The Main God's Infinite Dimensions

The writing is quite good, but there are too many adjectives, too complicated, and it is flashy. It can be written in one sentence, but the author can write it in two paragraphs.

I feel that the author's writing skills are very strong, and the descriptions are pretty good. The main reason is that the subject matter is a bit difficult to grasp, but the author's combination of things and the like are pretty good. The score should be 96+ The only flaw is the interactive line of real Li. I feel that his divinity and humanity are a bit uncoordinated. On the one hand, he is an unqualified person who did not know how to escape from that mess. The fourth level of Yuan is a bit too easy to talk about. On the other hand, the relationship between the two women mentioned earlier is about the author. I know it should not be possible, but I just feel that these two women are a little unconscious. They know it is impossible but they blush when they see it. I understand that the reality is hidden under the water, and coupled with the consciousness of farm owners, it is mainly a bit inconsistent. However, the author's handling of other aspects is incredibly strong. Is there really no previous work that I should read (laughs)

It's very well written, you must stick to it! 👍

Monthly pass at the end of the month

The first two pages are purely stream-of-consciousness. Jiligulu talks a lot and sums it up in just a few sentences. He always uses some weird nouns and explains the same thing over and over again. When reading, it is recommended to skip the prologue and the first chapter and start directly from the second chapter. It doesn't matter.

I'm really speechless. Why don't the protagonists behind the scenes just escape and directly eliminate the possibility of exposure?

I remember there was a description that the bullet loaded into the gun must be activated. You described many characters in great detail, but after a few chapters you did not see their deeper connection with the plot. If this is just a cutscene NPC, then too much description is invalid.

I have read about 40 chapters so far, and it seems that it has a strong style, a good writing style, and a good story. It's very good! However, they are all covered up by the author's gorgeous techniques. All kinds of rhetoric, things that can be summarized in one or two sentences, are written into a long paragraph by the author, full of gorgeous and inscrutable feelings. It is like looking at large clusters of flowers piled together. It looks messy and troublesome. The layout of the protagonist, the player's process, and realistic countermeasures are all hidden under these flowers! Most of it is the protagonist's thinking about himself, the exploration of the golden finger, and part of the discussion on human nature. One sentence can be followed by a long artistic description It can be seen that the author's cultural literacy is quite high. At least this paragraph must be artistic, profound, and have powerful sentences. I can't think of them, but there are too many. This is like the finishing touch, embellishment in the story, and it looks very amazing. , But I feel numb after reading it for a while. Every time I watch a paragraph, I have to spend 2 seconds to think about it and translate it in my mind. It's hard to skip it, because there may be some storyline hidden in it. Two or three of the 10 paragraphs are plots, and they are randomly interspersed! I don't know if the author will become more proficient in his techniques in the future. For me personally, it is a good book, a book that seems to make my mind buzzing, but I still don't want to put it down!

The author can write about behind-the-scenes stories, but you give me a situation where you have too many words. You are explaining it repeatedly and in detail, but you don't know what you are explaining. It's like eating, chewing it in your mouth and picking it out to look at. Then he put it in his mouth and ate it. I'm just a junior high school graduate. My explanation is not clear, so please forgive me

A Chinese Ghost Story has such a sense of déjà vu that old readers really can't tell. Damn it, you still dare to change your vest and play a dual-player game. You yourself say that the world's heroes are like crucian carp crossing the river, do you still expect readers not to notice?

This main god's religion is inexplicable. The big light ball itself should not have a position. The subsequent development is like a kind of chaos and then gradually order is better. Now it is a main god's religion directly mechanically descending. This means that an "official main god" organization has appeared 😅

Is the focus biased? There are more than a hundred chapters, most of which are about the country's various temptations, reactions, and plans for the Lord God Space. Of course this is something that needs to be written, but it won't take up so much space, right? It's a bit of putting the cart before the horse. The contents of the copy are briefly mentioned, and the millions of reincarnators in the real world are living a peaceful life. To be honest, I didn't see anything cool.

If you don't write about the most important parts of a book, the fight and the appearance of the saint in front of others, then I will have nothing to say. These two are basically the best parts of every book, except for female comics, they are basically the best parts of fantasy books. You are surprised that after watching this movie for so long, I have rarely seen a remarkable fighting and fighting part. There is also the part about appearing before others, but you haven't written any of it, basically you haven't written anything about it. If you continue to stick to your writing method later on, and leave all your self-motivated writing methods alone, then I guarantee I will not let you make much money from this book. You probably won't even be able to write the next 300 chapters.

I'm really happy that someone else is writing about the main god, but I can only say that it's been too chaotic so far. It really feels like I'm writing whatever comes to mind, and I even keep changing the perspective of the supporting characters. It's really uncomfortable.

When writing novels, don't include realistic content, as this can easily lead to overturning.

It looks a bit like the main god's avenue, but it's a little watery.

I looked at the one before it was put on the shelves, and it was okay. I just felt that the death penalty was too light. Let's just delete it without saying the mission failed. But there should be some attribute deductions, otherwise everyone can grind up the level by playing games.

Why does this author always call the protagonist "someone"? By Chapter 6, I didn't even remember the name of the protagonist. This description perspective doesn't give any sense of substitution.

The rest is okay, but the beginning is too confusing to understand. Easy to persuade

If there are no casualties in the early stage of the main god stream, then the exchange table only provides skills input such as Mandarin level, English level, French level, driving level, cooking level, various martial arts and other skills, and nothing extraordinary is given. The reincarnator will be grateful based on these alone. Therefore, no matter how hard the main flow of spiritual power is pumped, it will still be a loss.

The main road to the gods, other things are barely acceptable, but the way those gods speak is too rough, really too rough, and the earthy smell comes from the pavement.

Thanks to the netizen "National First-Class Art Retreat Master" for the kind gift of the character picture. ——In the evaluation of a sea tiger book friend, it is probably "the sunset of the great commander of hell, and the hairstyle of Oga the killer whale".

The author should write more copies. It's really painful to watch the fight in the real world, but copies are much more interesting.

Same way of writing, same water

The author's book is very good, but the wording is too cumbersome. Things that could be explained in one sentence must be divided into several sentences. Now I wonder if you are just talking nonsense?

After reading it, the biggest problem with the author is that he likes to make simple things complicated, which makes people tired. Reading novels is just for entertainment. You also use some unfamiliar vocabulary, which seems to be intermittent and incoherent, which is uncomfortable.

I have read Chapter 159 so far. After getting over the chatterbox in the first few chapters, I can feel that the writing is getting better and better. I personally feel that what attracts me is that there are fewer shots of the protagonist in the back, and more shots of other group characters are more interesting. But what I am more worried about is that the author will add emotional drama to the protagonist. I really think that the protagonist in this kind of main god space novel should be more like an off-site engineer, but not too much of it. Ps. I hope the author can add some cruelty of in-game competition and real-life confrontation scenarios between superpowers. I think they are both good and refreshing points. 🌹I hope the author will write better and better, and I have already ordered and recommended monthly tickets. Come on👏

Instead of writing 100 photos from 100 perspectives, you'd better write 100 photos from one perspective, with the main character interspersed between them. Otherwise, your idea will be easily thrown away. Unless your writing is very good, just pretend that I didn't say it.

The choice of the subject is wrong. According to the author's writing, he should choose the one behind the scenes of the spiritual energy recovery. The focus is on the development of the country. There are too few descriptions of the reincarnations in the dungeon or the confrontation and cooperation between the reincarnations. It would be quite suitable to change to the spiritual energy recovery.

Will you die if you fail the mission? Don't tell me about that holy scripture again. There is no price for gaining power!