Lord of Dreams, Both Real and Illusory, Beginning After Death

Evolve a rule about computers, and then the rule can be loaded onto a ghost that can return to reality so that the ghost can go to reality. Connect the network cable to the dead space, so that the protagonist can go out through the network cable?

Author, could you please stop posting that Down syndrome emoji in the comments? It's the first thing I see when I open a comment.

The protagonist has the resources to create a "Dream Network" and can also build a Dream Network financial system and develop a Dream Network virtual currency! The protagonist possesses the potential to become a dimensional demon god in the dream dimension, and can even learn the methods of Marvel demon gods, lending his own dream power to others, then creating a framework system for spell…

I've subscribed to the whole thing and I've reached the latest chapter, 406. Newcomers, hurry up! The quality was good in April, but started to decline little by little after June when it became more realistic. After the introduction of the bizarre in July, it became nothing more than a stereotyped story. The main characters were just background figures, and the group portraits were also stereotyped, basically turning into a monotonous account of each character's words.

There are more than 100 pictures. Does it describe what changes the protagonist has made in the world? If you want to stay behind the scenes first, you should write about the changes that the protagonist brings to the world, and then how the supporting characters adapt to the times and rise. You can only write a few sentences about the background, but the characters are very flat and hollow, and they cannot stand up at all.

Is there really no one in the comments section who wants to complain? Are there even any real people here?

Just a small suggestion: the protagonist could use multiple aliases, pretending that there are other forces in Dead Space, and having the newly formed organization perceived as a well-established, powerful organization would be a satisfying element.

I've read over ten chapters, and it's all dreams and death scenarios. If the real world hasn't appeared yet, the author could introduce a little bit of that, weaving it into the plot, but not too much. Also, the plot is being interspersed a bit too quickly and frequently; it can be tiring to read after a while. That's something to keep in mind.

So far, the plot has flowed quite smoothly, but the more I read, the more problematic the power levels seem to become. There are no bottlenecks; the protagonist and his subordinates break through as soon as they have enough energy, with the energy automatically compressed. Then, when the protagonist uses his abilities, the recovery time is the same as the energy consumed during leveling up.

It gets worse and worse. What kind of garbage is this? If you can't write, go back to farming! What kind of fantasy novel have you written? Hundreds of chapters and it's all the same formula. Are you even trying to create a setting? There's not a single exciting plot point, just the daily lives of supporting characters. After writing for so long with no results, don't you have any self-awareness? At first, I thought your book was novel, but is it all just self-indulgence now?