Real History Simulation Game

You think it's exciting, so is it possible that you chose the wrong subject? In your own introduction, you wrote about the Qing Dynasty, the late Ming Dynasty, Water Margin, and Immortals and Buddhas. This is what I fear the most. The rhythm is very long, and then it ends in an anticlimax. If you write such a long copy, you will almost lose a lot of readers in the next copy. What you are attracting now is not the dungeon type reader at all, but the half dungeon, half reborn urban type. Once the urban dungeon is completed, there are no new readers to add, and the urban readers leave again, then your book is not far away from a real explosion.

The author must have stayed in the ivory tower for too long. Many human contacts are overly idealistic. And the eyes are shining with gold at every turn. Too abstract.

First of all, this book is well written, but this is Zhutianwen, and the highlight is Zhutian. To put it in a nicer way, your first world is well written. We are all looking forward to your second world, but your second world has never appeared, and people have been hanging on to it. To put it in terms of cultivating immortality, it means that you have been practicing Qi. During this period, you have done everything from exploring, killing monsters, making talismans, refining elixirs, making friends, etc., And every small plot and snippet is well written, but you just don't make a breakthrough. Under normal circumstances, you should break through about three small plots (Zhutianwen will have more, but this is a bit too much), and then go to see a bigger world, a broader world. But it's already two hundred chapters, and you're even thinking about the protagonist getting married and having children, starting a business, building a family and making it prosperous, etc. It's too procrastinating. To put it bluntly, if you read a lot of novels, you will basically find that the core logic of the routines is the same, but the outer skin is different. Some things that you think are very detailed and good, but once there are too many of them, in our opinion, it is just a watery story, and the subsequent process is probably that the perception becomes worse → the order is skipped → it is not smooth; the perception becomes worse again → it grows → it dies. Maybe one day it will reach the top ten or twenty of the rankings and I will come back to read it. Otherwise, there is a high probability that this book will really be considered dead. I have been reading novels for several years. To be honest, this novel seems quite comfortable and well-written. When I first read it, I thought that the first world should be finished in about 150 chapters, and then it should be able to reach 10,000 orders. Unexpectedly, it is more than 200 chapters and it is not finished yet.

This book reminded me of another book under the banner of All Heavens, in which the main character is addicted to being a eunuch in a world.

There are tens of thousands of players in a world, and there are still players who have information about the future. They have already messed up. Even if they all abide by the rules, the economic impact alone will mess up the market, let alone the political impact brought by the economy.

Get rid of the labels "Infinite Stream" and "All Heavens and Worlds", and concentrate on writing this business stream, otherwise the data will definitely drop when you open the second world.

At the beginning, I thought it was about the infinite flow of the universe, but it turns out that you have written almost 2 million words, and the second world has not yet ended. Based on this writing method, I estimate that by the time you finish the book, you will have to write five or six worlds. I am completely immersed in the indigenous world. I have not mentioned the real world I wrote before. I cannot understand what the protagonist wants to do. The dungeon is too long. If I open a new dungeon, it will be very disconnected and completely irrelevant.

First time writing a book review. The author of this book has strong writing skills and a strong sense of storyline. The first volume, the Soviet Union, has an unconventional opening chapter and introduces the main plot in an understatement. I read other book reviews and said that this book is too long for one volume. I would like to say that the author of this book has a sense of importance and the plot advances steadily, without being superficial or exaggerated. Borrowing the comments of other book friends, it does have the qualities of a great master. Let's talk about the second volume. The background of the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom in the second volume is unfamiliar to me. For historical texts, unfamiliarity means that it is difficult to relate to it. In addition, it is not finished and there are many negative reviews on the book. I really hesitate to continue reading. But out of recognition for the first volume, I chose to continue reading. The first few chapters were indeed difficult, and I read them intermittently for three or four days before finishing them. After getting familiar with the background and some historical figures, the picture the author laid out for readers suddenly became clear. The more I read, the stronger the taste, and the more I read, the more I couldn't stop reading. At the same time, I was deeply impressed by the author's confidence in his writing power, his courage to write historical group portraits, his courage to write about non-mainstream historical backgrounds, and his courage to write about the endless wars between heroes. Let me share. Before I wrote this short review, I was reading Unified Fujian. At that moment, I suddenly recalled the excitement I had when I was a child when I read the Three Kingdoms. So I wrote this short review and donated all my monthly votes. I hope the author will not be a prisoner and this book will get better and better.

In the middle of the night, I was really convinced. After waiting for so long, the first volume is finally over. I have been waiting for Kuibyshev to be emptied out after the collapse of the Soviet Union. This should be the most satisfying episode so far. The result? ? ? Didn't you even mention it? Cleaning up the mole, three paragraphs: knowledge, cleaning up, and specific arrangements, I finished it, I just wrote more than one chapter. I expected that Kuibyshev might write ten chapters and then end the volume, but what happened? I'm really convinced

Author, tell me, who is this old guy?