Supreme Void

At first when I saw it on Douyin, I thought it was just an ordinary slap-in-the-face article, but later I found out that the more I write, the better it gets. Although there are problems in some places, overall the flaws are not concealed! I just hope it can be updated faster. Thank you for your hard work.

I quit, I really can't hold on any longer, I only paid for charity, this is not as good as my composition, what is the plot about? I really don't want to talk about you, the saint is so boastful, what is the protagonist's strength? I won't say much, almost all rely on weapons and props, the protagonist's only useful soul and physical strength , I write about the protagonist's return every day, the lovesickness in the harem, if I have the time, it's better to think more about the plot so that I can write it well, instead of writing about the protagonist who is in heat. Every time I come back, there are almost all of them (I know everything). I have already wondered whether you are sexually repressed, and I don't want to waste money. Oh, I don't know what you are doing when you write all this. Are the supporting characters idiots? The Seven Monkeys of Luan Gu are also the Blood Marquis of Luan Gu. Others have become wiser. The protagonist almost dies every time. The Three Disasters of the Sage. The Seven Marquises of Luan Gu are not casual seconds. The protagonist takes a boundary weapon and a few Heavenly Pills and gives them to Luan Gu. The Seven Lords were beaten like this, with such a big difference in strength. When you wrote it, did you think it was possible? In the second calamity state of the sage, the ancient seven lords could be easily destroyed in an instant. In the third calamity state of the sage, the saint was captured with remaining health, and the Dao slave was killed when he broke through the saint 😅

The beginning is too vicious. In order to have so many dramas about marrying a woman, the heroine also allowed her stepmother to do all kinds of tricks and slapped her in the face with all kinds of mindless tricks. It was really written for the purpose of forcibly turning over and over again. The logic is not self-consistent at all, and it is too difficult to stretch 🤐🤐

I've sorted it out and changed my thinking. I'm a little tired from fighting and killing every day. With so many harems, I can write about the Love Sect and develop the sect. The characterization of the characters is not just about flirting, teasing and fighting. Without the support of emotion and love, it feels very hollow. For example, Xu Youran is cultivating in the hell world, Master Zhenyan transforms into a god to teach the Fire Worship Cult, and has the adventure of Moon Pearl, etc. The previous ones can be mentioned in one go. Later, there is Brother Xia Chao, an angel clan, and Master Zhenyan is looking for Master Xingyuan. Don't talk about a practice like before and then disappear without any news and wait for someone to suddenly appear later. Other characters, such as Jiangshan Yipin Louzhu, Bingxin Grand Master, and the reckless man of the Temple of All Calamities, are quite successful in portraying them like Master of the Six Paths. Not only does this writing content have something to it, but the article is no longer empty, and the characters have flesh and blood as soon as they appear. If you don't write about a person who suddenly appears, it's not mysterious, it's abrupt and emotionless.

，，，， If you don't have a masterpiece like "Douluo Dalu", you can't have an IP like the Third Young Master of the Tang Family. This work has the head of a tiger, but whether it has the tail of a dragon or a snake, it all depends on you. Once this work is written, it will be your masterpiece. If it is not written well and two unfinished works are completed in a row, you will be on the pillar of shame. Whether you want to turn over to the shore or continue to go into the sea is up to you. So far, you have nothing to draw from. You are dealt three Aces at the beginning, but it is the last two that determine the size of your hand.                                                                                                                     Attracted a bunch of readers at the beginning, and it was a hit at first. But because of your inactivity, the readers left, and the last work was also unfinished. God-like work? No! IP? There is a bad label hanging from the back.         ，，；IP，，！

Come on author! ! ! I am a new reader, and I caught up with the latest chapter within a week. I think this book is really, really good, and I really hope it doesn't end badly. Don't pay attention to those negative comments. I read the updates on your first two books today. Now I'm really worried that you won't write this book and it will be unfinished. Even if the progress is faster, it can be written in a short time until the hero lives happily in a small world with his wife and children. 😆

I paid money to read a novel and was tricked. The author is not authentic.

The plot has only advanced so far... Is this veteran still deceiving himself, defrauding sentient beings and defrauding money every day? Or do you want to stop updating because of your quarrel with book fans? The fact that such a despicable author is alive has nothing to do with fellow Taoists...

Alas, the author is also a human being and cannot be as cheating as the protagonist in the book. Compare your heart to your heart. Everyone who can see here likes this book. Everyone hopes for a good ending. Personal review, don't comment if you don't like it. Just be casual and follow your heart.

What's written? It's too watery. The plot is terrible. There's no logic at all. I read more than a hundred chapters and I just can't stand it anymore.

The happiest thing every day is to see new chapters, but the sad thing is to keep waiting. Every day I am thinking about what will happen next, so that I am not interested in doing other things, as if I am possessed. I can't remember the last time I felt this way. Now I have read it for the second time, but I have read it line by line, even more detailed and slower than the first time. I am afraid that after reading it for the second time, I don't know how to ease my thoughts. I hope the author will update soon and update more often, and have a good ending ('▽')

There are a lot of low-level errors in the updates almost every day. There are strings of characters, locations and realms, and wrong pinyin words. It makes people wonder what was in their minds when writing? Don't you read it after you finish writing it? The author said to update slowly and ensure quality. Is this your quality and attitude? Incredible. The usual mistakes are corrected within an hour or two after posting. Today I am preparing to counterattack my hometown in China all night long. What are you going to do 🙂

Shit, this is also a chapter? ?

Isn't it true that I didn't become a sage in the first place and could already have back and forth with the Luangu Blood Marquis? But now that I have become a sage, are I still afraid of the Three Disaster Mirrors? Is this combat power written back?

From the excitement at the beginning to the abuse of ascending to the Nascent Soul, I have read more than 900 chapters. It's addictive, but the more I watch it, the more uncomfortable it gets. The novel is very good. It's a fairy-cultivating novel for the first time. I think it will be difficult to read this kind of novel in the future. I want to know what kind of ending the author wants to see, Jiang Fan's future, and his women😄

It's just a big pile of nonsense.

This is the first time I read a novel and I can't find a way to communicate with the author, so I'll write it here. Today the author updated two chapters, give the author a thumbs up. ------- Dividing line ------ (personal suggestion) I wonder if the author can use AI to assist in the creation. I also often need to process files and write a large number of documents, and I understand the hard work of the author in coding. No matter how many words a document has, the logic and ideas it needs to express are very important. The time for coding is fixed, but the time for design and proofreading will be very long. Repetitive styles and some concrete scenes can actually be completed with AI assistance. -------End of dividing line------ I personally read words relatively quickly. It only took me about three days from the beginning to the latest chapter. This is the first novel I have followed. I have given my monthly votes to you. I hope I can stick to it and finish it. No matter what everyone says, I actually wanted to write this book because of your own support and ideas. It is difficult for your meager royalties and monthly subscriptions to meet your daily expenses. Thank you for the reading experience you have brought to me. Some of the plots in the novel really brought me a lot of happiness, and many scenes moved me a lot. As for everyone's good and bad comments, I hope the author can be normal, and I hope everyone has the same field skills as the protagonist. "The Great Dao is fifty, and the Heavenly Eye is forty-nine. The Heavenly Way still has flaws." I hope everyone will not be too demanding. Come on author, I have already charged up the money. Just waiting for your update. It seems that this monthly pass cannot be purchased separately, as many as you have are given to you. Come on!

If you don't update, I will destroy the Heaven Overlord at all costs

This book is finished 😁 I showed the introduction of this book to my friend. He took a look and said that it has more than 2,000 chapters. The monthly vote is only 2,000 per month. Is this book so good? 😍 🤭 But it is still surprising. Why are there so many filial sons voting for monthly votes?

You're updating a chapter every three days, you might as well not update it at all. Or try updating one chapter a week, I just deleted it, damn it!

It's really bad. I feel that the protagonist has no IQ, and the supporting villain has no IQ, so it's just cool. The author wants to write about an emotional relationship, but his skills are not enough and he can't express his emotions, which makes people feel very awkward. When facing Xu Yining, he has to pretend not to know her and give her resources. To be honest, if you don't know how to write, look more at Tiancan Tudou. Everyone is a riddler. Everyone knows that everyone doesn't talk about it.

Slow pace, slow updates, bad reviews

Yuanying killed several giant kings, and then the three of him and Bodhisattva killed a two-star giant king but couldn't kill him! The group was almost wiped out! When you learn two of Xu Liu's five powers, they become three, and then they become four! I was puzzled at the time, even if the Giant King is the original one, there are only four of them! There was wind and soil, and I thought I would be able to practice. As a result, after the incarnation, you write two more! The ancestral path to becoming a virtuous person will be blessed by heaven! What do you mean by being invincible below a saint! Killed a Luangu blood warrior, but couldn't show it later? How funny!

One chapter a day, whether you like it or not, it may even be ruined.

Kill the Giant King in One Day

I listened to this book when I was 24 years old and had just graduated from s b. I heard about his books from Tiema, and they were all parallel imports. I read this book on Kuaishou with some ill intentions towards the subject of cultivating immortals. At the time, I didn't think it was interesting. But as the plot developed, the author's vivid descriptions of the characters made me really see the great potential of this book. I modified the traditional outline of cultivating immortals and added some of my own ideas. It should be comparable to masterpieces such as "Sword Comes", but I feel that the conception of the protagonist Jiang Fan is not too perfect, which makes people confused. Sometimes compassionate, sometimes ruthless, this character has some conflicts. When Jiang Fan became a god, I felt that this book was fake. Everything was too logical, as if the author was like a student writing homework, making the homework ambiguous just to go out for fun. I also thought about the author's title. "Taixu Supreme" made me full of fantasy about this book, but now I don't know if it is because of my third-party software. Every important chapter will be changed to some chapters from other novels.

Just this plot, two chapters, I listened to it in a few minutes, it's a scam 😡

Yesterday's three chapters were posted together with today's and tomorrow's chapters at once, right?

Update soon. Update soon. I haven't updated in so many days. A few more chapters. Although it's a bit watery, I still want to read it. I hope there will be some exciting parts this time.

I always feel that I have read this novel before.