Clan Cultivation: First, Claim a Plane as Our Foundation

The writing is pretty good. Author, don't think about how to make up for some early plots and follow the track of traditional fantasy novels. Can you get past those old guys? Only when you write something unique of your own will people read it. There are many articles about family cultivation of immortality in Qidian. They start from Qi training and 100-card foundation-building ones. There are already too many repetitive works. Some authors have tried your writing method before, but I remember they always cut the book and ran away before reaching 100 chapters. (I forgot the title of the book) Why doesn't it become popular? First, because the writing is not grand enough, and the princes are written like common people. In addition, it is written that if you turn into a branch line and cannot get out, readers will naturally run away if you do not enter the main line for a month. I have always believed that the middle stage of a work is when the author's skills are revealed. The plot in the early stage is too uniform. When you see a chapter title, you can tell which template he will use in the next dozen chapters, and I have no interest in reading it. By writing directly from the mid-term, you can skip the formulaic early stage. Start directly with the mid-term climax to attract readers. In short, I still have to persevere in fantasy writing and set a small goal first to write 1 million words. Come on, author💪

I'm so nervous that there are no book reviews. I want to give you some comments and suggestions...

Sometimes this fight, sometimes that fight, and then there is no development of the plot, it will feel very boring, and people will have no desire to listen anymore. Personal opinion

I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I still have 11 chapters left to finish. I have a few doubts. You have finished fighting the Canglan world. It has been several decades, right? How many people do you have in your family? What do you think? I was attracted by the title and introduction of your book. It gave me the feeling that if you want to have a family farming, then you need to vigorously cultivate the family, especially the population. At present, you only have a son, a daughter, and a grandson? What kind of plane are you doing? Look at Luo Feng. How big is the population of Chaos City? With your subject matter and background, do you think you are a small family? Slowly develop the population? It must be vigorously developing the population, and then selecting and cultivating the talented ones. It's not that you don't have the land to support it, and it doesn't mean that you need to write about the family's population growth in a large space. You just need to describe it in a few paragraphs every once in a while, right?

It's very interesting, but I don't know why it's so difficult to read. The dyslexia is too great. Maybe there are a lot of bad sentences? There are still too many rare words

Looking at the name, it is a family stream, and I see that there are some signs now. It should be a plot in which different family members are dispatched from many planes in the later stage; In fact, I am not disgusted with the fighting plot at the beginning, but it is a bit too much. The flesh and blood corroding the lower-class natives is a good point to watch, but it does not need to be too detailed and detailed. Choose a city and write down the impact, and then you can quickly skip it. Even if the fighting scene is strong, you can kill multiple times in one stroke, and it must be clean and neat. Author, if you want to write about family history, the time should be accelerated, and the details should be appropriate. Like the previous story about the friendship of two children, and the side story of the changes in the domain after decades, it is very well written. Then the introduction of human society is slowly unfolded, and the overall book is still very good. Then there is the sick sentence I mentioned earlier, or it may not be a sick sentence but the repeated words really affect the perception. In the end, Goldfinger seems not to adapt to the family flow? Or is it not big enough? But it's okay to be small, it's suitable for new authors, just take your time. Finally, all the above problems have a perfect solution, and that is update! Two updates a day is a great product! Three updates a day and top the monthly vote list! Four updates a day and you are the next demon! The premise is to maintain the current rhythm.

I have a few questions ❓ Doesn't this mean developing a family? Why did you take three people and have two children with one person, and then the third generation comes out, and then the people who live with Poria and Yu Zi An are not the same as the younger ones. It's chaotic. There are only three people in more than a hundred chapters. The development of this family is slow.

I'm still raising them, but there are too few, not enough to look at. It is also recommended that the author should have a focus when writing. Whether to write more about plane wars or family children depends on the data. If it is too average, it will have no characteristics, the data will not look good, and the possibility of eunuchs is greater.

I'm curious to ask. Multiple female protagonists, no emotions, a family of cultivators, how do these things come together? Will anyone really read this kind of introduction? At least 80% of people will be dropped by your profile. There are many female protagonists who are mainly about relationships, except for Bulldozer. You don't have any feelings anymore, you've got a stupid cultivating family, I really want to complain about it.

Has been read until it is available. The impression is that I held a few meetings, fought a few fights, recruited a few Taoist companions, owned a piece of land, practiced a weapon, and sold dozens of mines and some trees. There are indeed not many emotional scenes, but the author seems to describe them too much in order to portray several Taoist monks. It feels like a mass flow, with an inexplicable sense of indifference. I'm a little hesitant, should I take the plunge?