Hogwarts’ Study Panel

Of all HP fanfics, Quidditch is the least meaningful. If you spend a lot of time writing about Quidditch, it will be no different from water.

In the first chapter, I felt a little uncomfortable. Professor McGonagall helped you. You could help her clean up the dust, or just to show off your abilities. But saying "dust can't be on your head" felt like it was too much. It was a bit uncomfortable.

You probably don't need that many Galleons. I remember when the Weasley family went to get the money, they described that the entire cabinet was scanned, and there wasn't a single Galleons, it was all Sickles. And the winning number is only 700 galleons. It must be a big number to be included in the newspaper.

Is the author from a female channel? But overall it's pretty good. It would be better if I didn't feel aggrieved. I hope the author realizes that it is a man's duty to work hard, and there is no need for others to think that the protagonist is wronged.

After Chapter 500, the plot is very fragmented. I can barely watch it. It's too literary and youthful. I won't mention the character of the protagonist. What's most unbearable is that the protagonist is still an instant boy. When I read the original novel, no wizard has ever run out of mana, and no wizard has ever knelt down after casting only one spell. From the beginning to now, it's so disgusting. It wouldn't matter if it's just garbage. I prefer to eat food mixed with shit.

After reading a few pictures, I feel a bit gay. Is there a problem with the author's description?

The more I look at it, the weirder it gets. It's a bit gay, and I feel that Justin's role is too high, and it overshadows the male protagonist. Of course, the most important thing is that he is gay. The comment is not about friendship. Why is the male protagonist young as a student, and the protagonist is young, and the author is also young.

Well-written, emotional words that always touch the heart. The writing style should be slow-burning, and the focus should be on life, not magical ideas. However, the stakes are not small. If the talents are stacked at the beginning, the advantage will snowball and the advantage will get bigger and bigger, and the combat power may expand rapidly (it is only possible, depending on how the author arranges it). If you don't like it, you can return it quickly.

I haven't read the book yet, so let me ask first, is there a female protagonist? This matter must be asked clearly 🤓

Compared to playing Quidditch like a fool, practicing magic or taking a rest are things that should be done more. This character doesn't fit in with Quidditch at all.