Yuanshi Golden Seal

I have been reading the author's books for several years, and I like "The Great Road Alone" the most. Personally, I think Alone is one of the best fairy tale books to start with. Most of the books written by the author after being alone gave up after just one paragraph. I hope this book will bring joy.

The protagonist, Goldfinger, is rewarded for doing good deeds, generally rewarding the opponent's abilities or evolving magical powers (randomness). In the early stage, he directly killed a beetle demon, which basically drained the opponent's abilities. 1. Setting: Personally, I think it is very flawed. The golden finger is a bit unclear. The number of rewards depends entirely on how the author arranges them. There is no room left for readers to expect. At the same time, because it is too easy to obtain, there is not much sense of expectation. 2. Plot: The beginning of a classic fake crisis, the dungeon in Chapter 7, the sense of expectation is not strong: 1. The promotion of the protagonist is very casual, and there is no pleasure of promotion; 2. The setting of punishing evil and eliminating demons is completely based on Goldfinger. It feels that the protagonist is a Goldfinger driven person, and the characteristics and charm of the protagonist as an independent personality cannot be seen. The child plot is establishing the character, but it is still driven by Goldfinger; 3. It emphasizes how many days later you will encounter the most powerful murderer, and you need to accumulate strength, but it does not reflect the sense of crisis, because the protagonist Goldfinger is too big and looks too strong; 4. Goldfinger and the plot are scattered and confusing, and there is no connection. It seems to be written in detail against the outline, and spliced directly, and I feel that I write where I think. 3. Recommendation: If you can accept the golden finger setting and some of the logical disharmony in the first three chapters - murders occur frequently in society but there is no sense of crisis, the number of dead people is too abstract, and these supporting characters have no sense of existence after the protagonist recruits abilities from fellow students in the academy. There are obviously several supporting characters with very strong abilities, as if they have been deliberately forgotten - if you are not interested in these, you can read it, if you can accept the narrative, you can read it, maybe some of the problems I mentioned will be explained later.

Too bad, if such a beautiful book is allowed to continue to be serialized, other authors will be crushed! I want to kill the author forever...

A fly poops, a bit like a dog 🤓

Two heroines? 😍😍😍

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Nowadays, the author makes the protagonist bigger and bigger. The first few old books, are they so big? They are completely out of balance. How long can they write?

This level is really impressive. It's almost 200 chapters. I still practice Qi.

Novels are about telling stories, not just explaining creative ideas such as skill integration and so on. It would be a pity to abandon them if they are tasteless.

This small town student + magical power to reward good and punish evil really has a sense of immediacy like Excalibur and The Great Way. I hope Wu Da's book can achieve great results again.

New book development: I hope this book can match the same exciting, exciting and magical continuation as Taiyi. Come on! 😃

There are a lot of settings, a lot of introductions, and the plot is promoted in one go. Even if you don't care about your grades, you still care about the readers who like you.

Why is it so messy? The writing is messy, the plot is messy, and the setting is messy.

Is it my imagination or is the writing style of this book a bit strange?

This book should be more stable and don't mess up anymore.

I can't stand it. The author has a good idea and writing style, but I just don't understand why the character is like this. Even if he is killed and his family is destroyed, he still has to avenge unrelated people. Do you want your whole family to do so? What would we normal people think if we had such a relative? Would we support it or would we wish we didn't have this person? Three views are so upright and justice is invincible, so why should the organization that attacked the city with sea monsters and killed his parents and a large number of people need to be eliminated even more? As a result, he dragged it on just to make a small profit. After he woke up, he only got rid of the accomplices. He and the culprit, the Holy Son, had to live two lives together, and they refused to take action. They refused to fight back until they kept trying to kill him...

I have read several books by the author, such as Walking Alone, Achieving Enlightenment Overnight, and Time, etc. To be honest, the setting is very complete, the world is grand, and I like the character of the protagonist very much. But can the author not only think about enriching the top settings, combat power and world view of divine power, miracles, superpowers and Taoism; but spend a little time to enrich the basic things, such as detailing the training process of superpowers, spells and magical powers to increase the sense of immersion!!! Now there are piles of top settings, and the basic design is basic No, it's the same every time I practice: as soon as my mind changes, magical powers come out naturally; just like a pyramid, with the top at the bottom and the base at the top, it looks too empty😭 I once again recommend that the author greatly enriches the basic settings, refines the upgrade process, reduces the protagonist's cheats, and makes the writing longer🙏🙏🙏

It's too messy, the system is too complicated, it's all over the place and it's all a waste of world settings.

Now the more I read this book, the less interesting it becomes. It is like a piece of chicken ribs. It seems confused and foggy. If it continues like this, it will become a eunuch sooner or later, because the author himself is in a state of confusion now.

The more I write, the more boring I become. From now on, the quality of Taiyi's books will become worse than the last.

You can go and take a look at Bizhan 😏

Why downplay Xian Qin? As a reader who reads the first book, Xian Qin is the first point that attracts readers, but then Xian Qin disappeared.

Did the author go to Chen Diao Temple to report? Eunuch again. It's really hard to describe the author's works. The overall trend has been declining since Xian Ao. Dao Duxing was good at the beginning and middle period but fell apart in the later period. The author of Taiyi always wanted to add some new elements when writing books. Taiyi is this product but it is not very good. The overall quality is not as good as Dao Duxing. The latest one is the original golden chapter. There is no main line, no goal, and a simple stack of skills and magical powers, which makes people look confused, confused, and foggy. In fact, the author's setting ideas are very good, but his level is getting worse and worse, and he is less and less writing in a good direction. If everyone has the level of Xian Ao, let alone a big hit, at least he will not let down the expectations and support of readers.

It has a sense of déjà vu at the beginning of A Walk Alone! Rewarding good and punishing evil also appeared, and the protagonist was still Luo Xing. It was like going back in time, and I felt a little emotional for a while. It would be nice to really be able to turn back time!

It is said that this is a precursor to the sea monster attacking the city, called fish scale red glow!

Three people and one bun

I never wrote about the feeling of Xian Ao again. The stall was very big at the beginning, and then it ended very abruptly.

In addition, the current system is too huge, and experienced readers are easily impatient and can't stand it anymore. It is recommended to reduce the protagonist's skill set.

Although I haven't read much, it's only about a hundred chapters, but I want to say, brother, you have just reached the first big realm and haven't reached perfection yet. You have dozens of skills to kill one of those divine catchers. If I open TM with so many skills, you still need to stack buffs infinitely, or cross the realm to kill people. And now you are one major perfection short of the ninth level of body training, and then you directly skip the entire Qi training, and then cross the entire foundation building to the foundation building perfection. One shot to the seriously injured foundation building perfection, you are so weak. Is your combat power so weak? Doesn't it mean that the golden elixir will easily kill the low-level gods?

I saw the 600th chapter of Golden Elixir. I read the push message today and saw that after the 800th chapter, I cut it directly to Yuan Ying. Do I dare to continue to pursue your books in the future? 😅