The Main God's Infinite Dimensions

I've read about 40 chapters so far, and it's definitely high-quality, well-written, and has a good story—very good! However, all of this is overshadowed by the author's ornate style. Various embellishments and rhetoric are used; things that could be summarized in a sentence or two are stretched into long paragraphs, creating a sense of grandeur and mystery.

The first two chapters are pure stream of consciousness, rambling on and on, but summarizing into just a few sentences. They also keep using some strange terms and explaining the same thing over and over again. I suggest skipping the prologue and the first chapter and starting directly from the second chapter; it doesn't really matter.

It's really frustrating. Why don't these behind-the-scenes protagonists just fake their deaths and eliminate any possibility of exposure?

It's well-written, but there are too many and too varied adjectives, making it flowery and impractical. What could be summarized in one sentence takes the author two paragraphs.

I remember a description that a bullet loaded into a gun must be fired. You described many characters in great detail, but after several chapters, I didn't see any deeper connection between them and the plot. If they are just NPCs who appear briefly, then describing them too much is ineffective.

It's fine for an author to write about behind-the-scenes stories, but what you've written gives me the impression of being verbose, repeatedly explaining things in great detail, yet I still don't understand what you're explaining. It's like eating; you chew it in your mouth, then take it out to look at it, and then put it back in your mouth to eat. I only graduated from junior high school, so my explanation might not be clear. Please forgive me.

The world of A Chinese Ghost Story feels so familiar. Do they really think longtime readers wouldn't notice? Damn it, they even dare to use different aliases to run two accounts at once. You yourself said that heroes are as numerous as carp crossing a river, do you really expect readers not to see it?

This "Main God Cult" is completely baffling. The Great Sphere of Light shouldn't have any stance in the first place; a more natural progression would be one of chaos followed by gradual order. Instead, they've created a "Main God Cult" through a direct mechanical deification, which means an "official Main God" organization has emerged. 😅

Isn't the focus off-track? Over a hundred chapters have passed, and most of it is about the nation's various probes, reactions, and solutions regarding the Main God Space. These are certainly points that need to be covered, but shouldn't this much space be dedicated to them? It's a bit of putting the cart before the horse. The content of the dungeon is glossed over, and the millions of reincarnators in the real world are living peacefully. To be honest, I haven't seen any truly exciting moments.

If you don't include the most important parts of a book—the fight scenes and the moments of triumph in front of others—then I have nothing to say. These two are basically the most exciting parts of every book, except for female-oriented novels, and are the most exciting parts of fantasy novels. I've read this for so long and I've rarely seen a single decent fight scene.