I Temper Myself into an Immortal in the Mortal World

The author shouldn't add those "flower vases" (characters who are merely decorative and lack substance). They generally become almost invisible later on. Ideal partners like Ling Yuling, Zi Ling, Yuan Yao, Song Yu, Yin Yue, and Bing Feng are sufficient. This isn't a harem/plant story. There's really no need to add other "flower vases"; they're prone to failing.

The three golden chapters were turned into a melodramatic soap opera, and not only were they melodramatic, they were also dragged out. What could be explained in a few sentences was stretched into several chapters.

The main character's development and progression in this book are quite good, but the romance is written in an awkward way 😅. If you're interested, you can skip the romance chapters.

Many fanfiction protagonists are eager to offer Han Li gifts, euphemistically calling it an exchange, and are actually very eager to curry favor.

Hello readers, I'm no longer a novice author. Regardless of my past achievements, I'm quite familiar with many situations. Personally, I think that having reasonable rules is essential no matter where you are. Whether it's stating the unpleasant things upfront or making it clear beforehand, it can help avoid unnecessary trouble.

Your description is a bit of a left-brain conflict; it tags you with many female leads, then explains it's not a harem story, but the content is full of women. This isn't something an average person could write. 😄

The release date for "A Mortal's Journey to Immortality" has been set! Master Yue and Master Zhong (Han Paopao's strictest father) are about to appear! 🤭

Fan Jingmei is only suitable as a sex partner to sell supplies.

Recently, a strange trend has emerged in the fanfiction community: if someone doesn't accept a woman, they're considered a gift; if someone makes a deal with Han Li, they're considered a nanny; and if someone doesn't compete with Han Li for his opportunities, they're considered an old servant. I hope that if the author sees similar comments, they won't be influenced by them. I think your book is very well written.

Shennong tasted hundreds of herbs. A very interesting story, respecting the original text. The author's writing is good, the logic is smooth, the story is novel, and the story of the Blue Star Sea and the descendants of the Heavenly Realm Wanderer is unique and original.