Witch, Don’t Go Causing Trouble

After reading dozens of chapters, this seasoned reader, a self-proclaimed "bookworm," finds the following flaws: The entire supporting cast is practically brainless; the henchman's mindless rumor about the boss and protagonist dating is a major flaw; the second flaw involves family members—the aunt inexplicably gives the protagonist's mother's belongings to the woman she met on the first day; and…

The story hints from the start that the male lead's parents are not ordinary, yet the male lead is portrayed as such a useless character. It's easy to guess that he will gain some kind of opportunity or inherit his parents' wealth and be able to cultivate again later. In the end, he ends up with a bunch of beautiful women, including a sister and a demoness, and a happy family reunion. This kind of template is so old-fashioned that it's practically toothless.

Why are novels these days all about women, cultivation, or fighting? Can't weave these elements together? Don't let the whole thing be just one dish on the table?

This is my first time writing a fantasy novel. The background is still an alternate history, with fantasy elements added mainly for the sake of female protagonist diversity. The world-building is kept within a low-level fantasy scope; theoretically, it's a story focused on everyday life and chaotic relationships. The new book has just started, so please give me some reading, comments, and monthly tickets! Thank you so much! (2-1)

It can only be said that it is all water, and it is a pity to throw it away if it is tasteless. Reading it every day feels okay, but if I leave it for a while, it doesn't seem to matter. If it disappears one day, I might not notice it.

The synopsis is familiar, but the Crown Princess is replaced with the Empress, and the main character's name is changed, making it instantly recognizable. The formulaic writing has become so formulaic that even the synopsis is formulaic.

Other characters either openly build harems or focus solely on cultivation without a female lead; your book's openly scumbag male lead is still hard to handle.

I suddenly lost motivation after reading chapter 24. It felt like everyone's intelligence had dropped for the sake of coincidences, so I could find all the coincidences in martial arts novels. Let me find the most similar one to match yours (first thought is Huang Xiaoming's Twin Dragons).

It's ridiculous that a male reader is reading a female-oriented novel.

Instead, try "Young Master, Don't Mess Around." The entire relationship between the male and female leads is a lie. Whenever the female lead suspects he likes someone else, she starts lying, apologizing profusely, and then trying to portray herself as virtuous by saying things like "You don't believe me!" Author, don't you think this is too contrived? It's a terrible read. I hope you can improve it. The male lead's personality is really unlikable; he's full of lies.