Real History Simulation Game

First time writing a book review. The author of this book has strong writing skills and a strong sense of storyline. The first volume, the Soviet Union, has an unconventional opening chapter and introduces the main plot in an understatement. I read other book reviews and said that this book is too long for one volume. I would like to say that the author of this book has a sense of importance and the plot advances steadily, without being superficial or exaggerated. Borrowing the comments of other book friends, it does have the qualities of a great master. Let's talk about the second volume. The background of the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom in the second volume is unfamiliar to me. For historical texts, unfamiliarity means that it is difficult to relate to it. In addition, it is not finished and there are many negative reviews on the book. I really hesitate to continue reading. But out of recognition for the first volume, I chose to continue reading. The first few chapters were indeed difficult, and I read them intermittently for three or four days before finishing them. After getting familiar with the background and some historical figures, the picture the author laid out for readers suddenly became clear. The more I read, the stronger the taste, and the more I read, the more I couldn't stop reading. At the same time, I was deeply impressed by the author's confidence in his writing power, his courage to write historical group portraits, his courage to write about non-mainstream historical backgrounds, and his courage to write about the endless wars between heroes. Let me share. Before I wrote this short review, I was reading Unified Fujian. At that moment, I suddenly recalled the excitement I had when I was a child when I read the Three Kingdoms. So I wrote this short review and donated all my monthly votes. I hope the author will not be a prisoner and this book will get better and better.

Let's just say it's been okay up front, right? After the stock market, the more I looked at it, the more I felt it was a bit watery, the writing was a bit literate, and the progress was a bit slow. I feel that the author can actually complete a world with more than 300,000 words. If he writes more worlds, the progress will be faster.

The second dungeon is not over yet, it takes too long, and there is a lot of AI flavor. Infinite streaming is so poorly written.

There are no big poisonous spots, but there are still many small poisonous spots. But it's understandable given that this is the author's first book. Especially in terms of character creation, it is relatively flat, especially the protagonist's various instructions that are ahead of the current world. All his subordinates can fully understand and execute them 100%. Also, in more professional fields such as medicine, the author still needs to check more information before writing it, otherwise it will look quite embarrassing and feel like he is showing off.

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So far, the writing is to my liking (coming from a 15-year old bookworm)

Good! Great read!

You think it's exciting, so is it possible that you chose the wrong subject? In your own introduction, you wrote about the Qing Dynasty, the late Ming Dynasty, Water Margin, and Immortals and Buddhas. This is what I fear the most. The rhythm is very long, and then it ends in an anticlimax. If you write such a long copy, you will almost lose a lot of readers in the next copy. What you are attracting now is not the dungeon type reader at all, but the half dungeon, half reborn urban type. Once the urban dungeon is completed, there are no new readers to add, and the urban readers leave again, then your book is not far away from a real explosion.

The author must have stayed in the ivory tower for too long. Many human contacts are overly idealistic. And the eyes are shining with gold at every turn. Too abstract.

First of all, this book is well written, but this is Zhutianwen, and the highlight is Zhutian. To put it in a nicer way, your first world is well written. We are all looking forward to your second world, but your second world has never appeared, and people have been hanging on to it. To put it in terms of cultivating immortality, it means that you have been practicing Qi. During this period, you have done everything from exploring, killing monsters, making talismans, refining elixirs, making friends, etc., And every small plot and snippet is well written, but you just don't make a breakthrough. Under normal circumstances, you should break through about three small plots (Zhutianwen will have more, but this is a bit too much), and then go to see a bigger world, a broader world. But it's already two hundred chapters, and you're even thinking about the protagonist getting married and having children, starting a business, building a family and making it prosperous, etc. It's too procrastinating. To put it bluntly, if you read a lot of novels, you will basically find that the core logic of the routines is the same, but the outer skin is different. Some things that you think are very detailed and good, but once there are too many of them, in our opinion, it is just a watery story, and the subsequent process is probably that the perception becomes worse → the order is skipped → it is not smooth; the perception becomes worse again → it grows → it dies. Maybe one day it will reach the top ten or twenty of the rankings and I will come back to read it. Otherwise, there is a high probability that this book will really be considered dead. I have been reading novels for several years. To be honest, this novel seems quite comfortable and well-written. When I first read it, I thought that the first world should be finished in about 150 chapters, and then it should be able to reach 10,000 orders. Unexpectedly, it is more than 200 chapters and it is not finished yet.

This book reminded me of another book under the banner of All Heavens, in which the main character is addicted to being a eunuch in a world.

There are tens of thousands of players in a world, and there are still players who have information about the future. They have already messed up. Even if they all abide by the rules, the economic impact alone will mess up the market, let alone the political impact brought by the economy.

Get rid of the labels "Infinite Stream" and "All Heavens and Worlds", and concentrate on writing this business stream, otherwise the data will definitely drop when you open the second world.

At the beginning, I thought it was about the infinite flow of the universe, but it turns out that you have written almost 2 million words, and the second world has not yet ended. Based on this writing method, I estimate that by the time you finish the book, you will have to write five or six worlds. I am completely immersed in the indigenous world. I have not mentioned the real world I wrote before. I cannot understand what the protagonist wants to do. The dungeon is too long. If I open a new dungeon, it will be very disconnected and completely irrelevant.

In the middle of the night, I was really convinced. After waiting for so long, the first volume is finally over. I have been waiting for Kuibyshev to be emptied out after the collapse of the Soviet Union. This should be the most satisfying episode so far. The result? ? ? Didn't you even mention it? Cleaning up the mole, three paragraphs: knowledge, cleaning up, and specific arrangements, I finished it, I just wrote more than one chapter. I expected that Kuibyshev might write ten chapters and then end the volume, but what happened? I'm really convinced

Author, tell me, who is this old guy?

Author, think about it carefully, what kind of book do you want to write? What kind of readers do you want to attract? Or to put it more directly, the reason why your current readers and subscriptions are fluctuating is because there is a problem with the selection of readers based on subject matter and type. The initial introduction of your book title seems to be of Zhutianliu style, and there will be multiple copies. But according to your previous writing method and what you want to write, it seems that it is not Zhutianliu, but urban rebirth. The two types of readers do not completely overlap. If you attract readers from all over the world and write urban content, you will definitely be criticized. Zhu Tianliu writes this, are you planning to write tens of millions of words? When writing about urban flow, you need to write in detail and add daily life to reflect your thoughts. Another thing, if you are really Zhutianliu, how do you plan to write the subsequent copies? Or urban rebirth? Or even the rebirth of history? Readers of these genres are different, with different requirements and preferences. Only after you determine the subject type and story style can you attract readers to keep reading.

I haven't started reading it yet, but the author's introduction really doesn't need to be changed. I feel that it's quite unpalatable. It feels like an ancient online novel that treats all characters other than the protagonist as fools.

Behind it, it's a mess. If you push forward along the history, isn't this Wanjie pure nonsense?

In the first map, players are like locusts and cockroaches, energetic and everywhere. The second map is all set within the same framework and does not reflect the characteristics of the players at all. It is more boring than a solo journey through ancient history.

If you clear the copy of this game, are there any rewards in reality? Why are there so many people playing if there are no rewards? The logic is very contradictory.

After reading the first copy, I felt that this book has the potential to be read thousands of times. After catching up to the latest chapter, I felt it was a bit hasty. This is the gesture of a great master. However, I still adhere to the author's previous system BUG settings. Although the general development is logically deduced, it is not important anymore. As long as things develop logically and self-consistently. This book has nearly a million words so far, but it has not received very high traffic and subscriptions. I don't know what the editor and operating officer of this book do for a living. Such a good book can be regarded as a god in one book. Don't make a big bet at this time and risk your career to gain traffic and rights for this book. How can you get promoted and get a salary increase? The higher the position, the fewer the seats. If you don't place any bets, let this book be seen by more readers. How do you get to the top? To put it bluntly, this book may not be able to compete with the masterpieces of historical literature such as Shao and Song Dynasty. If you want to get more updates from the author, you have to get more subscriptions and more traffic. Currently, the average subscription is about 5,000. Then the traffic will be increased by 10 times, and more recommendations and exposure will be given, especially by fans of historical literature. Finally, I have to admit that the author is a bad namer. The title of the work is not recognizable and cannot quickly catch the readers' attention. As long as it has a good title, it will become a hit long ago. Finally, I wish the author can become a god with this book and make a million as soon as possible.

There is no doubt that the first dungeon is at the level of a great master, but the second dungeon... Well, the storyline is there, the writing is there, but there are few people who are interested. It is best to choose some of the following stories, and at least the interesting ones should not be too far away from what everyone is interested in. The first story is good if it is refreshing, but speculation is better A possibility that everyone has imagined, although it is not good, after all, everyone is a good baby. I should not use this sentence to describe it, but it is the fact. Nine years of compulsory education has made most of us abide by the etiquette and politeness. The first thing when someone helps you, you must have a muscle reaction: Thank you! So we hope to see someone who breaks the rules and has no lower limit, but still has three views. The male protagonist, the first copy gives people the feeling that although there is no way to have normal logic, if you look closely, it is full of loopholes, but there is no doubt that it is really good. The second one is not good. I suggest not to write the third one. Obviously Let's just write about Water Margin. There is really nothing to write about in the late Ming Dynasty. It was just troubled times. The decline of a dynasty is often rotten from the inside. It is not caused by one person. It is just a person from the last generation who takes the blame. It is caused by a group of people. The more ignorant and polite a dynasty is, the more indestructible it is, and vice versa.

The later stage of the first dungeon was extremely boring, and the progress of the main career line was extremely slow. It was all about various foreshadowings and group portrait perspectives, but the positive feedback it brought when it broke out was not enough, and it was even said that it was not as good as the emotional feedback it brought when making the first pot of gold. The protagonist's figure was inexplicably buried in the group portrait perspective, yes, it was buried! The description of the supporting characters in the later stage is obviously greater than the presence of the protagonist itself. If this writing method is placed in a serious historical article, there is no problem. It is long and can be read slowly and appreciated. However, this is a multi-copy simulation article. If one copy is too late, if there is no content that can capture the reader's perspective, it will only cause a huge sense of boredom, and you may even want to skip to the second copy. Because the key to dungeon flow is that the ending of a dungeon should be compact and the plot should begin to explode, so that readers can happily and smoothly get through the tense fish tail period. Most of those classic and high-quality infinite flow articles follow this logic. But this article goes in the opposite direction. The proportion of the protagonist's perspective decreases as it goes on, and various supporting characters appear in turn, as if to create a sense of a big era, but the final presentation is not good, because in the middle period, in order to highlight the protagonist, the various supporting characters are portrayed too lowly. The final result is that it is difficult to interest and pay attention to the supporting characters under the stereotype. No matter how trendy they are later, it feels like that. There is no expectation in the front, but in order to gain recognition later, the author's writing style is obviously not enough. If this article were not of high quality in terms of writing, and the previous writing was indeed wonderful, I would really lose the desire to continue reading. However, I heard that the second copy is very exciting, and I still plan to continue to have a taste. If it is still the plot format of the first copy, then I can only say that it is really not in line with my taste. No matter how good the writing is, but the plot structure is not good, it will be difficult for people to read.

First of all, I must say that the author's writing skills are very good, the story is wonderful, the structure is reasonable, and the character description is very good. However, after all, the second copy is still being written. If you want to cover everything, the plot will not advance so fast. However, an excellent group portrait article is indispensable. There are many plots. After the plot is laid out, the role of the protagonist will be reduced, and when describing the protagonist, it is also necessary to focus on the protagonist's power itself and add a lot of side descriptions. Many readers actually don't like this writing method. What's more, the second copy is only a pure historical text without extraordinary elements, and it will screen out a group of readers. Of course, the above problems are all based on one reason, that is, the book is still serialized and has not been completed. It is very painful to follow the group portraits. It is understandable that few people read it. Maybe many people will stay after reading the first copy and wait until the second one is completed.

A copy of Dynasties of Hegemony is enough. It's long enough to write. He even planned to write about dynasties. Is it okay to vomit? Interstellar. Doomsday, fairy tale, fantasy, weird, urban. You can write so much, so don't repeat it all.

It's definitely a good book if it doesn't end badly. I couldn't stop reading it in one sitting. I gave it a monthly pass.

I have now read this article as a long historical article. Once my mentality changes, this book becomes much better. Even this update is too weak.

There is a high probability that there will be eunuchs. First, the number of updates will decrease, and then people will start asking for leave. Later, they will occasionally update a chapter. Finally, there will be almost no exceptions for eunuchs.

The book that originally consecrated the gods was written like this. . There are no updates