Walking Alone on the Great Dao

What the hell are the protagonists? They fall in love with each other when they see each other. It's so disgusting.

I have read Xian Ao before and thought it was pretty good. This time I ordered Chapter 100 of Dao Xing Alone, but I couldn't stand it as soon as I got to the VIP chapter. After holding back and looking at it again, I finally figured out what the problem was. The protagonist in the Qi refining period often interacts with people who are golden elixirs, Yuanying, and gods. Others are very disrespectful. How does the protagonist survive? Are everyone else fools? It feels really uncomfortable to watch! Is it a cultivator or a city? All kinds of random thoughts

There are still dozens of chapters to go before I finish reading it. Regardless of the advantages or disadvantages, I will summarize them all together. First, a mature and magnificent world setting. It can almost be regarded as the master of fairy novels in recent years. Within a relatively stable framework, various small worlds, ruins, and blessed places and caves are added to make the entire world rich and unified in structure. The Novice Village settings are reasonable, and the Ascension map settings are reliable. It can be said to be the biggest advantage of this book that it not only draws on the strengths of many writers, but also closely follows the mainstream without being too deviant and unconventional. Second, the complicated and gorgeous cultivation system. The diversity of the cultivation system in this book can be ranked at the forefront of Qidian's fantasy works. There are a wide variety of cultivation methods and various cultivation results. No matter what the reader has thought of or unexpected, whether they like it or not, all kinds of cultivation systems are included. Whether it is the breathing, comprehending, absorbing, refining, destiny gambling, etc., There are representative cases. This makes the book's cultivation system huge and complicated. Later, even the author could not control it. In the end, the male protagonist had nothing to practice. But in the end, when we got to the final stage of Gong Shen creation, when we needed to move from art to Taoism, from science to philosophy, we didn't handle it very well, because there were too many enlightenment-type practices in the beginning, and it would be unattractive to do it later. But what if it doesn't happen in the later stages of practice? 😜 All in all, the author was very diligent in building the cultivation system, and even wrote a lot of scriptures to fill in the content, which made many relevant chapters very watery and attracted a lot of criticism. These are the prices paid for this, but it is obvious that the author has a firm attitude and wants to create in the direction of classics, so he did not give up his persistence in this aspect throughout the early, middle and late stages. 3. High enthusiasm for creating a cultural atmosphere. The most obvious ones are of course the poem number system and the description of local landscapes. I don't know if the poem number system was created by the author or borrowed from other works. Anyway, I worked very hard on it. In the early stage, I even recited the poem number in the dialogue too frequently in an attempt to form a fixed and distinctive style. It even seriously affected the normal atmosphere of the character dialogue. It took many chapters to correct this problem after I probably received too many criticisms. However, corresponding to the integrity of the poem number system, the author has exposed his low literary literacy, because all the poem numbers copied from ancient poems are perfect, but the poem numbers that have been modified by the author and the poem numbers that use the author's original verses have serious shortcomings. The author is neither able to do a rigorous confrontation, nor is he very perfunctory or confused about the rhythm. The full score is only about 2 to 3 points out of 10. This is a sign of cowardice. He exposed this big flaw inadvertently, or completely undetectable due to his level, which is a bit ridiculous. However, the author's diligence is still worthy of praise. At least for most of the poem titles, he carefully found ancient poems with corresponding meanings. The large number of excerpts from the scene description part also reflects the author's serious attitude. 4. The plot design is relatively average. Compared to the excitement of the overall frame, the plot arrangement can be regarded as a very crotchless deduction item. The most typical ones are the problem of the intelligence-reducing halo and the problem of the author's own setting. The halo of intelligence reduction appears too frequently, and the reduction is seriously illogical. Characters in the book do things that normal people would never do, or characters in the book that normal people can definitely think of do but cannot think of. This aspect does not need to be explained with examples. It will be clear after clicking on it and reading the chapter review. The most egregious thing is that sometimes the intelligence-reducing halo can attack indiscriminately. It doesn't make sense that the male protagonist can be defeated without any reason, because normally the intelligence-reducing halo is unavoidable, but it is usually used in plots where he is pretending to be a slap in the face. It is the villain's intelligence that is degraded. But if you just want to promote the plot-it may not be a very important plot, it is a bit excessive to reduce the intelligence of the male protagonist. The reason is actually that after the author designs the subsequent plot, he no longer logically prepares and handles the current plot details, which is the so-called abrupt transition. Whatever the author needs the male protagonist to do next, he has to do it, and he has to do it, just make up any reason, whether it is to lower his intelligence or read a book, he doesn't even bother to make up a reasonable reason. It got a little better in the later years. Of course, it may be because I've gotten used to it after reading millions of words and it doesn't matter. 5. Poor writing skills. Writing proficiency cannot be improved by doing good excerpts and doing it carefully. As mentioned before, the author's poor literary quality is in ancient poetry. In fact, the author also has problems in choosing words and sentences. Apart from anything else, the misuse of just one exclamation point already shows its childishness. It can be said that the exclamation mark is the second most used punctuation mark in this book (the first is the comma). Even someone can say two or two exclamation points "indifferently", which makes readers have to marvel. Many word errors can be seen as the author simply does not understand a certain word or its meaning, rather than a lack of proofreading or a careless proofreading. This lack of Chinese knowledge is indeed somewhat serious. There is also a very fascinating universal character action "take a breath", which is completely unintelligible. It is used in this way anyway. It is applicable to all environments, all moods and all characters without distinction like the exclamation mark. There are numerous other small shortcomings. For example, the mix of classical Chinese style and Western fantasy arias in the chanting method is also suffocating. I don't know how to evaluate it at all. I can only say that the author sometimes doesn't know where to copy it. The prayer method does not have to be copied from the great Western fantasy God, please do what you want. I guess he doesn't know where to find the Chinese version... 6. The emotional part is better than nothing. Although there are several female characters who have some bonds with the male protagonist, in fact, it can be regarded as a book without a female protagonist, because the description of emotions in this book is very rough and general, and it is far less concerned with the content of the male protagonist's training and upgrading, probably because women will only affect the speed of the male protagonist's recitation of spells 😁 In short, this book... Can be read in general, because of the big framework and the big plot direction is still very interesting. However, given that there are too many excerpts, as well as too many descriptions of pure training details and combat details that do not contain effective plots, it is not recommended for non-member readers to purchase paid chapters - there is too much water, and it is a bit wasteful. However, if you are a member, you can feel free to do so. Like me, you can read the training and combat content at a glance to see the results. But if you have high requirements for the writing level of the work, forget it, because the exclamation marks and grammatical errors mentioned above may ruin your mood, but you can get used to it after reading too much 😜

Isn't it a lonely road? Selling dog meat for sale!

Hey, I heard about it from other book circles. I came here to take a look. Who did the author offend? The book circles are full of bad reviews. I remember that this book was well written.

How do I remember that the protagonist died wherever he went, and almost destroyed his sect wherever he went? He was known as the Lone Star of Heaven😥

This book should be the pinnacle of Jiangshan's work, and the subsequent books are not as good as the others.

It seems that I can't stand it anymore. I read hundreds of chapters, eat, drink, chat, and practice the exercises every day. Every word is written in such detail and clearness. Do you want readers to practice? ? ? My monthly vote was wrong! ! ! ! ! Can you speed up the storyline a little bit? ? ? ? ?

This book... Is just one breath away from being a classic. It has rich settings and rich imagination. However, the author has developed poor writing habits in order to reduce the number of words. For example, he keeps repeating a few words of psychological description, and the character dialogue is too simple and resembles a blank text... The plot setting is constantly repeated, the protagonist's personality is not distinctive enough, and it is full of stupidity... Many of these problems seem to be caused by the author's lack of care, and he can only do what he can. It can only be said to be a pity...

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