate and cold, and separation is heartbreaking. Life is like an actor's laughter with oneself, and falling is like fireworks that shine brightly on others. I have finished reading the second volume. Compared with the first volume, I can't say it is better or worse. It still has a tragic ending, and there are a lot less knives. Maybe it is aesthetic fatigue. The resonance is still there, but it is a little less. In general, "Loveless World" is the same as "Rust Brave" The same, both are very richly written The difference is that The Heroes of Rust focuses more on the ultimate love and the pain of parting, while the Loveless World inserts some plots that really need to be pondered into the pain: Should you give up all means at any cost for a dream that may be right or wrong? Still, just like the first volume, the ending still expresses the feeling of sadness with a few strokes. The sentence "I love you" is in sharp contrast to the title "Loveless World". Their love is like the final fireworks, beautiful, bright and short-lived. , Maybe this is a loveless world I hope that the next world will not keep writing such tragedies. Although the author is very strong in writing, he has become a little aesthetically tired from the first volume to the second volume. If the defense is not broken at the moment when the defense should be broken, the effect will not be achieved. Just Jiang (the poem is my own, Aba

My biggest feelings after reading this novel are: 1. This novel is different from other feminist novels. It is not like some feminist novels: as long as the characters are good-looking, they will not die. Instead, each character has a different destiny. 2. You need to read this novel carefully because there are many foreshadowings in it and the plot is also very good. At least it's not as dry and boring as some feminist novels. 3. The speed is very stable and very fast. I hope the author can keep writing. Although feminist novels have always been considered niche literature (I often hear people say this, and I don't know if it's true or not), it still has charms that popular literature does not have. Although I don't have much money, I will still give all my recommendation votes to the author. Because there are really not many good feminist novels. 😭😭😭 One more thing: I hope the author can pay more attention to his body. Happy New Year to everyone! (New Year is coming soon. Happy New Year in advance) Thank you all for watching me here.

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Su Chang

Miyamura Hiame

Gu Qinghan