Beautiful Girl, Please Rent Me

I'm a little tired and tired. I can't understand why some authors are always keen on killing those characters who are relatively pitiful. I have read many novels and seen many such plots. Every time I feel incomprehensible, I feel really tired watching such a plot. I feel sorry for such a character, but at the same time I can't figure out why the author uses this kind of character to operate. I always feel that such a plot is relatively inferior, and I should not operate on such a character anymore. Just like many book friends said, "Life is already very hard, what else can I do with a novel." Although I personally resist this sentence very much, and I don't agree with it very much. But if it applies to my current situation, I would like to say Life is already very hard, please add some strong light to the lives of unfortunate people, but please don't add some darkness later. Above, please be kind to Ms. Karasawa and Ms. Mitsui. Finally, the author

The author writes very well, the writing style is relatively fresh and comfortable, and it is very comfortable to read. Just keep writing in this state. The details are handled very well. It is better than some new writings. There are very few readers now, but there are also many people who like this book. You must stick to it, I will give you all my wealth, come on! 😡😡😡

The writing is very good, but I don't understand why it's not popular. What's going on?

It's very well written. Why do I feel like there are so few people? But the author gives me a lot of support.

The writing is good, the author's writing style is very good, and a few simple words can outline an artistic conception. It's just that the ending is too hasty, and the much-loved Shura Field part is skipped directly. The author's individual portrayals of the four heroines are very good, but the 4+1 running-in is missing, which is really important.

Xiaoyi's book can be called a clear stream in the harem😍😍😍

Anyway, come back to me after Chapter 400! Handsome boy!

How can there be no idioms in a good book? Let me start with the beginning - Swallowing the jujubes without hesitation.

I just don't understand it. I think it's similar to Toru Watanabe in terms of good looks. Why isn't it popular 🤔🤔

Feel free to put it on the shelves, I will support you by watching the ads （｡ò ∀ó｡） (I heard that the pictures can be more refined)

Bad woman

Miyako Mitsui

Character source: Jockey Girl-Famous General Nu Tao

Kawaii(ﾟoﾟ;

Cute😊

A completely underrated author and work, as was the previous work. The performance of the work is not worthy of the quality of the work, and the author should run it well.

Alas, in fact, I have always been a fan of Xiaomeng. Xiaomeng does not look like a goddess like the heroine, let alone her figure. Her family conditions, living standards and spiritual aspirations are average to the extreme. Obviously he is still struggling in life, but it is this kind of Xiaomeng who picked up the male protagonist, supported him, protected him and pampered him. Compared with other female protagonists who have a prestigious family background, a charming appearance, and talents that are different from ordinary people, this kind of ordinary person struggling in the Tokyo dream still has such a positive, optimistic and cheerful spirit. It is this kind of person that I hope she will have a good ending!

The author's plot arrangement is very good. Please don't be led astray by other comments in the comment area that say Mitsui Miyako is not good

I can't help but sigh. Miyamura, who poured coffee when he saw the male protagonist dating multiple women at the beginning, can tolerate four women serving one husband later.

For most people, the setting is the most important. Just reading the introduction and the fact that the protagonist is Cowherd can directly dissuade 70% of book lovers.

After seeing it on the shelf, I would like to make a personal comment. I read the author's book from the manual. This book is very well written, but from the time it was put on the shelf to when I agreed to be Miyako on Tokyo Bay, the spirit of this book has disappeared. I have read Toru Watanabe and Tokyo Dangerous Love Game, and they all have high-ranking heroines who know how to resist. Some characters are like that. Watanabe has family and has to bear the humiliation. Tomorrow Kawa also has a family, but his character does not allow him to be patient. I also saw the male protagonist of this book has a similar character to Asuka, a person who likes to dominate others. Izumi is alone in this world, and he was fucked like this by Miyako. There is no description of how many bodyguards there are on the ship. He doesn't do anything? The tone is very relaxed, it doesn't matter? I don't understand. Personally, I feel that the energy has been lost. I'd better go back and read the manual. (Personal comment, the book has been finished and I don't know if anyone will see it. If something different happens later, please tell me)

The Mitsui chapter is the best in the whole show, and the sisters' narration and emotional lines are of extremely high quality. The second chapter of Karasawa is at a high level, but it is slightly separated from the main plot. The biggest pity for Miyamura is that he was originally supposed to be the first heroine, but was cut in half due to the length of the page (the wife line next door was even eliminated) Normally speaking, Miyamura's setting should be shaped in each plot and then completed three-dimensionally in a large chapter at the end, but it was castrated like this [fn=12 ] It's a pity. Although the Miyamura chapter has many flaws, it also has a good plot like the virtual world, and there are still highlights. The overall score should be about 6-7 points. In the end, I have to regret the length issue. There were too many cuts. Nishiyu and Xiaomeng are gone, and the other people's Shura Field and Sugar are also missing. Alas, but in the end the quality is still good.

When I was in junior high school, I read romance novels that girls took to school. This novel gives me the feeling that it is a boys' version of a romance novel 🙂

Emotion and plot In my opinion, the author's description of characters and emotions is delicate and vivid, but the middle plot made me feel uncomfortable and panicked. You said that the male protagonist was a capitalist in his previous life (probably similar). How rich his experience was. From the time he met the cold-hearted childish Ming in the aquarium, didn't he make a guess? What I'm talking about is guessing. His heart is actually dark. It can be seen from the previous plot that he has a telepathic connection with the cruel Miyako. It is definitely reasonable for such a person to at least have a greater malice towards things. If you ask him to guess about this person, I won't say anything. It feels a bit forced to reduce intelligence. Looking at the main character, he only cares about coaxing the little girl and solving things later. I don't know if the author arranged too many emotional exchange plots, or he just cares about comforting and exchanging feelings as I said. The advancement of the main line of this cute high school friendship made me anxious.

I found it while searching for a book. The author's writing style is quite good, and the front part is also good. When I saw Dreams playing games, I immediately laughed. There is a reason why it is not well-known.

This book is really good, but you can't think too much about the writing and so on with the thinking of a critic. The story is just a very ordinary and touching story, but the important thing is the emotion between the characters and the three-dimensional character image. The best ones are Tang Jingshisui and Mitsui Yumiko. Mitsui Miyako is still a little short of image, and she does not reflect her personal inner emotions after life and death. You can treat the system as if it doesn't exist. The system is just a tool to assist the protagonist in advancing the story. However, the ending is a bit poor. The Miyamura chapter is too forced, and the final image of the protagonist is also a little pale. The author's descriptive psychology interspersed between the characters' dialogues is quite touching, and the characters of Mitsui Yumiko and Tang Jingshiho are also shown at this moment. Overall, it's still a very good novel.

After the Tokyo-style trend has passed, I am really happy to be able to discover such excellent works that I have never read before.

. . . The plot is boring, the male protagonist is an eunuch, after reading the whole book, I don't understand what is being said.

Why does the male protagonist look like a robot? He is too boring.

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