Goddess, Why Are You Lusting After My Body?

Please, this is really important to me. Whether I can get to the second round depends on this. I gritted my teeth and finished writing the book that had an average of 35 subscriptions. No matter how well this book performs, I will continue writing until it is finished. But if the results are too bad, I will have a mental breakdown. Finally, I'd like to bow to my dear readers once more. (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

The writing is okay. It's just that the subject matter is really bad, and the whole Xianxia novel is quite outrageous.

It's alright, somewhat interesting, but the female lead gives up too quickly. The rebirth genre always feels a bit lacking; it feels like a max-level player creating a new account to easily defeat newbies.

There's a reason the results were poor. The premise of this "power fantasy" novel was deliberately messed up with all sorts of nonsensical elements. After reading dozens of chapters, it felt like there were many perks, but ultimately it wasn't satisfying.

Why did the writing seem okay but the results were poor? I think the main problem is the male protagonist's character. First, I can't sense that he's particularly powerful (although he's supposedly quite powerful in his past life). Second... The most frustrating thing is that someone killed or betrayed you in your past life, yet you don't feel any desire for revenge. If you say it's because you lost your memory, then why keep emphasizing the betrayal by your apprentice and those around you?

To be honest, the early parts were too obscure. I know you wanted to write in a classical Chinese style, but your writing was a bit... Well, too affected and pretentious, making it difficult for me to read. I don't know if anyone else in the comments section feels the same way, but shouldn't your first step in writing a novel be easy to read?

I can't keep reading it any longer; the book is so good, I finish it as soon as it's updated. Today's chapter was really interesting.

A rare gem, its subject matter breaks free from common tropes, and its plot is captivating and engaging. It's more than just a story on the surface; it possesses profound meaning and requires careful, thoughtful reading to truly appreciate its depth.

The plot is a bit slow. I've read up to chapter 163 and the protagonist is still only at the third realm. Can you please stop suppressing his combat power?

The later parts just didn't feel as amazing as the earlier ones, sigh.