Everyone Roleplays: From Wuxia to Cultivation

I suggest that Li Kaixin be replaced. We ordinary people don't know the rights and wrongs, but why bother wading into muddy waters?

Can you focus on martial arts? The entertainment industry is terrible. If I want to watch the entertainment industry, I might as well go to the entertainment industry. And when I write about the entertainment industry, it's all about the crotchless ones. The more you write, the lower your subscription will be. Because their own characteristics are gone.

It seems that the author's setting is very good, but the actual logic does not make sense. One day is equal to one year in the game. Four years is a thousand years. How can the professor still be alive in the game? It is completely unreasonable.

It's so dumb, you've classified it in the wrong category, put it in the daily stream of light novels.

The combat power, golden finger, and IQ are all over the place, and the setting is also full of loopholes that make people laugh. I can't see that the protagonist's time traveling from the earth has any effect. He is no different from the indigenous people. The plot progresses slowly.

The writing is too long-winded, just like a running account. It feels like the main plot has not been developed yet, and the golden finger of the protagonist has not played any role. This book will easily die.

If one day is set and one year is set, then at least three worlds must be changed in one year. This frequency is a bit too fast. Moreover, the early settings were not rigorous, and there was no mention of unified online and offline. Later, the logout time became suspended? Which logout time shall prevail? And at such a fast rate, you can become a master even if you don't have the qualifications.

Save 100 taels of white eyes, copy them to get 200 taels of silver (cannot be copied again), exchange the silver for gold, copy it into double gold (cannot be copied again), exchange it for silver elsewhere (to prevent you from getting a copy)... And so on... It becomes the true inheritance of the Wind Spirit Moon Shadow Sect.

A lot of nonsense, like a running account, nothing interesting, the more you read, the more boring you become.

In reality, one day of playing for one year, just a time jump can produce a monster, and the result is as clear as a student who just left school, it is just a serious illness. 1:365, if you play the game for 3 years and don't collapse, you will be a thousand-year family. The previous article said that the game comes 30-40 years ago. If you take the shortest calculation, the country's power will be 20 years, which is 7300 years, which is comparable to the history of China. They are all living fossils who were in their 40s and 50s in their prime. How can they not stand up in the game? If you just look at the eyes and read the eyes, not just 100 years, but 300 years will be enough. Isn't it still a mature spirit?

1. The events are too rigid one day and one year and it is difficult to adjust later. One dungeon in three months. 16 Dungeons in four years. You can't even finish the book 2. Time issue. Unified login is too stupid, and players all over the world have to be unified to log in. 3. Why does it have to be a high-level person if you change it to professor? Are they all high-level people? It is better to change to a soul-split design, and dungeons are differentiated by size. For example, this Sanshan sect dungeon is a small dungeon that is independently managed and fully controlled by the protagonist. It is open for half an hour a day for personnel to learn and explore. When the protagonists and others finish exploring, the dungeon will be reset. The professor has high authority and will be directly re-opened to the top management. The top management who does not have complete control is to train the students. How to introduce the subsequent copies? World Fusion has a main dungeon. All the big guys are in it, and the professor is also there. But there is a split soul in the Sanshan sect. The professor is really too low-qualified, so a small dungeon is stuck. It's normal for world fusion to have friction, right? The debris from friction is considered a small copy. There is death when you first open up wasteland. If you fail, you will die immediately. You can only avoid it by having complete control. This is the upper limit. ps The author still insists that the settings are all at the back. You have so many logical flaws in the front and you still don't take the initiative to explain. Are you screening readers? ps Why do you write so much? I like this setting but there are too few people writing about it

It's all about dialogue and workplace management, I want to watch it happen! Goldfinger's presence is also very thin

Chapter 10 can't get into the main plot. I'm leaving this nonsense. My writing skills are not good enough. I'll withdraw it.

A good idea turns out to be a crappy humanistic pen! What a pity

Not pretty +111111111111111111

After reading eight chapters, the plot didn't advance at all. It was all nonsense. It slipped away.

It's too slow. I haven't seen it until now. The setting is interesting but I didn't understand it, so that's it. If you didn't get it earlier, who can subscribe?

The introduction is okay, but after reading it, it was a very boring book.

In a world where strength is paramount, the protagonist, even though he has a golden finger, still engages in gangsterism. This means going to the roadside with a golden rice bowl and kneeling down to beg for food. The author should change his career as soon as possible. He is not suitable for writing about this kind of extraordinary subject.

The king of douche, the effective information in one chapter should not exceed 20 words.

Chapter 48, casinos, brothels, loan sharks transformed into gambling, bathing centers, and online loans. But what is the difference in transformation? Just change your name! In fact, online lending is very untenable. If it is not legal, what is the difference between gambling and casinos?

The real world and the game world merge. There are many things you can write about, such as rebellion and uprising, and the industrial revolution. Big events like the technological explosion. And because the game world map is vast, it is small enough for the protagonist to farm and develop in a decent way, and plunder and develop in a villain way. But depending on your settings, this won't work, and that won't work either. Writing a novel requires a lot of rules.

This student loan setting is too outrageous. Why don't you write about Dongting with this setting? You are good at writing about the west. Domestic student loans are not so outrageous, especially the price reduction of cherished resources is the same as that of pawnshops in the old society. Is the government a Western government? How can I let you make trouble like that? There is no structural support for the worldview. Small details are leaked here and there. Many settings are inconsistent. Although they are constantly patched, they are still not rounded out.

Your start is too slow, the main plot is not included in Chapter 8, and the setting is only framed in the first few chapters. You make people run away right after the start.

It's so hard, I've read Chapter 10 and don't know what I'm writing.

After adding a female star, I don't know if it feels better or more toxic 🙂

Author, you started to get into the theme in chapter 15, which was very slow. I didn't catch the main plot. Maybe it's because I'm not good at reading, but I really didn't catch it.

It feels like a poor student writing essays, writing all about insignificant things, unable to get to the topic for a long time. Just write whatever comes to mind. It's all irrelevant to the topic and seems like a waste of time. Like the murmur of a fool

Such a terrifying time flow rate. What about the lifespan of the roleplaying character? Eternal life?

The water was in a mess and was withdrawn.