Witch, Don’t Go Causing Trouble

From the beginning, it was hinted that the male protagonist's parents are not simple, but the setting for the male protagonist is so useless. You can guess that there will be an opportunity later or his parents' inheritance will allow him to practice cultivation again. In the end, there will be a sister, a witch and a bunch of beauties to have a family fun. This template is so cliche.

After reading dozens of chapters, the old bookworm tried the poison online, and the IQ of all the supporting characters fell off the line. The younger brother spread rumors about his boss and the protagonist's date without thinking, and the second poison was about relatives. The second aunt gave the protagonist's mother's relics to the woman he met on the first day for no reason. The third poisonous point is that the heroine's IQ and EQ are not well described, she has no IQ at all, her characterization is not good and the emotional drama of the protagonist is too cliche. Inexplicable panic, inexplicable blushing, and inexplicable heartbeat. Is the heroine so easily tempted? The emotional drama is poorly written, as is the description of the battle between life and death. It feels like it's the product of the literary shortage of Dabai Wenshuang. Old perverts can read it but old bookworms can't stand it.

This is my first time writing fantasy. The background is based on fictional history, and fantasy elements have been added, mainly for the diversity of the heroine 🙂🙂. The background world view is still within the scope of low fantasy. In theory, it is still a story about daily Shura fields. The new book has just started. Please give me a monthly vote for reading and commenting. I would like to thank you or2-1

Why now novel. The whole story is either all about women, or it's all about practicing, or it's all about fighting, can it be interspersed? Don't you want the whole table to be filled with one dish?

The synopsis looks familiar, the Crown Princess is replaced by the Queen, and the protagonist's name looks familiar once the name is changed. The formulaic article is already formulaic, right down to the introduction.

It can only be said that it is all water, and it is a pity to throw it away if it is tasteless. Reading it every day feels okay, but if I leave it for a while, it doesn't seem to matter. If it disappears one day, I might not notice it.

I am speechless even when I read novels on female channels on male channels.

I suddenly lost motivation after reading Chapter 24. It felt like all the members had lost their wits because of the coincidence. So I can find the coincidental plots in martial arts novels. I will first find the most similar one for you (the first thing that comes to mind is Lao Huang's Double Dragon). The fox clan saint was replaced by the demon sect demon girl and the Celestial Master. The palace saint is replaced by a righteous saint, the protagonist is suspected to be the son of the first person in the righteous path of evil, the golden finger becomes a special cultivation method, at the beginning of the plot, a certain force kills an important person, and then the protagonist investigates the case, and this force involves the court (you can use the skin of an ancient dragon), and then the villain demon The girl happened to appear, and the real saint discovered it and started fighting. One side happened to be injured, and the protagonist happened to follow. The assisting one chased the person, leaving the protagonist alone. Then Xiangyan healed her wounds, and then the other one was injured later and the protagonist happened to run into it. Two After the end, there is the plot of the widow, which is indispensable for peeking in the bath, and then the plot of the suspected little princess and the little princess (Jin Yong's novels have many such plots). Liang Yusheng and Wen Ruian didn't think of it at the moment, and I guess they can match it. To sum up, the quality is acceptable, and it is a meal replacement in the book shortage.

This novel is based on a template. It basically has no evil points and can be read as a refreshing novel. However, the main character's strength is currently stuck and cannot be improved. There are several heroines in the beginning, but none of them are very likable. All in all, they are not exciting enough.

In the sequel to "Under the World", in the introduction, is that witch the heroine? Why did she marry the prince? Can Shen Nong tell me about the plot? I don't dare to watch it for fear of getting stoned.