A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I'm the Young Sect Master of the Thousand Illusions Sect

When I saw Chapter 5, I almost died from poison. I was close to my parents in the late stage of Nascent Soul, a sect with abundant resources, and qualifications comparable to Tianlinggen. I had to travel thousands of miles to get to know Xin Ruyin, a great monk in the Qi Refining Stage 😂😂😂

This book is not on topic. As a young sect master, his life is more casual than a casual cultivator. He is no different from a lonely person. A young sect master knows no one except his parents and a senior brother. The author keeps saying that there is an outline, but it gives people the impression that he has not written anything. Either there is no outline or the plot arrangement is really poor. There is basically no horizontal description of the environment, and the description of family love is even more pale and tasteless. The mother only appears in three chapters and then closes it.

It is unrealistic to want to exchange Golden Thunder Bamboo with model workers. He is too stubborn. The original work didn't even include Nangong Wan, a beautiful woman in palace attire who was admitted to him. What's more, the protagonist is a man. It's better to find a way to go into his cave and hunt rabbits. Anyway, he will stay in Tianxing City for decades. It is more than enough to study the formations of his cave in advance. Or simply use golden fingers to create a treasure that spans the formation. There are a lot of elixirs and resources in his cave. During the twenty years he opened Qingzhu Xiaoxuan, he matured six of them. You can do it while he is being nurtured to seventeen or eighteen years old. Make a fortune 😏

I don't understand. The devil is in charge of you, and fists are the truth. You are not the young master of the devil at all, and you have no competition at all. Even if you like Yan Ruyan, you can just rob her.

This book will be ruined because of a thunder bamboo

This copy is not finished, right? With such good conditions, if you don't quickly advance to Nascent Soul, you will at least have to reach the peak of the Golden Core before you go out to wander around. As a time traveler, the protagonist must know the cruelty of the world of mortals cultivating immortals. The author has arranged such a big cheat for the protagonist. You don't have to be slow to develop, but at least you have to be a little bit competent. In the past, I tried to show off to the protagonist in various ways, but when Wang Chan pulled her crotch once, did you think the lesson was not enough? Your golden elixir stage has been banned by Yuanying. Although the author used a plug-in to get it back, the standard has been dropped all over the floor. You don't go back honestly, and you still want to continue to download the dungeon? Author! If you want to write a character with a strong character, then write it in a character style. If you want to write an original adventure and download a dungeon, don't arrange such a big plug-in for the protagonist in all kinds of thrills! There is a demon refining pot! Instead of arranging for the protagonist to quickly improve his cultivation and then come out with all kinds of pretense and slap in the face, an original copy will make the protagonist injured and in danger, and all the cool points in the previous dozens of chapters will be lost. When I look at the recently updated chapters, I feel that they are very fragmented! ! ! Do you know what this behavior is? You are wasting your golden time! ! ! After it was put on the shelf, a lot of time was spent on reading it, but it was all wasted by your copy! The author will talk about the most basic logic, the parents of the twin souls, the powerful sect, various plug-ins, and then come out to experience and be tortured in various ways! Author, although you can come back with the results, the process of downloading the copy is really terrible! Author, you wrote the protagonist as a buffoon supporting role like Wang Chan, did you know? Think about it, what is the difference between the protagonist and Wang Chan in the process of this copy? Overestimating one's abilities and being obsessed with narcissism! The plug-in you arranged has no effect at all! Then why did you need to describe the tree-cutting chapters in such detail? One more thing! Author, you have already arranged cheats for the protagonist, and you are still worried about Jin Lei Bamboo? When I saw that, I laughed out loud! If you have the time to write an original copy, why not arrange a few opportunities for the protagonist? No need to use plug-ins! Original copy cannot be written! The protagonist was written as a clown by you! And the protagonist is so greedy? Golden Thunder Bamboo? Is Jinleizhu a piece of shit? Don't use the golden thunder bamboo to restrain the devil as an excuse. Can't plug-ins provide a way to restrain the devil? Can't the opportunity of an original copy provide a way to overcome the evil ways? Do you have to keep an eye on Han Li? Bringing two golden elixirs in the foundation building stage, calling two Taoist friends in the Qi training stage? Author, I've finished all the hard work for you. When I saw Xin Ruyin's part, I almost thought it was a female channel work! I didn't expect that there would be a female channel among the mortal cultivators and demonic forces! Author, should you be more logical in this book? No need for the demon refining pot? Is there a bottleneck in the practice of double clone plug-ins? Do you have to have all kinds of waves in the early stage of Jindan? Wave into a lump? Look at the original work, Wen Juren, and look at your Su Nu video! Please be worthy of my monthly ticket! ! !

Forget it, I won't read it anymore. It's such a big cheat. It has to do with Golden Thunder Bamboo and Nangong Que. Dog-licking. In this era, male dog-licking videos all have no results.

A truly comfortable way to write a fan, without relying on Han Li for any protection at all: The core principle of the world of cultivating immortals is that the strong are respected, and those with good luck and virtue live there. Time and space cause and effect are never rigid shackles. The protagonist travels in advance, independently develops ancient secret realms, holds the best offensive and defensive magic weapons, and has the ability to rewrite the world line. Han Li is just an ordinary monk in the big world. Whoever grabs the Sky Bottle and various spiritual materials belongs to him. There is no need to deliberately give in or actively please the other party because of his future achievements. Han Li's fate can be directly rewritten because of the appearance of the protagonist, and it is completely reasonable for the original plot to be canceled. There is no need for the author to forcefully renew the original protagonist.

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Relatively speaking, this fanfic is already very good. The atmosphere of the Qianhuan Sect in the early stage is indeed not like the Demonic Way, but the protagonist is a high-level person, and readers naturally cannot see the lives of the lower-level disciples. Later, the Ghost Spirit Sect Gathering writes about the six sects, and it feels like the author is patching it up. Qian Huanzong, and when we met Qi Yunxiao later, he pointed out that he liked Xin Ruyin, and the protagonist also encouraged him, and it was a bit like giving away the girl. And since the formation bug of Xin Ruyin was written, I happily accepted it, so that the readers are happy; and the current plot of Yanjiabao is okay now. It would be better if there are less romance plots. If the writing style does not decline after it is released, I feel that it should be a high-quality product.