A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I'm the Young Sect Master of the Thousand Illusions Sect

When I saw Chapter 5, I almost died from poison. I was close to my parents in the late stage of Nascent Soul, a sect with abundant resources, and qualifications comparable to Tianlinggen. I had to travel thousands of miles to get to know Xin Ruyin, a great monk in the Qi Refining Stage 😂😂😂

This book is completely off-topic. The protagonist, a young sect leader, lives a life even more isolated than a rogue cultivator, practically a loner. Aside from his parents and a senior brother, he knows no one else. The author keeps mentioning an outline, but it feels like the writing is haphazard and disjointed.

Trading Golden Thunder Bamboo for the model worker is unrealistic. He's too cunning. Even Nangong Wan, the beautiful woman in palace attire who was granted a place in his household, wasn't given to him in the original story. Besides, the protagonist is male. It's better to find a way to sneak into his cave and kill some predatory creatures. He'll be staying in Tianxing City for decades anyway.

I don't understand. The demonic path doesn't care about this or that; might makes right. You're completely unlike a young master of the demonic path, you have no class whatsoever. Even if you want Yan Ruyan, just take her by force!

This book is going to be ruined because of a Thunder Bamboo?

Forget it, I won't read it anymore. It's such a big cheat. It has to do with Golden Thunder Bamboo and Nangong Que. Dog-licking. In this era, male dog-licking videos all have no results.

A truly comfortable way to write a fan, without relying on Han Li for any protection at all: The core principle of the world of cultivating immortals is that the strong are respected, and those with good luck and virtue live there. Time and space cause and effect are never rigid shackles.

Is this dungeon never going to end? With such good conditions, you should at least reach the peak of the Golden Core stage before you start messing around, instead of quickly advancing to the Nascent Soul stage. As a transmigrator, the protagonist must know the cruelty of the mortal cultivation world.

Okay, the dark fairy tale has been turned into a female-channel romance drama. No matter how you look at it, it smells like red fruit 🙂

Your romance writing is like a pile of shit. I suggest you read more light novels to see how other people write romance stories. So far, if you changed the names of these female leads, I wouldn't recognize them as the original characters. I thought they were all clones of the same person. They have no unique characteristics at all.