Who Taught You to Tame Beasts Like That?

It's a good subject matter, but the writing is a bit retro. The bets are pretentious and slap in the face, and the bets and bets are played again and again. The plot advances slowly, and it's all pretentious and slapped in the face.

The main line should be clearer, such as the existence of the main pet, such as your farming business line, secret realms can be included but do not overwhelm them. After all, you are not an adventure writer. As a top breeder, you have never bred pets for others. You have not written any user feedback on your dream heart, let alone the experience of tourists and audiences in other areas, income and the like There is too much nonsense, can you simplify it a bit? Each paragraph should not be so long. The information content is too little and it is meaningless

Something serious is wrong. The protagonist trainer has done a good job for the master. There are only ninety-eight palace-level skills in history, and the protagonist is one of them. The contemporary palace-level training master, Tian Tianfang, who is not strong enough, will not be given the corresponding status. Later, I suddenly realized, oh, it turns out that the power of this world belongs to oneself, and strength is the most important. In the eyes of the country, a palace-level cultivation master like him may not be as important as a Holy Spirit-level beastmaster. Is there anything wrong with my mind? The Holy level mentioned earlier is like a bad street. There are at least a few in a family, and they are not top-notch, but they are more important than the ninety-eight in your history. It's really awesome. But it can be seen from the front that the palace-level people in Mengmeng can be sent out as undercover agents.

Is there Shen Nong? I have now read Chapter 26. The protagonist's mentality is to rely on gold fingers to make a living. He has no idea of ​​​​learning. I would like to ask if the protagonist has learned the knowledge of cultivation later.

School belle, classmates, ridicule, mysterious beauty customer, gambling, president, meditation, a large group that has conflicts with the protagonist, classmates who like the school belle to challenge the protagonist, what year is this? Renaissance? I have to say that the writing of Goldfinger is still very interesting, and the development process of farming is also good, but farming can do without such nonsense. .

I can read it in this book. There is nothing wrong with the writing, but the plot is cliche. In some plots, I see the beginning of the plot, so I don't have to read the text. I can just read the chapter title and I will know what is going on.

Reading this book basically exhausted my patience. To sum up, the highlight of this book is that the world view is better and the narrative is more complete. The disadvantage is that the protagonist's growth path is sparse, and the supporting character's growth path is almost non-existent. The universal values ​​are still borrowed from those in the West. It can be seen that the author wants to create a self-growth path for cheating players, but it is a pity that the writing is not strong enough. I only see that the protagonist has been led by the system, lost in the compliments. I can't see the psychological changes of the protagonist at all, nor the supporting characters, and even the villains are all the same! Generally speaking, this book is very smooth and can be read for a while, but it lacks stamina and is the same with no ups and downs, alas (╥ω╥`)! The reason why I write this content is actually a bit out of anger. I haven't found a novel that I can read for a long time, and it's almost fun to find this one. What a pity

Put a lot of battle descriptions in the beast-controlling articles, put a lot of details and knowledge base in the cultivation articles, and put a lot of abuse and poisoning of routines in the novice articles. Even throwing a tomato will only give me a 1-star rating.

Gather the crowd to raise and deny the main pet. The first is a wolf, the second is a necromancer, and the third is an insect. At present, among the three main pets, only "Wolf" can poke readers' desire to be raised!

Only over a year has passed in the book with more than 500 chapters? Is this the most outrageous thing about you? Normally, the protagonist is already a palace-level breeder, but now he still has a bad brother. In my impression, this breeder should be a profession similar to an alchemist. The other party gives you a lot of materials and you make the finished product for him. This is not the case here. You have developed many super-level skills, and later became the master of beast breeding. If Guo refuses to accept anyone else's entrustment at all and builds his own beast-taming park without mentioning whether to sell the beasts or not, this heart of all souls is like a zoo. It's outrageous. The most outrageous thing is that after the fire skill is cultivated, it is as if it has not been cultivated. Normally, shouldn't there be a big response after cultivating this most fundamental skill to become a god? The result is just like cultivating loneliness, it is gone. So what is the use of being a cultivation master? I have cultivated a lot of things, and no one else cares about me. I have very few normal interactions. People who are really serious can't even look at this stuff. My title is "Palace-level Animal Breeder", but it seems that not everyone in my country knows about it. And you are so young. Normally, even if you are not regarded as It's almost a national treasure. What you are good at is cultivating pet beasts and cultivating skills. It's not your turn to fight. The result... I'm really speechless. If you want to write it, just write a few main lines. It's a mess, just like playing a game. I just finished saving the world, but when I got to the NPC, they asked me what equipment to buy. It's outrageous.